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Hey @chris191070 stop asking for the next chapter there's a chance it's not going to happen
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Because of the sheltered life he lived in the past he was never in the position to make a mistake like that. Why did hid first mistake in his new situation have to be so huge? The line in the famous prayer "and lead me not into temptation" is very wise.
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Oh that's @kbois communicating with her editors
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And I suspect you don't mean nuts as in crazy
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We boring Yanks call them popsicles
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"Orange," I said immediately. "Anyone who chooses Lemon-Lime is a psychopath." Hey Jimmy I'll have you know I like Lemom-Lime....AND I"M GOING TO KILL YOU!!!!!!(disclaimer: joke)
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When I read the synopsis me being a Yank I had no idea what frozen lollies meant.....And no I'm not going to say what I thought it was
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I'm only part way through the chapter but the way you described the bus ride I had to turn on the fan
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One thing to consider .Yes Levi should own up to his part but perhaps not mentioned the others involved that could lead to retribution. Also speak to his friends (his real friends) first before Matt
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Quite the cliffhanger @Mark Ponyboy Peters have you've taking @kbois lessons.....Or does she take lessons from you?
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No you didn't of it....... You already wrote it a chapter huh?(Or @Mrsgnomie put it in there while you weren't looking)
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Deniability of what?
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Chapter Fifteen - Julian's POV
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Fifteen - Julian's POV
It's a good thing Cal (in a legal sense)has control over Orion because Orion telling Julian this would have been risky. If it ever got to legal action a good lawyer could argue that one of Halcyon former properties influenced Julian wouldn't that be some kind of legal precedent. The main threat is Ben's family especially his Mom. If she even HINTS at filing any kind of complaint if I'm Ben I would tell her if you do this we're through and bring up what happened with Brandon at the same time. -
Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 23: The Weighing of Souls
Hire Gett, Fuct and Stayfuct. Now that's one I never heard before .Is it an original? Very good😄 -
You'll know when I type That's two
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That's one.BTW when am I telling you these things?
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Eric might be in the position where doing the legal thing might F up M/M as there may be a warrant out for him.And anything else he does like keeping him on the ranch would be illegal.He absolutely can't be enrolled in Troy's school and if Eric wanted to adopt him the uncle stuff would have to be settled first. As much as I would be scared sh--less to do so its time to talk to a lawyer
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And I bet 25 of those will be @chris191070 asking for the next chapter
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As soon as Morgan/Miles what started telling Eric and Carson his story I just knew the chapter was ending before we would hear the response. Obviously Eric is going to respond positively otherwise the story ends here. But what does Eric do? If he notifies anybody that Miles is 16 then there is the problem with the situation with his uncle.Does Miles keep working imagine the mess if a 16 YO Miles gets hurt like he almost did today. BTW while we of course knew a stampede can be dangerous the way you described it was very suspenseful
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I don't do explicit scenes featuring those who are under 18. It's a hard line for me. It was also hard for Morgan/Miles and Troy
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mon Dieu. Je me serais chié dessus,” she said with a straight face. Did you get that from our residence nerd? I figured you would know the French word for that.
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When @Mark Ponyboy Peters asked last chapter what you're posting scdedule was you responded Wednesday and Saturdays. Roughly around 8am-ish EST. I always wondered how many minute was in a "ish" now I know in your case it 55 minutes....ish. BTW good morning❤️
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Chapter Fourteen - Ben's POV
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Fourteen - Ben's POV
If the romance box is checked and the unit (Julian) has an...uh ..unit. What substance would be squirting out of if.....
