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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 44

    This guy John seem to be oblivious that he's ticking Bryan off. Is this your way of saying That Bryan,Diego etc. are people you actually know from the past. There has to be a way to take precautions with Calvin I would hope.As far as I know there is no restraining order is there? It's not like they can't get within a 100 feet of Calvin or anything like that right? I'm thinking Of Billy hiring someone too discretely tail them on the visit
  2. Well two interesting plot points one with Carlo losing a patient in a horrific way and also helping Steve. WOW!! Does the plane really get that low in St Maartens? In San Diego there's a plane path you can see from interstate 5 where you swear the plane is going to hit one of the Tall buildings downtown.But that is nothing compared to this. You mentioned a couple of weeks ago with the other story about having psychologist jokes ready for this so let let me be the first A man walks into a psychologist's office and the Doctor asks "what do you do for a living? The man said "I'm a mechanic"and the Doctor said "Get under the couch"
  3. weinerdog

    Prologue

    My first reaction to this is this one is going be darker then the others.Be interesting to see if Karl is still in Carlo's life or if not will he get back into his life
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 18

    When I saw in my notifications that @kbois and @Mrsgnomie commented around the same time I went oh-oh what happened now?😳 Thankfully nothing😄
  5. THE BEATLES!!!!!😲.....WHO ARE YOU!!!!!!....kidding😄
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    Chapter 5

    In addition toeing a teenager with an additude there is low self esteem, drugs,irrational sibling rivalry and a friend who's a bad influence.So mucho overcome. In addition to everything @drsawzall said about Betta there was also the cigarette burn on above her breast so perhaps I have been Judging her too harshly. Cosmo glared at her. “I can hold my own.” Elisabetta let out another gale of laughter. “I’ll bet you can. Even though it came from Elisabetta have to admit good line.😄 “You could probably ask Giorgio. I’m pretty sure he’d be willing. The kid’s seriously fixated on you.” The blackmail Giorgio was hinting at last chapter could it have been that he wants to get it on with Cosmo?
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    How did John Cole see Jim in the bar without being seen himself? Was he wearing a disguise? The two detectives combed the bar for three straight nights. Can you comb a gay bar for three STRAIGHT nights 🤔
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    I'm not done reading the chapter yet but as I read that Cole was the last name of George I went Oooooh Boy
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    It would help if you read I Hate This Town first if you haven't That's an awesome story and would help you understand this story better
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 43

    Just remembered something I forgot to put in my previous comment well two things.One is whoa so much adversity has happened in Ry's life. The other is I don't know what you have planned but I'm confident it will be good. But my thinking is only way to get Judge Crustypants to be fair is for Billy to hire somebody to investigate the Judge past (I'm sure he Billy knows people who can ) And then if they find something to then hang it over the Judge head. I normally wouldn't like doing something like that but me thinks its the only thing people like Judge Crustypants understand
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 43

    Didn't get a notification again it wasn't until the comments came until I found out about the new chapter.Whats up with GA sometimes? I have to say that is one of the better if not the best interactions I have read between a straight boy and gay boy. “And I'm the token straight boy in this situation, which makes me a big spoon by default. I don't need to wake up to your pirate invading my port looking for buried treasure. There is zero booty in this booty.” That was a very interesting way to put that😄.For the record speaking for myself if the straight guy is hot enough he can be the big spoon
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    I don't understand what did Marco do wrong? Unless you meant Come on, Cosmo
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    Chapter 4

    Other then Elisabetta being p---ed off what would be the repercussions of Giorgio outing Cosmo? This is Ravello after all . There must be more to it. Sadly I can see this contributing to Cosmo's downward spiral to where we are told this story is going. I see absolutely nothing redeeming about Elisabetta and Giorgio I know Cosmo finds Ravello boring but what kind of option is this?
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 4

    You just stole my line😤...kidding😄.Seriously the very idea that you and I were thinking the same thing should scare you to death ( you weren't spying on me were you?)
  15. You're take on things is almost as entertaining as the story itself
  16. I had thought Jerry hit the jackpot with Burton but like as IRL it was not to to be. Good story .I would have added only one thing after Bullard got convicted I would have put him in Rosharon in the cell next to Mo
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    Chapter 4

    @drsawzall - we must have attended school at the same time! I remember that Thanksgiving vividly! What does Columbus have to do with Thanksgiving?🤔 He was at Plymouth Rock also?
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    Chapter 4

    A very good get to know about each other more chapter especially on Colin's part. It is too early to know if Stanley is gay or just a small kid who gets bullied. In either case Colin looks like a better option to speak with Stanley with Colin being younger and not too far removed from being in HS.If Colin succeeds in gaining Stanley trust he could then bring Phil in to add his experience as a counselor. Not only is Phil's story interesting so are Colin's and Stanley's sort of like getting three stories in one
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    Chapter 8

    RivKen would be the best one. That would guarantee longevity.Why? The longest streak in playing consecutive baseball game was set by Cal Ripken so Ripken,RivKen?....Okay I know that's a stretch
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    Entry 40-41

    OK this it pretty much the first time we hear about some slightly annoying trait Ross might have (talking too much) and being lousy at helping Adam exasperated things little plus the tiny blow up between Carl and Ross.Rough patch ahead perhaps? I never noticed the book cover before (Took me long enough) I'm guess Ross house is on the left side and Adam is on the right? One tiny insignificant error. I broke it up without any bloody noses or broken furniture like a WWE match and came home. The time frame this story takes place WWE was called WWF then. The fact that I know that says more about me then anything else
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    Later as we know River and Kenji will have a front row seat to what was happening with Alec and Finn I wonder if observing those two help them navigate their own relationship. I had no idea how much paint was smeared over my person and I quickly lost track of time. If River went out in public with all that paint on him would Anyone really notice?🤔 So Kenji overheard a member of his staff speak of Rivers page. I hope you write a scene where River shows up with Kenji at his place of work I would love to see the staff member reaction
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    It wasn't that bad of a pun. Don't go Russian to any conclusion
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    I have to agree .If Maggie says Mike should go to the guest room If I'm Liam I would go NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
  24. Senile? Let me tell you I'm going to call President Reagan and.....never mind
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    Really? Well I see Mike as this bodybuilder and.....kidding😄
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