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If i'm reading Alan's mind correctly it goes something like 'I love it when a plan comes together' and his plans are going well. The way he's going all of Clarion will benefit from him moving there.
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His knees were getting damp, kneeling on the wet grass, he was sure that there would be mud patches when he stood, but Christian did not care as he stared at the headstone made of marble in front of him. He read the inscription that bore the names of his birth parents, their dates of birth, followed by the date of death. Below that, the words read, 'Gone but forgotten. You will live on in my heart. Love John.' Christian was now eighteen, school was over, and attending University was in his
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I think Jason is handling a pretty damn awful situation well, after all there is no set way to deal with his situation you just have to play the cards you have and hope it goes well.
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Another great chapter, I'm looking forward to hearing about the Canada trip
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Does Alan's generosity know no bounds? I really hope that his generosity doesn't come back to bite him.
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Great the police are involved, I hope justice is served on those that deserve it.
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That is cruel brutal torture, anyone inflicting such treatment on a fellow human being should be locked up and have the key thrown away at the very least. I hope Max recovers from his treatment.
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Kids will be kids, ain't that fun. It looks like they all had a great time, Cody and Alan must have worked hard to make sure of it. Theses guys are being good loving parents let's hope they get to adopt the boys, but is Nels recruiting a new brother or a friend it will be interesting see what's happening there.
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Great chapter and I think that Nels is stealing the hearts of all of your readers, lol, he's definitely got mine.
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I like the way you handled everything it couldn't have been easy to write this chapter, but you dealt with a very emotive subject in a well written and realistic way.
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If they had flown in to Manchester I'd have offered to pick them up, lol 😂
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Ian and Kevin arrived at The Grenadiers Arms later than expected, they were immediately seated and served with a meal of Hunter's Chicken, baked potato and seasonal vegetables followed by a dessert of cherry pie and fresh cream. With appetites satisfied they complimented Martin on his fine cooking, before joining The Major, Marty and Martin for a relaxing end of the day drink. After the Inn was closed they all retreated to their respective rooms for a good nights rest. The following day after a
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Another great chapter, you portray the angst felt by many gay men who have felt society's pressure to be 'normal' in a tactful and thought provoking way. What will Jason do now? Is there a point where Jason and Karl make a sexual connection? I'll be reading more to find out.
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Wow such a huge change to the boy's lives and it's a change for the better, the trip to Europe is a great bonus and I'm guessing just the first of many family trips. Thank you for another great chapter
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As the way I have been brought up and the life that I have had has made me the person that I am today, I try to apply that same principle to my characters. This helps to keep my work as close to real life as possible, the subject matter of homelessness and especially teenage welfare is something that my family takes seriously. The Boot series is based on a fictional shelter in Manchester, The Lost Soul series is a series of stories about the earlier life of a main character(s) from The Boot and hopefully explains what brought them together. I originally joined GA to read not write as I've never considered myself as a writer and still don't, so you comments mean a lot to me. Thank you.
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Remedial work had been carried out on the Thomas Street building. Roof insulation had been put in place, and windows had been replaced with double glazing that was tastefully done to look the same as the original windows. All plumbing, electrics and gas piping had been replaced to meet current standards. The decorating and furnishing were done to tastefully maintain the character of the building yet blend in with modern living. John had picked his room, or should that be rooms. They were furnish
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Yes they were 😀
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I smell adoption in the future, all who agree say aye, lol.
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The conversation will be interesting and with all of testosterone in the air that could be interesting too, lol.
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This sounds like teenage hormones running riot, lol, I remember those days well.
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Fingers are crossed for Alan and Cody, they'd be great foster parents.
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This one of the nest 'feel good' stories and I love catching up with the antics in Alan's home, I'm looking forward to when they start fostering.
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Oh dear what a tangled web, it will be interesting to see what happens next.
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That sounds like a great way to spend New Year, something I'd love to do.
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When we think this story can't get any better you write a chapter like this and it does, I'm lovin' it.
