Wayne,
I thought that was a new scene. Thanks for adding that scene because it does help build the inter-relatedness of the characters. Small town life....what can I say....LOL. I hope you will provide the readers of this site your stories about Camp Refuge. I am enjoying your newest story on storylover.
Mac
Each time I read this story (I think this is time 6), I get caught up in the dramatics as if it was the first time I had read about Corbin and Paul. You have excellent story telling skills. I am eagerly waiting to read the next chapter. I think a sequel would be GREAT.
What a wonderful story. I am glad that I stumbled upon it. As a semi-invalid after a broken back it gives me hope. I have to use a cane to walk. Beautiful writing, believable characters and great story telling. I look forward to more.
Great chapter. Fine writing that kept the tension real and palpable. Then the hot shower scene was the perfect ending. Thanks for giving us another chapter of Brady and Ember.