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Yes, that works 😁 Still think the Green WOW looks like a crazy bird and the blue SAD like a blue nose 🤣🤣

Three chapters in and I've liked them all, that is the story, but you need to correct the writing, read through it. You've got autocorrect putting in wrong words and I have to re-write it in my head as I'm reading. The story is great, really good!

Okay thanks, but the hovering over doesn't work on a phone.

I understand the Thumbs up is a LIKE, the Heart is a LOVED IT, the Yellow laughing face is FUNNY, but what is the Green bird and the Blue nose, and the Black face looks like HATED IT, why would you want to hate a chapter? Explanation?

I'm not always on to add reactions, but I've liked every chapter and this has to be probably one of the best stories on this site at the moment. There is a lot to comment on, and I'm way behind, but let's try: Kyle's mum is a weird character, she has a mother's insight and suspects her son might be gay, which is why she kind of approves of Greg as a role model. Whether Kyle is or is not gay hardly matters, he does pull Greg's strings when it comes to the abuse Greg suffered as a teen. Another weird mother is Nates mum, Greg's surrogate mother, also intuitive and loves to call people out, but the weird bit is she was married to the fiend and none of her intuitive nature saw what her own husband was up to. Anyhow great writing, great story (I also like your other story, it's different) this one has all the elements readers love.

You are right about not getting any comments here. I am new and posted a couple of chapters. On the second posting I asked readers to follow and comment. I got a LIKE and two followers, I got no comments. The numbers show a few hundred readers, but nobody said, nice story, liked it, nothing. I found another site, Nifty, and posted a story there, immediately I got emails from readers. What a huge difference! I stopped posting here, just look in from time to time to see if anything's happening, but nothing is. I can't really see myself posting chapters into a void. I agree with you, that if like 200 or 300 people read a chapter, then a few comments to the guy who wrote it, isn't too much to expect. If the readers out there can't be bothered to just say, liked it, I can't be bothered to post it.

I wanted to read a new author's story (apart from my own 🤣) and your opening chapter was good, full of mystery, I see a real tale developing.