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Pretty good so far. But you have to write something for Melissa so far she's left out

Key question did Adam have his curtains open to his room? If so then Thomas DID see that. Although I don't approve of what Thomas did (I might have done the same thing at that age) I do feel somewhat bad for him he sounds like a lonely kid and his Mam seems stuck up. Did Adam and Ross do something a little intimate that Thomas might have seen?. We may be talking possible blackmail here

Something has to break and pretty damn soon. Now Jamie AND Hannah are in a coma?That is F....ed up. Hurry up and finish that locator M

So Corey in the library thinking about the stalker and chooses to pass the the time reading a....horror novel?🤔 Just saying I agree with @akascrubber that Grayson likes Corey and I think Lindsay knows that also. Could Alvise be observing them on behalf of Lindsay? And what's up with Grayson not being able to break up with Lindsay and can't say the reason why?

The thought did come to me that Connor acting like an a-hole the last week could be a result of having some of his father's gene's. The move went well and that was due to efforts from my dad, my boyfriend, and my ex. You're boyfriend and you're ex eh?🤔 interesting.Did they provide material for a possible future story😄

About a couple of years ago I had surgery for melanoma and they cut up my left arm and left a medium size scar relatively minor and yet my arm still isn't 100% so it will be that much more tougher for Manny even if nothing was amputated at least I'm right handed (That's a detail you can give us next chapter about Manny) They have made incredible progress with prothesis these day as it pertains to whole limbs but I wonder if that exists for individual fingers for Manny's sake I hope it does

Very interesting trip while I can see how cool it would be to transform to say into a bear especially if you are in some trouble but one thing I never gave much thought to was being an animal like a wolf like they were for an extended period of time I don't think I have it in me to kill a live deer like that. Please forgive me I tend to have a lot of annoying questions. When they were outnumbered by the wolf pack Gramps,Pop,Devin and Mac are in wolf form and I would guess have the same size brain as a wolf when they are.Considering that do they have the same brain capabilities as wolves as they do as humans?

I echo what @Paladin said if you could have them make an occasional appearance that would be awesome. If I remember right this was in the 90's maybe a little later . A controversial head sheriff in the state of Nevada allowed his cops to get naked in arresting prostitutes (prostitution is legal in Nevada so it must have been for other crimes) The news coverage of that was controversial.I'm curious that that cop that got on the elevator violated regulations

And now it's going to be a HARD night play

Perfectly executed cliffhanger. Caleb is the victim here yet these knuckle dragging parents are contacting the school about Steve why is that? I'll tell you why they know what they would do if they were in Steve's shoes and it scares the hell out of them

That's something as an author you NEVER have done huh?

Where was that taken?.........Just curious

“How's his mother doing?” “Not good, I'm afraid. She hadn't been responding to medications or therapy. The doctors are still hopeful, but to be honest, I think Trevor and I will have to adopt Kenny for good. If his mother is ever released, it might not be until after he becomes an adult.” “Have you talked to him about it?” “We haven't yet. Trevor wants to, but I think Kenny might react badly. I want to wait until we know for certain. If we try to adopt him, and his mother gets better, that'll create a lot of legal issues.” “Not to mention, you would be getting your hopes up.” “There is that, but I'm used to disappointments and sad endings. I don't want that for Kenny. He deserves more.” I appreciate Billy concern but NOT telling Kenny this would be so much worse everything Billy said to Diego should be said to Kenny. If Judge Crustypants broke the gavel would a cost of a new one come out of his paycheck or would he charge it to Billy?

Nurse pissy-face? Is she related to Judge Crustypants from the other story? On a more serious note while it could have been a lot worse but it would suck if Manny lost use of his arm and for what? Because Wally felt dissed???? It's guys like Wally that makes me think we are not smarter then the animals

At least nobody will ask if there is going to be another chapter

Wow @Lee Wilson you have accused me of finding and reading future chapters of yours but in this case you saw what I was going to say in my comment before I posted it😄 I bet that classic one-liner has been said on the school grounds of every middle school (Junior high) in the country I hate the idea of having a opinion that would help Calvin but to me I don't think the recording should have been admissible but (And this is a first) I'm glad Judge Crustypants ruled the way he did. So Caleb because of what happened doesn't to have visit Calvin this weekend. Let's see🤔 what would one rather do? Get beat up by a group of bullies or spent time with Calvin?.......I'm thinking,I'm thinking this is not an easy answer.

Thank you so much for that explanation. It appears these are very well written laws and regulations and from the government who'd have thunk it? Now the only question does it vary from state to state or is this federal?

Am I missing something? @drsawzall, @Anton_Clocheand @Summerabbacat expressed relief that Phil has an accountant looking after the house and finances. I keep going back to the hospital pretty much forcing to have Roger help with the arrangement for Phil which Phil did NOT want. It was mentioned Roger signed some papers and it seems Phil did not read the papers. What was on those papers? Even if Roger couldn't legally take anything from Phil there is always forging signatures. I'm not saying Roger would do that we need to find out more when Phil and Colin talk about Roger.But I see the possibility of it. Someone please tell me how I'm wrong about this?

You make a very valid point about how Phil's actions with Eloise may have impacted Roger. And Phil has told Colin he will tell him more about it next time they talk. I'm still worried that Roger may be doing something hinkey so when Phil and Colin talk about this will it be before or after something may be discovered?

Colin spent the next hour showing me how to use my new phone. Since it wasn’t the first I had owned, I knew how it worked. However, Colin insisted that there were many new features I wasn’t familiar with. He wanted to set up an app to my bank account so I could have money available if I wanted, but I told him I had no use for it. I owned nothing, and I didn’t have any payments. My fees here at the center were handled by my bank. I knew very little about it, and I really didn’t care. “Didn’t you say you have a home?” he asked. “What about your mortgage payment?” Phil doesn’t seem to be paying much attention to what is going on with his life outside of the hospital room. @Summerabbacat @drsawzall myself and I’m sure many other reader are very worried Roger might be taking advantage of this. When Colin sets up these accounts he may discover this but will it be too late? Would Roger have already done all the damage? When I counseled students, I often referred them to certain story sites. Before my stroke, I had been following a few good stories. I was hoping to be able to return to finish them. Hmm is Phil real ? 🤔Is there a @Ronyx stories he’s been following and that’s how Ron knows him?😄

I refer you to this line The teacher had reported it several times to the administration but nothing was done beyond giving the boys warnings. I hope someone in the administration gets dealt with with for this. Also don't be surprised if Christopher is connected to them in some way or the group of protesters. Well this may be it for awhile take all the time you may need to recover we will all be here when you post next❤️

As I type this there has already been a review posted by @Cane23 which I can't really add anything it was so well said so I'm adding another "review" if you will so there will be another 5 stars to get readers attention to this deserving author and to promote the sure to be excellent sequel that is coming

So, so glad for the sequel that will answer a lot of things I'm curious about.You mentioned CNN and MSNBC . What no Fox News? Actually it would have been interesting to see what kind of nonsense take they would have come up with. Ok something I'm worried about since Turner's son goons were ineffective and I'm thinking Turner will get his more serious and dangerous adult goons to go after Pete I'm sure some this this media coverage will shine some light of how Turner is connected in this especially if the gun Jeremy had is traced to Turner Incredible story and I'm so eagerly anticipating the sequel

What language is that?

Don WAS watching his back.....among other things