WOW!!! Shit like this pisses me off, gets are in the system, transfered around, does no one keeps records on these kids? To me it seems to me these kids records would be transfered to wherever there being moved so there up to date and the situation.
I want to say what a wonderful story. You brought it to life for me. As I was reading this, I actually felt I was somehow part of it. Looking forward to see what's next from you.(I hope you continue writing)
I think first off Aiden & Tyler need to get with Brett, Billy, Dustin & Sarah and let them all know what they figured out. See where that goes. As far as Hartley goes I can't remember him be in any of the other war stories but I too am a member of the old and forgetful club.
I truly believe Hartley is not the person he claims to be, I also believe he's been playing Dustin. I hope Dustin catches on before it's to late. Aiden needs to wake up as well. HARTLEY is bad news.
yes so glad to hear more of Dustin. I cried through most of his story. The shit that poor child went through, I just hope he doesn't turn out to be a bully now and remembers what he went through. What I love most about these stories is they covers cities I know about. I live 70 miles North of Pittsburgh in the dying city of Oil City. Another exciting chapter, well done.
so glad to find a new chapter with it saying on temporary hold. Anyhow great chapter, so very proud of Artie as well as Adam for standing back and let Artie figure it out for himself. I truly hope this isn't the ending to the story.
I gotta say I Loved these stories. After you posted you had more at Awesome Dude I had to go and read there. Thanks for sharing that. I just finished the Green Side and let me say lil Damian is my new hero.