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    Go Home Loren

    Thank you for relieving me of that title.
  2. Yeah, and I'm getting ready to post a new story, but still I've managed to procrastinate. I opened a new doc to work on one of the last chapters. My word count is higher in the comments on Mrs G's chapter than on my own...lol. Was it Scarlett O'Hara who said "there's always tomorrow"? Or maybe Little Orphan Annie. Could've been Rudolph's girlfriend Clarice in Rudolph the Red Nose Reindeer 🤔
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    Go Home Loren

    This enough chalk to get you through? As far as being old, here's the best I can do:
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    Go Home Loren

    Finished, maybe. Polished and shiny, far from it. We's gots some work to do Sistah!
  5. Our hurricane season started yesterday and it's off to a quick start. Nice little tropical depression brewing out in the Gulf. It won't amount to anything other than a wet weekend, but it will crank up the humidity. Hello Florida summer! I'm debating whether to pick up my usual "just in case" cases of water, or wait until after we move. Speaking of putting things off @Mikiesboy, I really need to get serious about packing and bringing stuff up to the new house. I keep squirreling when I'm home. I'll pack a carload tonight... I promise!
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    Go Home Loren

    Sure, we don't have to work or anything. I'm okay having my utilities shut off for non-payment. How 'bout you @Mrsgnomie? Box under a bridge ok with your hubs and kids?
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    Go Home Loren

    Aiden dreaming: Loren dreaming: Seamus and Matt dreaming:
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    Go Home Loren

    Bring it.
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    Go Home Loren

    Damn phone posted twice
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    Go Home Loren

    You can always dump me and see how many less comments you get because of our wonderful bantering. I'm sure that wouldn't go over well with your competitive streak. You:
  11. kbois

    Go Home Loren

    Phheww! Less to edit. I can work on my own stuff.
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    Go Home Loren

    I think you meant: What can I say, the best part of me lies in my amazing editor kbois.
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    Go Home Loren

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    Go Home Loren

    Loren better fu@#ing get things right this time. He needed this wake up call. He can't continue to run from the commitment boat. He needs to climb aboard or let Jay sail off into the sunset without him. Considering we all know how BN ended, (yes I went there) we know he at least gets on the board. Whether or not he jumps ship later on remains to be seen. No, I haven't seen the final version of the last chapter yet.
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    Chapter 9

    I know I'm jumping in late here, was away for the long weekend. Peter and Rob had their moment and discovered being friends with benefits worked for them. Yes Bax and Julio have a major case of "open-mouth-insert-foot disease. Unfortunately there's no cure. Looking forward to the reunion between Peter and Dan. Excellent chapter.
  16. I'm back home, Kansas was pretty cool. Where we were was all rolling hills. We did a day trip to Badlands State Park. Amazing scenery. Loved seeing my son and his fiancée. Now I'm back to missing them and counting down the days until they come at Christmas. We didn't get home until midnight. I'll be pretty useless at work today. I hope everyone has a good day!
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    Chapter 32

    Brad and Jake still have a ways to go, especially if their relationship is as important as Brad thinks it is. Their relationship is supposed to be mature and instead of dealing with it that way, they both reverted to dramatic, selfish teenagers. Now that they've had their intervention by Will and the gang they can evaluate where they are and where they want and need to be from and adult perspective like they should have in the first place.
  18. Got a half hour to kill before the kids pick us up for dinner so I figured I would poke the beast.
  19. A lesson I'm still working on. Thanks Wayne!
  20. Any other day I'd be happy to, but today is my last day visiting my older boy in Kansas (*waves to anyone living anywhere around here*). So I'm leaving it to all y'all to come up with a few sparky comments for me..lol. Except this one... did anyone besides me notice that Lars is totally in my corner with the nasty coconut concoction?
  21. Spoken words are so powerful. They have the power to hurt, to heal, to tear down and to build up. This chapter had it all. Loren is rebuilding his relationship with Lars. Jay is establishing boundaries with his parents. The end though.... Jay's realization that their relationship has been lopsided in the compromise department is heartbreaking. Loren needs this wake up call.
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    You left me.

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    You left me.

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