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Billy has his reasons (But hell if I know what it is) I would love to have been a fly on the wall to hear what went on in the Judge's Chambers while Crustypants didn't find Billy in contempt and he was a tiny bit less bias when they returned from Chambers I still didn't see any dramatic change in the Judge. I hope you weren't too bored with this scene. Courtroom scenes can be a procedural drag, but I promise everything (well 80% at least) is relevant, even the lies. On the contrary I love a good courtroom case when done right and this was done right. For me I read courtroom scenes I always think of the show Perry Mason.He in about 90% of his cases he always up against the same prosecuting attorney who he always beats.Either that ADA keeps bringing innocent people to trial or he's incompetent always losing why did he still have a job?😄. I wonder how Perry Mason would have handled Judge Crustypants?

Something I neglected to mention although I prefer Connor with M (I'm still not convinced M is human though) I had hoped the Hannah situation could have been handled better .I think fundamentally she is a good person I hope she finds her way back to being a friend and Allie🤞

Wow even more questions then answers now.I though this MIB was an ET of some kind ( might still be)but he apparently is mortal if M was able to kill him with a baseball bat. Needless to say the "Agent" dying is going to bring even more attention from whoever the agent was working for

My comments are going to be disjointed because I have so many of them. As @James Carnarvon mentioned nobody was better at getting into the mind of a confused teen gay boy and being able to describe all the range of emotions that boy is feeling and every one of us readers could relare he was a genius that way. @Ronyx mentioned he became a gay teen author because of @Comicality for that alone we owe him a hugh debt of thanks and I'm certain @Ronyx isn't the only one whether they know it or not other authors on GA or other places are doing what they are doing in part because of @Comicality we are always going to see his influence in other authors works so he will always be alive in that respect @Lee Wilson brought up the the idea of other GA authors completing his unfinished stories.There are pros and cons to that but there is one thing that is certain no matter how talented the author is he or she will not be able to put that special @Comicality touch on it.But it would be an amazing tribute to him. Here is another reason we should all hope for a Heaven and for us being worthy enough for being there. We would get a chance to read all the stories he didn't finish here. I'm really going to miss you Comsie. Thank you for everything💕

You have had your share of characters that are easy to dislike or hate but whoa Stephanie just might be worst or perhaps tied with the two pedo's in After The Divorce. After that despicable note she left Karl perhaps she should have been the one declared insane

II agree with what @pvtguy said about No.15 and No.18 IMO was perfect I think every reader would agree with that. I wonder if you have been to my house because the first couple of lines of No.12 describes my cupboard perfectly😄

So why do the twins seem to never have friends over. Are they as annoying with their peer group as they are to Maggie,Liam and Mike?We don't really know Liam's Dad too well showing up unshaven like Mike described makes me imagine a lot of possibilities. I was never into fingers but after reading the scene between Liam and Mike with Liam's fingers all of a sudden I am. Better start wearing gloves around me LOL

I would thinkConnor has to realize he's dealing with something not of this Earth but he hasn't expressed that in his thoughts and there has to be a connection with the man in black the odd house and M being able to carry him home so why isn't Connor getting it? Before trying any more way to get intimate with M Connor needs to think through what could happen if M get another seizure. I'm thinking possibly Connor trying oral on M and then he gets another seizure and hold Conner so hard that Connor can't extract himself from it.....It would be a good way to go but stilll

I haven't started reading the chapter yet but OMG what you have been going through would rival most peoples ordeals here's wishing that you will get out on the other side happy🤞

I'm tempted to think that phone call from Alec is about finding out about his mother but I recall his phone call to River in IHTT being different so to me this sounds unrelated to that. About River not giving himself enough personal time he seems to have a full plate of various things going on every day

If I recall right I remember you commenting on @Jdonley75 series Chronicles From The Orchard. After what you just revealed those stories must have really gotten to you

For not being poet by nature you certainly paint a vivid imagery.

