Gary L
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And, if I may say, you do it really well. Keep up with the great work. 🤗
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So time to say, “You are the weakest link, GOODBYE!”
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Ummm I had forgotten about that slimeball…… do I believe a word of Z**H’s lamentation? Surprisingly, yes but I fear for Will. another wonderful treat from the Master. Thanks 🙏
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Well said, good dr, you’ve got me thinking on new lines. Thank you. I always enjoy your analysis 🧐
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More or less like my Spanish pension will be…….🥲
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“Mirrors, mirrors on the walls, who are the greediest peers of them all?” fantastic stuff, Mark. 👏
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And who could forget that screwed up Brit? 😛
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The Problem With Cosplaying
Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Problem With Cosplaying
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I don’t believe it! Another chapter, thank you Mark so much. And now I’m going to read it curled up in bed. Night night GA 🥰
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Just two, maestro?? I wasn’t sure how the story would go with them back in DC after all the excitement of México DF. But, yet again, Carlos eliminates my doubts. This chapter is wonderful, really good. One small thing story wise, yes CJ is, of course, old enough to deal with Pam, but Ozzie staying silent and leaving it to him? It’s in character but if my late-mother were bad-mouthing my husband I’d have a few things to say in private - like get back to the vineyard! The fact that readers like me get emotionally involved with imaginary characters is a tribute to a writer’s skill. ¡’Eres un crac, Carlos!
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Pretty hot stuff!
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Chapter 28 As The World Churns
Gary L commented on Jack Scribe's story chapter in Chapter 28 As The World Churns
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Another v satisfactory chapter! I fear the guys might be underestimating Connor and his cohort(s). The roommate could cause trouble….. umm this could swing both ways,,…… EDIT “either way”
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Although showing its age in a number of ways, written in time of don’t ask etc., the central love story is as fresh as it was when I first read this many years ago. Horny sailors, Deep South Memphis, what more more do you want?
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Ursula le Guin. There were three short books at one level for children, at another for adults reflecting on truth, and decades later she wrote a fourth. Amazing insights into good and evil. And how a “religion” can control a chosen person. I’m not a great reader of fantasy but this is real literature. good luck with the writing!
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Not sure I will finish tonight but it’s an intriguing start. In good company with The Earthsea Trilogy
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Phew 😮💨
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Many thanks to @Carlos Hazday for making Brock Brett’s Malibu neighbour in the CJ series. He has led me to this great little gem. Like a tin of beans there is a lot packed in and not a word wasted. now another great author to explore, although sadly, no longer with us.
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Exactly! I’ve just pulled another 50 hr week as term comes to an end. How Mark does this with two amazing stories is wondrous . Thank you, sir! But the will ………… please……
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“two windows with lace curtains over heavy oil paper shades”. More Psycho than Four Seasons….. 😲
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A sweet growing up tale with our hero fortunate in his dad and closest friend. It’s a v short piece but packs in a lot of emotions. I hope to read more by this author. well worth a read. 👏👏👏👏👏
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Write more, please. V enjoyable and memory stirring and what ifs of too long ago..
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A really expressive and well-told first chap. I’m certainly following this. Well done!
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Deeper and deeper, harder and harder…… Rusty falls. Great stuff, Laura. Really good. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Yep, yep!
