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What happens after Zach wakes up?
Gary L replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
My 6 was going to be more violent but same solution. So funny I was laughing out loud even as my partner is taking a COVID test…. -
Excellent chp - ending fits characters and storyline perfectly. A great read throughout, Laura
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Me too, JACCC!!!!
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¡Y viva España!
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Thank you! I tripped on a step at school on first day of term. Karate chopped the concrete and broke a v small bone. Given it was a work “accident” HR is mollycoddling me in case I sue them…… I just want to get back to my kids and classes. Still, I could start writing a GA epic……. 🤗
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Hey, I’m in mrs G’s bad books, I dare not be in Mark’s, that would leave me at Carlos H’s mercy…… everyone else is great but these three are my gods, godpersons, goddesses, godthingies
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What is clever, Mark, is that you don’t make it that simple. I think he’s a fucked up bunny who has had so much going for him …. however….. very clever writing, ✍️. Nevertheless, kill him off asap. He is is the weakest link, goodbye 👋 great work, Mark
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Tomorrow with only two fingers I will start my version of “Circumnavigation” combining it with life aboard Captain Granger’s boat and CJ’s experience in Mexico. Plus visits from Will Schulter to keep me smiling.
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Okay, okay, you got me mrs G. 🙇♀️ 🙇♀️ 🙇♀️.
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Only 6 chapters…… MrsG I’m off work for another xxxx month for a tiny fracture in my hand and I need to be looked after with extra chapters, mega-long brilliant stories as you do so well…… I can’t be ungrateful but I’m begging you…… cue soppy music. god, I’m pathetic when I’m off sick.
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I’ve been reading this on a different phone unable to comment. So here goes: this is an amazing story, truly unique in my experience. I’m glued to it. every chp has something to challenge my preconceptions which is a sign of great writing. I love this tough read. Well done so far!!!
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I’m not an into babies sort of person but this was another really good chp - lots of Strong emotions around but well-judged. so it’s a Yes from me. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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It’s arrived. I love you 😘
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It’s siesta time in Spain and I’m doing cold turkey - and not for lunch! Come on mrsG. I’m lying in bed with an arm in plaster and I need a fix! Pleeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeee Do I have to beg? I will if you want …..
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I think it’s because at various points in Will’s life when he feels he can/ought to be able to rely on Zach he is let down, really badly. He is more forgiving than your readers!
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Looks like Will is getting into what could be a difficult triangle. Raw emotions everywhere…..
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A Well-Planned Revolution
Gary L commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in A Well-Planned Revolution
Not even a clue, a tiny clue about the plan, except that it’s acceptable to Jonathan…. Um 😶- 44 comments
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The sonnet is incredible, so beautiful and yet challenging and then you give us an excellent interpretation. Well done!!
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2022 Anthology: Anniversary Week 4 *Now Live*
Gary L commented on Cia's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I so agree. I’ve read and enjoyed them all, even the ones with themes/genre I wouldn’t usually choose. So I’ve got some previously unknown to me authors to read. There were, however, a few that I felt were outstandingly good, and one is a gold medal winner for me. Who is it? Ahhh that would be telling but the clues are in my reviews. Being off work for weeks, now, the anthology has been a godsend. Congratulations and many thanks to the great authors represented here. 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 -
I love Bellini the artist, Bellini the composer of great operas, and Bellini the cocktail. And now we have another Bellini, a great little story full of delightful descriptions and a wide range of emotions beautifully expressed by the author. Having read this I’m off to see what else Cole has written. If it is as good as this readers will be v happy. thank you and well done!
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Good story. Anyone traveling to Venice must go to Harry’s Bar, a tourist trap in summer but when I went on a crisp winter morning it was amazing. Bellini’s were invented here and, of course, one is never enough!
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Working in a tatty gift shop losing money thanks to her son’s useless choice of goods and financial incompetence, our heroine has had enough…. Read on for an enjoyable, fun time with a v clever twist at the end. Very funny 😄
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Very well-done. You got me!!
