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He said The Story Timothy will have a sequel so lets hope its that one.

It was a privilege to read this story.Wow 96 years old they didn't get cheated.Lets hope a certain author makes it that far and more.You gave clues Colin was going to die first It is pretty much impossible to die at the same time except for a car accident one or both would have to kill themself and that would not be acceptable. But it is very realistic that one spouse dies shortly after another one happens a lot. I love the way you ended it with GG. They left such a big mark the sons will have to rent an arena for the memorial service for those two so many people will want to come.(P.S. mark it complete so I can write a review)

I'm sure there have been more brutal murders then the one in the chapter but I'm hard pressed to find one more brutally described.I'm confident Billy isn't like his father but I do wonder if as a last resort he would have a meeting with Calvin's lawyer implying he knows some of his father's associates? Bryan had asked his dad if he could go to the restaurant and help out, but Diego turned him down. Not only did Diego want to avoid a fine for violating the state's child labor laws,.That reminded me of a time I went into a small taco shop it was a small chain with about 4 other ones around town.The only person working there was a boy who looked 13 and may have been younger he took my order he was so small he had to stand on a milk crate to be tall enough to work the grill.I'm thinking I'm sure some laws are being broken here. You know what? It was one of the best burritos I ever had

Aw I was sort of hoping for the Elvis love child one myself😄

The Ranger should make it perfectly clear to his son that there at least one former Cop there and they figured out what happened and how and this moron should realize how lucky he is (But people like him never seem to learn so we'll see) Unlike the readers who read this when it was first posted I see the next chapter is titled Elias so I guess we are going to find out fast about this situation. Before I read it here is what I'm hoping .Elias after pretending to go bed high tails it out of there . Maybe he tries to make his way back to the camp on foot (I don't know how far it is away) Perhaps he gets reported missing (thats if his Mom gives an F enough) If Greg,Clay and Orson find him I hope Elias is desperate enough to come clean🤞

Have everybody wear crucifixes in fact make one big giant one for battle......never mind ignore me. Would that mean they monsters hybrid could only be used at night?

So are you back at work?Wait I hear something in your background.....you're Boss saying "YOU'RE FIRED".....oops

And this is different how?

Instead of saying it that way say "Sometime on Dec 13 2023...as long as it's still Dec.13 2023 somewhere on earth"

If there really was a butt-fuck Montana I bet a lot of people would go there.Oh and

Elijah’s hands waved about like an Italian mama on a verbal rampage. I liked that line but you should have said Tyler he's the one with the Italian heritage.(None of your Beta readers and Editors caught that one huh?)

I have a couple of thoughts on that can they create a weapon that can simulate the same thing Enya can do? Can Elijah shift into a elemental shifter and give Enya a hand?

What I'm not in the top 5 and you think I pulled a gnomie??? ......Hey where's my phone🤔?

Gee I think that was a.......Rash statement

Welcome back

Bad timing messes up Adam's plans....so what else is new?.

I usually have a guess (usually wrong) about what may happen in the next chapter but I have no idea what Diego found to get such a reaction. And how it could complicate the case. I do have one thought while I was typing this(probably wrong) Was Billy's Father Mob connected?

Clever move with the coins. Armand left Paris without speaking to Christian. It's good to see that all the boys who are old enough are going to be married before Armand and Colin make thier final stop

Like everyone else I was touched by the Elias story.Who is this Danny a step-father? older brother? On one hand I'm interested in his story on the other hand I shudder to hear the details.Did Elias approach Orson because he said he was asexual?

If you happen to be fan of author @CLJobe then you would swear he wrote this Christmas story but he didn't. It has all the things you want in a feel good Christmas story you won't be disappointed,.

Hope to see more of these guys in the future perhaps

I see you used @CLJobe technique you used Tom's Grandmother I'm a similar way that he used GG this had the feel of one of his stories sprinkled in with your own unique take. The one that I was thinking was perhaps this really is his half brother that would have worked also. But I'm glad it turned out this way. Great story

You covered everything really well .All this took me back to when I was doing many of these same things when my Mom passed

The author has said this isn't your typical Christmas story and he is so right. I wish I was eloquent enough to describe this story without giving something big away.I'm afraid if I do I'll ruin the story before you read it but I will say this much this is a MUST!,MUST!!!!! read

Oh my what a tear jerker. I would not be surprised if a young child in a similar situation to Eric's has done something like Eric did leaving the book and note for Gavin and Danny to find. When you know your time is limited and Death could come at any time I think it gives a child a perspective beyond their age. I have seen video of kids who are patients of St .Jude and they all give me that impression.if you have limited resources and can only give sparingly to a cause make it St. Jude. Well done sir.