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I guess the plan was after Tom broke into Joe's house the killer was going to Kill Joe and Tom would take the fall. If there is fingerprints of the person who gave Tom the crowbar on the crowbar then that person really would be a rank amateur
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So you you haven't read this story yet? You are in for a great ride.There are good stories and then there are great stories like this that makes every so often come back and read certain chapters again. It will be interesting to see your takes as the story goes along
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Are you kidding @kbois lives to break our heart
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A New Friend and Another Trip to Rosharon
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A New Friend and Another Trip to Rosharon
Disbarment might be Silas getting off too easy he should do some time in a place where he will see some gay activity if you know what I mean. "A Trip, a Mountain, and a Reprimand" My first reaction to that is the firm maybe finds out Fred and Mo's relationship but that case is already over so what would be the point?- 26 comments
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When my Father passed away I wasn't even in Kindergarten yet and Mom didn't think it was a good idea to have me at the funeral and look how I turned out...........It wasn't my intention to counter your point but I guess I just did didn't I?🤔
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Chapter 64 What I Remember
weinerdog commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Chapter 64 What I Remember
I sometimes like to look at chapters randomly like just now and thought about Eustace and Marge McDowell dancing did you toy with the idea of them connecting? Eustace and Delia would have also been interesting for obvious reasons -
It's the way I picture two quirky people trying to get to know each other. Who the hell says You LOOK ethereal.🤔
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That is so cool that Fred is willing to meet Jerry and possibly befriend him. OK so Silas is a homophobe but still it would have been pragmatic for him to do his best for Wallingford since he was such an important client They shook hands, the only contact that was allowed I have friends to this day that still refuse to shake hands since Co-vid I wonder how many readers enter the age of 40 remember The Dean Martin Roast
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Three things that are true here .Silas was an incompetent failure and Dante assisted him in failing. Also Dante took three tries before he passed the bar(maybe thats nothing to be ashamed of) while Fred passed it on his first try. So the question is WHY THE F WOULD FRED WANT DANTE"S HELP!!!!
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What the hell is that Karen's problem???(I don't remember her name and don't care to) In California it's the law to pull to the side of the road when you hear a siren I guess not all states have the same law. While Preston isn't nosy or annoying like Karen he is very observant .Something to consider. To bad the coyotes didn't use the Acme company like the coyote on the Roadrunner does but then again all the Acme gadgets never works for him so it doesn't matter
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Meet the Clients, aka, A Trip to Rosharon
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Meet the Clients, aka, A Trip to Rosharon
Couple of thoughts I could see Fred actually getting to like Burton a little bit .If Fred manages to get both Mo and Burton out and they all cross paths ....OH BOY. All these cases of people being convicted wrongly in the state of Texas some readers might just brush this off as fiction but I heard of a real life case in TEXAS that was worst than what is portrayed here. The person Lanell Jeter got convicted of murder when there was plenty when there were plenty of eyewitness accounts that at the time of the murder in Texas he was at his job at Fuddruckers in SAN DIEGO where I live. It took a story by the TV show 60 Minutes to get him out.WTF. It does definitely happen -
Try 1,000 good comments and then.....maybe
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I'm curious how the chapter ended about seeing a smiling Bobby. Was he speaking of in his mind? Or did Bobby die and Phil is seeing an afterlife version of Bobby? Looks like Paul McCartney eh? A couple of more thoughts I'm picturing Colin being a go between trying to get Phil and his son to talk to about Why Phil married and the social pressures of being gay back then. I still think Phil's son is a jackass but perhaps he deserves to know why Phil did what he did. I'm also thinking we are going to meet Stanley in a future chapter
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What a doofus I though I commented earlier in the day but I didn't click send Duh. Such a drastic change in Kenny's life. I can't see a situation where is mom gets better and then Kenny's to live in that situation again.I'm thinking if she gets better she'l move into Billy and Trevor's place. James rolled his eyes and laughed. “Har, har, har. What do you call a guy who has a kitchen fetish?” Bryan looked confused and said, “I don't know.” “Pan-sexual. That one is so obvious I'm surprised I never heard it before. There was a strain in Ry's voice that Bryan picked up on but didn't know what it was. I take that to mean something tragic happened in Ry's life and something James and Quinton did triggered a memory
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That’s What I Call Entertainment
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in That’s What I Call Entertainment
If you had ended it with “My dream was coming true,” A bunch of us would have came at you torches and pitchforks. Many times I have seen random people that made me think "Is that a guy or a girl?Well either way that person is hot." If I ended up in Cary's situation any of those times and it turned out to be girl I would have been OK with it -
I like the prologue. Three Dog Night is still performing? I know a key member died if I'm not mistaken. One time in the 70's they and The Guess Who toured together in New Zealand and Australia in New Zealand they were more popular and they headlined but in Australia it was the other way around so they were the warm up act. Go figure. My bus is here so I'll have to read chap 1 later see you in a few hours
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Classic case of opposites attracting. “One thing you can count on, Ken, I’ll never lie to you.” Well he already has he had Sal take care of those guys because the brother were horning in on his gambling empire not because of a hit out on Ken
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Oh really? How often have you experienced that?
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Some Surprising Turns of Events
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Some Surprising Turns of Events
The prediction I referred to last chapter was partly right I was thinking Fred's backgound as an attorney might come into play in helping Mo. but of course I couldn't guess any of the details. What @drsawzall about Silas possibly being related to Bully is interesting but even if Silas was doing his job in good faith there is this "Well, Silas and I worked together pretty closely, shared a lot of information, helped each other out. I'd like to continue that practice with you, after you get settled in. Maybe make that after you get buried in the BMW paperwork." If Dante helped Silas an attorney who was terminated for incompetence if I'm Fred I would take anything Dante says with a grain of salt -
What's the difference between 2 Lawyers in a BMW and a porcupine? On a porcupine the pricks are on the outside.
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Mo's response showed that He really loves Fred. I have an idea what's going to happen but with my track record of predictions I won't express it here. There was a cheap motel, one with a number in its name,.Gee I wonder what motel you could possibly be referring to🤔
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The dumbest?????? Wow that is saying something.
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@kbois after reading that
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The only thing that would have made that better is if the shot included their bare feet
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I'm sure you noticed the banter in the chapter comments in this story has ratcheted up. It is almost as entertaining as story itself
