The polished version is definitely better. I had to find a way for you to come back and read it here at GA. You may think you know what happens but, do you really? 😏😏😏
I think the conversation between Loren and his friends was very important. I like that they're able to look at their success and say "hey, maybe it's time for us to look at our priorities'. They're at a place where they can pretty do what they want and I'm glad they see that.
I was only late for one posting because I forgot my laptop at work. Other than that, I almost always post at 6:15-6:30am PST
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twenty-three
loe
“Everyone seems to love the last reel I posted—”
“I posted,” Jay corrects. He’s sitting just off screen but pops his head in so everyone can see him. “I had the idea for the video. It’s all mine. Loe didn’t even know what we were doing until he saw the finished product.”
“Yes,” I agree sarcastically, with an exaggerated head shake and a glare. “Your idea was soooo hilarious.”
It actually was. The concept, anyway. He filmed himself loading a
Aidan only knows Matt as his dad. He’s referred to as both because they’re still at the stage where Matt is essentially Aidan’s dad but feels weird calling himself that. So both are thrown around interchangeably.