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    Chapter 9

    "Do not look so tragic, mon ami," Genevieve purred, leaning against the mahogany, her voice a low, comforting hum. "He is playing a rich man's game. But you and I... we are going to play a different game." Normally my money would be on Alvarezsince he's in the story picture on top of the page.BUT! with Genevieve telling Jeb what to do it's even money
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    Chapter 9

    Would an eventual threesome be out of the question? If it could happen to Darien........
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    Chapter Six

    Ryder: you. on a gay dating app. volunteering at a damn bible school.....Is Ryder really @Summerabbacat? Oh wait he doesn't ride motorcycles but otherwise........
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    Chapter Six

    I thought @drsawzall was going to try for him but I see by his comment he's still after Cole. @mastershakeme write a story about that after this one
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    Aftermath

    Where did Cara sleep? I know the men would never cross that line but it must have been awkward for her. They mentioned it being cold the building doesn't have heating or was it something the generators couldn't address? Boy am I thick of course we know by the scars Taggert was physically abused but now I'm just realizing it might be sexual abuse also
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    Aftermath

    The smell hit instantly. Beef stew made from leftover steak, thick and rich. The scent of it made Ash suddenly realize he was starving. Bowls were filled. A cob of sourdough bread and butter were passed around. The way you describe what they eat makes me hungry. Something @kbois was also good at in her stories. How much do they pay Terry...... I'm thinking of hiring him away
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    Aftermath

    oh you're going to hate me for saying this @kbois but I was thinking of posting something similar before I saw your post. We think alike can you imagine that?
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    Chapter 12

    The assassin recognized Erik but how? Dieter changed his skin. Does Erik have some kind of distinctive mark on his body that gave him away?
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    Chapter 8

    The afternoon sun beat down mercilessly on the rutted, drying mud of Lanternlight’s main avenue, baking the earth into a hard, Well so far you haven't proven @Jason Rimbaud last chapter comment wrong about starting your chapters with weather
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    Chapter 8

    Right now Lemiel opps Lemuel right now is working along side Ephraim but this passage the assault he had suffered, the pain that had stolen his voice—had not been served to God. It had been weaponized by the boy sitting next to him simply to settle a petty, homophobic grudge. That tells me at a certain time Lemuel is going to turn on Ephraim
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    Chapter Five

    As sad as the situation with Cole was I'm glad it happened the way it did.I was curious about how it would end with Cole and I'm glad it wasn't a case of Cole was just pretending to be cool and was really an ass. Well apparently that is not going to be the case with Ryder so we know we already have a different type of personality. I'm surprised nobody has said this yet, How does a funeral home make money? I understand business is dead.......Yeah I deserve that
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    Chapter 9

    How do you think I have time to read all these stories on GA
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    Chapter 11

    Did Dieter change Seb appearance just enough so Baldwin wouldn't recognize him?
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    Chapter 11

    Now I know why my coffee doesn't last as long as it should
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    Chapter 10

    An AI being a snitch? Of course humans designed it
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    Chapter Four

    Do you also have a machine that inserts you into the story? Because otherwise
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    Chapter 7

    And of course circumstances will dictate that Jeb and Alvarez will have to be allies to fight off Ephraim and Lemuel
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    Chapter Four

    Cole sounds okay but the synopsis mentioned someone named Ryder so unless Ryder is Cole's last name it looks like this won't work out. I'm concerned about Theo that isn't normal behavior. This might be me and my overactive imagination but what if the higher ups a VBS somehow find out about Owen? Will they kick him out of the program because he'll corrupt the kids? It would also be a hell of a way to get outed
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    Chapter Four

    8 years old and she was in half the chapter and you already hate her That's a record even for you.Hey she did fix Max's fish
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    Chapter 9

    It may have been mentioned so if it was my bad. Did Levi go to public (or private) school or was he home schooled?Although it looks like he doesn't have friends if he went to a school I'm sure he observed others including gay kids.Perhaps he witnessed some gay kids being harassed or worse and didn't like what he saw.While living with religious teaching Julie for all the mistakes she made wasn't an evil hateful person and based on Levi's grace prayer it reflects that, ‘So, what? You’re worried we’ll make you watch musicals or something now?’ That finally earned a reluctant snort from Levi. Matt relaxed slightly. While Levi been sheltered he did know enough to understand that joke
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    Chapter 10

    I wonder if hearing the name Wyland trigger something is Erik? Do you plan on having Ashot and Dieter meet? That would be something
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    Chapter 10

    "I am haunted by the war," Séb muttered darkly. But not as much after meeting Dieter
  23. Like soup spoon you know the kind you can slurp up a lot? Uh.....what I mean is...er....gotta go .
  24. How many chapters are in a "or so"
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    Chapter 6

    Very well done as you can tell by my last chapter comment I didn't see this coming. While I was wrong about Jeb I may be right about Lemuel and Ephraim. They will be a pain. I wonder if one of Genevieve special clients will be one of the Elders
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