I tasted an apple Eve knew not, fruit equally forbidden as hers yet so thrilling and sweet I remember its taste long after I gulped it down in haste, only to sour as shame on my tongue. Your were doing a great job of praising the apple but then you brought up that😄 I loved how you transitioned the fruit of the apple to the apple of your eye very well done❤️

Cool Jason and Colin are taking the first steps❤️ Lately, he has been having me stand and take a few steps while I hold onto the bar. I’m hoping that someday I can regain the use of my legs so I can move into an apartment. I know I keep harping on this but what is the deal with Phil's house? I don't remember anything being mentioned about that. Now there could be a valid reason why Phil wants to move into an apartment perhaps the house is now too big for Phil too navigate.But I'm still worried did his Jackass Son sell it? Phil maybe physically limited but he's still of sound mind I would think he would have to be consulted beforehand. This is my wishful thinking (Although I hope some of this happens) That Phil gets to move back in his home with Colin and Jason moving in.With Jason being a therapist I think that would be approved by the Doctor. If his son wants to contest that then maybe one of Colin's classmates from Norte Dame is or knows a good lawyer🤞

The man in Black is more mysterious then ever. And what up with M biting Conners tongue? Any reason I can think of isn't good so I'll just wait and see🤞

This must be a alternate universe otherwise how can Connor not detect the Men In Black similarities? I'm taking a shot here and I'm sure I'll be WAYYYY OFF. Micheal Thomas might be someone Connor knew as a little boy or something and M is some kind of replica. I know nutty crazy but maybe not as nutty crazy as what actually happens here. I have to say Hannah reacted better then one would have a right to expect after their conversation. Povich? Weed? Not exactly guardian of the year material here

Heads up. Order more tissues and maybe even get a prescription for Xanax for the next chapter. Yeah you didn't have to write that I figured this chapter was too calm. Well it might be cool if Karl and Carlo kids becomes friends. Speaking of friends children this is slightly off topic and I bet you already know this the sons of John Lennon and Paul McCartney.James McCartney and Sean Lennon wrote a song together called Primrose Wall and it's pretty good

Please get better🤞

Please forgive me if this sounds ignorant but when I heard Devin talk about being bullied I was thinking if he can transform into animals and assume their characteristics and also turn into big humans I would think he could have turned into a ninja and retain the martial arts they know wouldn't it be possible? OK thanks for indulging me on that. This is how it was my family when we invited people over for dinner we didn't expect to be paid for dinner usually those same people inviting us back would be more than adequate.Is this practice common?

If the ambulance had got there and tried to examine M they might have found something that would indicate M isn't human. Hannah I think would notice Connor's reaction and realize he cares for M wonder what the fall out from that would be? Those Pizza Hut deliveries Connor goes on was told with a lot of details. Makes me think YOU!!! were once a pizza delivery driver or at least knew one😄

So you're making this up as you go along eh?😄

So how do you present this evidence in court ? "The Victim performed oral sex in the detective son's dream." Defense attorney: Objection my client had an expectation of privacy in said dream"

One time I told him about this excellent story that was 67 chapters long and he got it done in 3 days.Don't be surprised if he has this one done by tomorrow.No pressure of course😄

I'm going to be all over the place in this comment so bear with me M (I won't say his name because I don't want him to freak out😄) Didn't know how to eat among many other basic things but he knew the word transmitter (remote) Connor right then should have noticed that and how it doesn't add up that along with the use of the expression human experience so when Connor dismissed the mention of a UFO on the TV news I thought 'Dude doesn't that make you curious?' Connor didn’t think anything. He reached back to the little candy display, to the left of the cashier and grabbed a mega Butterfinger bar. He yanked his wallet out again, and nearly dropped his phone. He tucked the Galaxy under his chin, jerked two bucks out of his wallet – there was only one dollar left now – and slapped the cash on the counter. Eyeing him with suspicion, the cashier took his money and handed him back a handful of change. You said this was a previous story when you did you're editing you missed this part nobody these days gets change from a dollar buying a butterfingers 😄 Speaking of that maybe Butterfinger will sue you comparing their candy bar to what came out of M's butt. Remember the old movie Caddyshack? The Baby Ruth in the swimming pool scene? ( search for it on YouTube if you didn't see it) Perhaps Baby Ruth would have worked better here😄

Right now I'm trying to figure out the best way to describe this wonderful story.While I'm doing that I'm certain one of my more eloquent fellow readers will have a great review until I figure out what to say.But one thing I can do and say without giving a second thought, and that is the sooner this story has 5 stars next to it the better.For those of you who haven't read the Ravello series yet do yourself a favor and make time to do so.You won't regret it