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I think the change was Edgar being sent away rather than any other scenario As @Chris 191070 pointed out Oscar hadn't been born, as he is 2 years younger than Edgar.

Great Start! Things could get interesting quite quickly !???????? Can't wait to read the next installment!!

Hate people in positions of "power" who think they are entitled to run rough shod over anyone & everyone whom they consider to be "of lessor importance than themselves" Arse holes! Lol To threaten a student under your care & tutelage in that manner shows nothing but your true colours & your lack of a moral compass that actually works !?!? This one is a "Prince of Arseholes" Roflol Lol Great chapter! Your in depth research shines through your written words!!!!

Another great written word present for Christmas! My thanks !!

Best Christmas Present Of the year!!

Yeah but I'd Look up see the kettle look down at my phone to read a bit more & wonder why I was leaning on a work top next to the kettle!? Post it notes ! I need post it notes! Lol

Another great Chapter! But I've got a bone to pick!! My coffee always seems to go cold when ever I read your work!? I must enjoying it too much & forgetting to stop & pick the mug up & sip whilst it's still steaming!?!? Lol Ian

Christ n you lot call us brits weird!? Jelly salad!? Jelly with fruit n custard Or icecream Yeah for an under 10's b/day party but anything else Is just plain nasty in my book!? 🤣🤣🤣🤣😱😱😱😱😱😱🧨🥕🧨🍍🧨🍥

Another great Chapter!! Thanks for rushing It out when your still living amongst boxes etc! Xxx

BASTARDS!!! what goes around, comes around!! I hope it's some big bugger who goes by the tag of "steriod muscle mountain " who by hook or by crook is looking for a new "prison wife " !?!?!?

If it was in the UK the tenant leases like most business leases would have been fully "self repairing " ie: all repairs & general maintenance would be the tenants responsibility. so in essence they would need to get their fingers out their rear ends & get on n do what they could to protect their land from the fires. obviously good they wanted to coordinate with the land owner but they though they could delegate it back to the landlord but he right my had other thoughts n good on him !! he had already done a lot without consultation as he needed to protect his land & the tenants businesses best he could.

In every group there is usually one total cock ("dick" for the non Brits!) & its usually due to petty jealousy or plain ignorance & it doesn't take Poirot/ Miss Marple (Agatha Christie detective characters) or even good old "Columbo" to work it out in this group lol. If his wifes family come from old money is it merely an inferiority complex or does he just feel that others & the world in general owe him a high flying career & salary to match !?!? "Flying east" easy coast USA or to eastern europe got a little confused!? Finally whats up with "Uncle Mark" another "cock"?? A petty man wanting to offer assistance but "at a price"??? A Pedo wanting his hot nephew close by him away from his family & reliant on him therefore vulnerable & more pliant or just a plain old control freak!???? So many questions!? so few answer at this stage can't wait for the next few chapters to unfold the story further !?!?!? Thanks author!! Ian Hampshire, UK

Still say it's "Lord Stalker" he's never "far away"sticking his nose in n trying to control Anton. Again it's a complete turn around from his earlier days when Edwin was one of the good guys with no front or agenda. the same can't be said now!!!! What next for our enterprising, trouble magnet of a lead character!?!?

WOW!!! what a fabulous chapter!!!! Thank you

OFFS !?! Not even in the same hemisphere & The Stalker is still causing issues!? like the smell of last night's curry still lingering - just not nice!! 😂😂😆

Great chapter!!

Atleast "Lord E" aka "the stalker" has left the country & hemisphere for now but he'll be back to follow his prey soon enough no doubt !?!? whats his end game??? is it love? business? or something more sinister ????? he's changed so much & where's the butler come bodyguard hiding!??

When did Edwin become such a stalker!? Used to love his character, not so much now.

It a been a while! but great to have this story on the go again!! Thanks!!

Ok so what comes next?? Your not shelving Dr James Shaw J.P. permanently are you?? Hmmm your a cards to their chest type !?! are you gonna leave us hanging for a while !? Lol I guess we'll find out in time!?!? Great writing that engages the reader nicely!! Thanks as always for your hard work!!

????? Hate cliff hangers lol!! Great story!!

Yes please!! A sequel would be Good! Perhaps Paul & Jaimee working for the accounting firm as an investigative team - Paul going undercover in an organisation & Jaimee foresensically investigating!?!?

Not following this story any more!? Oh well

Keep up the good work!! Love this story & oh HAPPY NEW YEAR! 01.06AM 01/01/2021 in the UK.

Thank you for the story so far !!