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In my school we teach students to avoid “value judgements”. Reading Mark’s wonderful stories has helped many of us avoid such an error, but sadly not all. 👿👿👿👿👿👿
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Or he has his own book that Will-lovers will never have to read! Well said!
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Exactly, Mark. I was thinking of that episode with the poor dentist as I wrote my comment. I hope all goes well as you come to America’s end of year. Here in Spain the worst is yet to come!,, Hugs from an Oxford D.Phil
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Secondary Characters Have A Life, Too
Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Secondary Characters Have A Life, Too
The comments have begun to take a life of their own - always a good sign! I just hope Rusty, and Zoey, have got nine lives. They just might need them,!!! great stuff Laura 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 -
Could this be one of the greatest chapters @Mark Arbour has written? The intensity is amazing, I wanted to get to the end but then didn’t want the chapter to finish. Well done, Mark. Now to the serious stuff….. not even the most ardent (and confused) Z**h-lover can defend this little rat now, surely? Not even a certain “private”? Now before I go too far and get blocked I will stop. But, I repeat, this chapter is a masterpiece and Gap Year is almost as good as Nothern Exposure ( hint, hint, dear author ✍️) big hugs from Spain, Mark
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And I think this is the best reply EVER from an author. Love it. BTW how about Will and CJ disputing an election????
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Promiscuity is a word which by definition includes a moral judgment. At least that’s what my Jesuit moral philosophers in Rome taught us!
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Have I read the same series?? I can think of quite a few characters who could win that crown 👑
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Absolutely agree! Great stories, huge amount of fun, and yet… deep emotions. One of my favourite GA authors. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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Sorry @PrivateTim but my answer is absolutely yes! From the v first entries in the series when he started manipulating Goren and then everyone else…… But we are free to choose between them. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Chapter 2 - The next 2 days
Gary L commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The next 2 days
I’m really enjoying this story and the extra few thousand words allows us to see much more. Cris’ pain and frustration is something that resonates with me. Many years ago, I was a student abroad when my dad died suddenly. I can remember walking afterward back in the college grounds screaming screaming silently ‘why won’t anyone come and ask me how I am?’ and yet totally aware that my body language was telling people to stay away. Finally, after six months of pretending all was okay, I cracked, knocked on the door of a Faculty member and said ‘I need help.’ Chris isn’t quite there yet but he knows it’s coming. Not sure I should keep telling Jeff how well he writes……. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 -
ME TOO!!🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
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Yes, indeed, and in various ways. I’m not sure if Travis’ is mature enough to really handle Will who at same age has a whole world of life experience. Or can Will cope with Travis’ whining which reminds me of Robbie. but the most important thing is the final evidence of what a total slime ball Z**h is. He now adds blackmail of a minor for sex to his long list of (not)-attractive traits. The only thing protecting him at this point is Mark Arbour……. seriously, this story continues to amaze. Thank you ☺️
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Looks like Sunny Hill is getting a weather front rolling in. John is a prat, but Connor is one dangerous SOB. And meanwhile the lovebirds are loving. Good stuff. 🤗🤗🤗
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Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
Gary L commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 6 - That Dark Good Night
Wow, a really powerful, unexpected twist. I was caught blindsided completely. I will forgive the cliffhanger on this occasion because we are promised a new chp tomorrow. Great writing, a tough read for many. special hug for @Jim Fraser 🤗- 34 comments
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Chapter 1 - The Lug Head
Gary L commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Lug Head
@Jeff Burton at least for us emotional wrecks life is never dull! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 -
Another Jeff Burton cracker. This guy knows how to do emotions without being over-emotional as the author, if you understand me. If not, read every page this guy writes in GA. FANTASTIC!
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Chapter 1 - The Lug Head
Gary L commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 1 - The Lug Head
Jeff this is another really, really, good piece of writing. I love your style, the characters and, of course, the emotional mess they find themselves in. A 5 ***** start!- 19 comments
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V difficult to add comments when @Summerabbacat gets ther just before me with such apposite comments! Great story and I love all the comments 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Yep, this story just get better and better! “I’m lovin it!” Xx
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Well said. I so agree with you, @Marty perhaps others could reflect on this question: So aesthetics is ok for females as well? Here in Spain virtually every female baby is pierced to have ear rings from birth. Sorry if I have offended anyone but ……
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I felt totally included as did, I imagine, the large number of uncut males amongst your readers. Well put!
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I agree. A touch chp written with sufficient detail to be clear but not dragged out for the reader. Well done!
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One of my ideas of hell is going to a party where I know no-one except the host (always busy) or a friend who abandons me in seconds…….
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I totally agree with @Summerabbacat This is a great read and now we see the depths of the mother/son relationship and the effects of the father walking out. good stuff!
