Mancunian
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The more I read the more I like, if I could I'd become Alan's neighbour. Oh and by posting this chapter you just stopped me writing again
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A compelling chapter skilfully written drawing a picture that is seen in the minds eye, thank you.
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There's many a gay man been caught in a similar situation as Karl was in, there's no doubt that everyone of them has felt the same revulsion and guilt, again well written.
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The awkwardness of the situation came across well and I sympathise with anyone in that situation, skilfully done 👍
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And there is a glimpse from the inside of the family, I think I'm going to enjoy this.
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I'm intrigued by the opening chapter, obviously there is more to this family than is seen from the outside.
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That sounds horrible I can't understand why anyone would want to put a fellow human being through anything like that. I hope that you treat this topic with dignity and compassion and I'm sure that you will.
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As the next few weeks passed by Jeff found himself busy. Following the announcement of Bill's death he was concerned that it may reflect badly on The Boot and other shelters for the homeless. More importantly he was concerned that the public may think that homeless people were sexual predators and treat them badly, thankfully his concerns were unfounded and everything remained the same as another story in the news was of more interest to everyone. Following his arrest Graham Peterson had be
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I'm sure that when they get more settled they will learn to read the river better and catch plenty of fish, but I'll bet seeing and knowing that they share the land with wild deer is more than enough compensation.
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So true to the real show with a result like that I'm gutted for Lance I was rooting for him. I can only hope now that Casey gets her comeuppance.
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Something tells me that Alan will do anything to keep Cody around and I'm guessing that Clarion could see a new business start up. Of course I could be wrong, either way I'm still reading and enjoying.
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I'd be buying a plane ticket to join them if it wasn't for trump, lol 😂
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I think you may be right, it's going to be interesting to find out how the next round goes.
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😉 your secret is safe with me.
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Haha, well you are writing a good story so when I see a new chapter I just have read it. My only problem with this story is that when I read it it means that I'm not writing myself lol 😂
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That sounds like a house I could live in, but all It's way out of my price range lol 😀.
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I like the way this story is going, there is always a life to lead no matter what your age is and everyone should live their life to the full. The following chapters are eagerly awaited.
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Thank you for the comments they are appreciated, I will be doing my best, after all is said and done John deserves that of me as do my readers.
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Lance is doing well, lets hope he has made an ally.
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nice story telling, I'm enjoying getting to know our leading man.
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I do understand your point on new characters, one or two may be here for the long haul but most will temporary as would be normal in any homeless shelter, we may even lose one or two main characters we will just have to wait and see.
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What can I say he's young lad growing up with a lot to learn, let's hope he's in the right place.
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Thank you for reading your comments are greatly appreciated.
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I like the way this is shaping up and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I know that black pudding isn't everyone's favourite but personally I adore it, it makes a great accompaniment to an english breakfast and nice on a venison burger with mature cheddar mmmm I can taste it now.
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Is it tactics or collusion, or could there be something more going on, I wonder.
