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Happy 14th Birthday Sam
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Happy 14th Birthday Sam
Well at only three and a half inches I wouldn't think it would be a problem -
You could have had me be the dog
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The main street of Leamington Spa had completed its transformation into something out of a fever dream. It was as if every romance novel, every music video, every half-remembered fantasy had been blended together and projected onto the town like a film reel that had come to life. You pretty much described a chick flick on steroids She was young, maybe nineteen, with pink streaks in her hair and an expression of absolute, unquestioning fury Except for being 19 you can see that on every High School campus
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"Yeah I can take you on my bike Killian" "Your car broke down again?????" "It's been acting up lately . I have no idea why"
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Now I know who this guy's ancestors are
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Well something is going to happen where Wylen shows how useful he can be. “Your not small,” Wylan replied with a slight smile. “How do you know that?” Darien asked as they trotted along. “Last night, ser. You’re bigger than I am at any rate,” Wylan shrugged. I'm sure I wasn't the only reader thinking this but I'll be the perv to say it Exactly WHAT was bigger according to Wylen
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The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
weinerdog commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in The Letter and the Weight that Comes with It
“Okay,” he whispered. “I’ll… think about it. About writing.” My first thought after reading that? Okay so four chapters later Maybe tomorrow he’d buy a postcard. Maybe he’d write: Mom, I’m safe. Then a few sentences later it's November well did say maybe. So I'm thinking Thanksgiving?..Christmas? Stephen’s hands tightened. “Afraid that my son choosing that path will ruin him. That people will hurt him. That his life will be hard. That he’ll suffer.” “And you think driving him into the snow made his life easier?” the pastor asked softly. If it was anyone else but the Pastor saying that I think the perfect follow up would have been to say DUH!!!!! -
‘Although it’s actually more commonly referred to as the Southern Ocean.’ When did that happen? When I was is school it was only The Antarctic . ‘Hello boys. Have you been having fun?’ Charlie and I glanced at each other. ‘Yes, Nan,’ he answered. ‘Just been playing some games.’ Well he wasn't lying
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He was wearing only a pair of boxer briefs and looked like a drowned rat, his hair dripping everywhere, apparently having just come from the shower. ‘I certainly hope you’re not going to school dressed like that, young man?’ I don't see a problem with that?....Do any of you?🤔
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I have the perfect comment about Morgan McNutjob(Not her real name) and this situation.....But I can't post it because I haven't filed the proper forms yet.
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You are NOT speaking ill of the dead ...You are speaking ill of the fictional dead..Sort of like when a movie audience cheers when the bad guy gets it...That works for me
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The last time you said one as in one more drama before TBOB we got five (or so)
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We could ask Paul McCartney ...oh wait that was came IN through the bathroom window
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Tune in? I've been reading instead.What station is this on?
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What a predicament they are in I would like to be alone with either of them in a bathroom but not like that. Here's thought Jacy showed a real interest in the artifacts if McClain confronts them maybe Jacy can say "I know some of those artifacts were stolen" That nightmare Killian had is very disturbing
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Invite Jacy to the cook out Killian
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I love your scene with Scott and Willie but maybe I had a better one "Hey Willie I'm so sorry I didn't notice a couple of your teeth were imbedded in my fist I didn't mean to walk away with them. here you go"
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Lilith, now dressed in clothes that Chloe had helped her with (a process that had involved much swearing, one near-breakdown over the complexity of buttons, and a brief existential crisis about the existence of zippers), Lilith should be thankful that in this case she's not a guy if she is having trouble with the concept on putting on clothing imagine the tragedy of zipping up pants "How do we shield?" "You think about the least romantic things possible." Give them all a picture of me in a thong problem solved
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How do you do that? I can't get my coffee creamer to spell Good ❤️Morning
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Hope everything goes well🙏
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Okay I'm confused (I know nothing new) It seems like like it should be one more chapter coming but there's a Share Your review now link as if the story is over. You said it was 20 chapters and this is chapter 19 but the prologue is also being counted as a chapter so I wonder if this is a GA thing?
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What the children did was very cool. And its good people around him remembered Kitt's birthday.So what will be the thing that will make Kitt ready to really talk to Matt?
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Very well done❤️ . In most GA stories Xavier would be the biggest a-hole in this one I'n not even sure he's in the middle of the pack. Come up with something really good for him in the epilogue....something like he found out his GF is really a Man😄
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Ben had come back an hour ago with three bulging McDonald’s bags and four drink carriers of Coke, Well thats enough for me what is everybody else having? Actually in my heyday that isn't that far off
