Andre Delport

Never thought of that!

1st time I'm commenting on this story - just want to say how much I' enjoying it. Only thing is I just want to get in there and strangle both of them for being so pig-headed. Want to see them admit their feelings for one another and get some real fireworks going. I don't think their relationship will ever be smooth sailing - for want of a better phrase. They are both too stubborn for that. Let's just say, I think it would be......... interesting!

With Alice having killed Rhisi - does that mean she has gained his powers. Is so - wow she really is badass!! Going to be one tough cookie!

What happened to Robert And Hugh? Can't remember reading anything! Has Devon actually patched things up with Edgar? Don't remember that either. What have I missed?

Aceinthehole, what's happened - no update of this wonderful story for more than a month. Getting withdrawl symptoms!

Sui, a blockbuster final chapter. When I saw the word count, my first reaction was 'Yessssss'!! It delivered on all the promises of this amazing story. Once again, you have enthralled and captured me with your masterful storytelling. Logan stood rock steady behind him as Leon placed his hands on the steer wheel. Logan held his hands as they steered the boat over the ocean waters. They moved fast. It was an exhilarating ride, most of all, Leon was glad to have Logan standing solid behind him. It felt as though they could face anything like this. Loved the symbolism of this phrase. Was it done intentionally? I'm sad it is over, but happy that we will one day see more of the prince and his royal guard - I look forward to it. Thank you for sharing this wonderful tale with us.

You did with Brent and Cody!!

I absolutely love this series, they make such great reading. I hope I am wrong, but why do I get the funny feeling that drama is on the way. And I mean major drama! I DON'T want to cry Bill W!!

Stunning chapter. I'm NOT going to say ending because I really want there to be a continuation, in whatever form and whoever's perspective. All I know is that I am really going to miss these guys. This book has been very special. Thank you.

Is cabins 222 and 224 not Rhol's cabins? He allocated 224 to Jordan!

Superpride - could you give us some idea when we can expect the next chapter - you left us with just a small cliffhanger! Please!

Even better, I can live with that.

Screw the epilogue, I could easily read another 10 or so chapters! Sui, thank you for this amazing love story. So sad that it is ending. Will there be an epilogue? Hoping!!

Maybe I am being too trusting, but I'm thinking Leon should pardon Pierre for what he did. He was, after all, not aware of the assassination plot, and all he was just too trusting. By pardoning him, Leon would, in my humble opinion, ensure that he would be eternally grateful and be a loyal subject for the rest of his life.

Wow, very dramatic and action packed penultimate chapter. Just loved it. Looking forward to a more serene and royal final chapter. Like everyone else, I am really going to miss these guys.

The only person getting hurt here is Edgar! He's been caught in the middle of a real shitty situation and is suffering because of it, mainly because Devon is running away from situations instead of sorting them out. Actually, seems to be a bit of a trend with your 'heroes' lately Quokka - first Trenton in 'Oceana' and now Devon. Please give your lead characters some balls and face up to problems. Makes them look weak!! (Rant over)

Why do I get the impression that, once again, Trenton is avoiding an issue. He rebuked Travis, rather harshly and unfairly, in my opinion, and has yet to speak to Travis about it. If his marriage really meant anything to him, he would be speaking to his husband (Travis) about the incident. But it seems he would rather run around doing other things instead. Or is it just me!!

As much as I cannot wait for the climax of this story, I will be sad to see it come to an end. Hopeful for a sequel at some time. You have this amazing ability to really get your readers invested in your main characters. It was the same in Morgan Lore. The characters absolutely take on a life of their own! Well done. Gonna miss these guys.

Sui - you killing us here (just in case you don't know it) - no update for nearly 2 weeks. - just saying!! OK, as far as insiders are concerned, I would go for Pierre, the driver - he's the only one who knew Leon was out of the castle, because Logan asked him for a bike to follow Leon!

Way to go Aria!! (And the crowd went wild). That's telling her. Go boy, go!!

Nephylim, I don't know how many chapters you still have up your sleeve, but all I know is that I am going to miss these guys when it's done. I'm secretly hoping for a real saga! Once again, a fantastic chapter. You never disappoint. I'm hoping for a LOT more.

Nephylim, I don't know how many chapters you still have up your sleeve, but all I know is that I am going to miss these guys when it is all done. Once again, an aweome chapter - you never disappoint.

Wow!! Last two chapters been simply amazing! Powerful, thoughtful. and emotive. Anyone who did not find themselves affected in some way, in my humble opinion, must be totally heartless. And the scary thing is that this IS happening around us right now. Jay had to rely on their wits and strength of character in order to survive - and then got treated like a criminal, Amazed that Lady Jane is blind to that1

Wow, tough chapter to read. I too lost my parents in my early teens, so I can absolutely relate to what Leon in going through. Although it does concern me that he is cutting off his grandmother. He is going to need all the support he can get, and not only from his friends. I'm going to compare this story to a meal 1st 6 chapters - very tasty starters. Now we get to the meat and potatoes Hoping for a sweet ending.

Sui, welcome back. Promising beginning to a new story. looking forward to seeing how it develops - although from experience it will be another smash hit.