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Hmm. I’m puzzled. Should I assume that no comment means that it’s not good? Feedback isn’t everything but it is something. Anybody wanna beta read and let me know what sucks and what doesn’t?
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This is part of the new story entitled "LUCID LOVE" which I actually started writing some time ago. The actual story has changed from time to time, and is somewhat based on someone that I actually that I met a few years ago. No, the story is "FAKE" but some of the feelings and emotional connection are based on this person that knew. The story is MATURE CONTENT and the segment that I'm posting here for feedback does contain MATURE CONTENT. I'm hoping to get back into writing as soon as possible and I'm going head strong with this project as long as the passion burns of course. Even if
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Lucid Love is my new story that I'm working on and right now I'm two chapters in and I can't wait to go on with chapter three. I guess it's because I am a writer that I keep working on it - I can't just sit here and do nothing because I don't write that great. Lol. Even though I may not be a good writer, or good enough to entertain people then I'm still going to work on this project. Why? Because it's a story that I really want to write. This story involves the emotional connection that I had with someone just a few years ago and I actually still have feelings for (Ooops! Really?) He w
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Okay so last night I just sat down and started writing for the hell of it - I'm still thinking I suck so I don't want to put it out there for everyone to see yet - The story is called "Lucid Love" and it's kind of based on someone that I used to have feelings for...actually still do but he doesn't:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1oIeZFjtprSxHjXRl-ZNB5EMIRxMa-Z4r/view?usp=sharing
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I don’t know if I’m continuing with my writing. I don’t feel like I can mentally support myself when my OCD attacks me. You guys make it seem really easy to write a story. It’s not fair. Lol. Plus my eyes are the other problem. I can still do stuff and that’s what pisses me off.
I actually took my “Superboy” idea and put it together with a different story that I have. It’s kind of the same story but not really.
But—I don’t really see it happening now
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"You guys make it seem really easy to write a story."
You think! Don't feel so f'n sorry for yourself. Writing is a struggle, for most of us... and, what's more, going into detail of the why and what for would take a great amount of space, also time... time we could spend lamenting our own fragile efforts.
Do or do not.
Cheers and best of luck!
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QuoteYou guys make it seem really easy to write a story. It’s not fair. Lol.
Completed chapters and stories are the end result of a lot of hard work. The end product is just that... the END of a process starting with a first draft, then revisions, then going through beta readers and editing. Good writers are constantly learning and looking for ways to improve. It's certainly not an easy process, but it's one I, personally, quite enjoy. If your OCD is affecting your enjoyment of writing and making things worse, maybe taking a break is a good idea. But if you truly want to continue, then you will at some point. Taking care of yourself comes first.
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UPDATE: Thanks for the comments to everyone that has done so. I live with regret every day of my life, and I don't want to get into a long discussion right now but a part of me feels that this entry was a mistake. I know that everyone means well, but I guess I wasn't ready to hear some of the stuff, and it's quite depressing right (lol). And with everything else that I'm trying to hold down emotionally, I probably should've kept my mouth shut (lol). It's not your fault, it's mine. I guess that's why I'm struggling to get busy writing, because IF I lose my eye sight then my world coll
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BREAKING NEWS!! I thought I would share the truth with everyone, because you have been so nice and pleasant to me. I said to a few people along the way on here that I struggled with writing, there are several things that cause me to struggle. I know that this being a huge forum that possibly some on here will suffer with the same thing - not in the same way, but maybe you will GET ME! I think that's the problem sometimes lately is that people don't get me - they don't understand why some 40 something is struggling in such a hard way - Good grief just get on with your life, move one and
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Crazy Thoughts are like flowers blooming in a field where they just grow like crazy weeds whipping around a tree, and they seem to have no destination - I don't know what I'm going to do with my writing right now. Superboy is a fantasy type story that was grew from a fetish thing (lol). I guess I could explain a little - Several years back, probably years but most likely just one year I started wring scripts for "Adult Oriented Purposes" - I actually still have the web site, but I haven't logged in for some time. I wrote stories - cheap stories - that basically turned me one. I then put ou
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My writing sucks. Lol.
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Hang in there, and don't be too hard on yourself. It takes time, and a lot of writing, to get even remotely close to where you want to be. The main requirement is the passion to be a good writer, but it is a craft that takes hard work and research. Read everything you can about the basics of writing, and then use what you're comfortable with. It might not be easy, but that's what makes it worth all the effort. And trust me on this, we all know what you're going through. Cheers... Gary....
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Reworking Chapter One of Superboy - Not easy, but trying! Some of you make it look so easy @Talo Segura
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@Talo Segura - Thanks for the example of Superboy. I appreciate your effort in this and it sounds quite nice. I have some other problems that I don't really want to get into on the forum, but it's hard for me to do things. At this point, I'm putting a hold on "Superboy" and all my writing ventures because of personal issues. I appreciate everything that you have done for me. Someone mentioned about doing a graphic novel or comic book - that IS exactly what I wanted to do but my drawing is horrible. Finding an artist would cost money for anything worthwhile. I use to write scripts for y
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How in the world is this possible? How can I have an idea decades old and I'm still holding on to it? Is it possible that I struggle with letting someone else write it? Truth is, I struggle with the reality that this story deserves a better writer, because I want it to be perfect. Is that why it's taking so long? Am I building my talent, and trying to get to the point where I"m good enough, or am I hoping that someone will step up and write the DAMN thing? Lol. You don't even know how long I have been working this idea in my head and it develops mostly with listening to upbeat alternati
