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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    Deniability of what?
  2. It's a good thing Cal (in a legal sense)has control over Orion because Orion telling Julian this would have been risky. If it ever got to legal action a good lawyer could argue that one of Halcyon former properties influenced Julian wouldn't that be some kind of legal precedent. The main threat is Ben's family especially his Mom. If she even HINTS at filing any kind of complaint if I'm Ben I would tell her if you do this we're through and bring up what happened with Brandon at the same time.
  3. Hire Gett, Fuct and Stayfuct. Now that's one I never heard before .Is it an original? Very good😄
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    You'll know when I type That's two
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    That's one.BTW when am I telling you these things?
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    Eric might be in the position where doing the legal thing might F up M/M as there may be a warrant out for him.And anything else he does like keeping him on the ranch would be illegal.He absolutely can't be enrolled in Troy's school and if Eric wanted to adopt him the uncle stuff would have to be settled first. As much as I would be scared sh--less to do so its time to talk to a lawyer
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    And I bet 25 of those will be @chris191070 asking for the next chapter
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    As soon as Morgan/Miles what started telling Eric and Carson his story I just knew the chapter was ending before we would hear the response. Obviously Eric is going to respond positively otherwise the story ends here. But what does Eric do? If he notifies anybody that Miles is 16 then there is the problem with the situation with his uncle.Does Miles keep working imagine the mess if a 16 YO Miles gets hurt like he almost did today. BTW while we of course knew a stampede can be dangerous the way you described it was very suspenseful
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    I don't do explicit scenes featuring those who are under 18. It's a hard line for me. It was also hard for Morgan/Miles and Troy
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    mon Dieu. Je me serais chié dessus,” she said with a straight face. Did you get that from our residence nerd? I figured you would know the French word for that.
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 5

    When @Mark Ponyboy Peters asked last chapter what you're posting scdedule was you responded Wednesday and Saturdays. Roughly around 8am-ish EST. I always wondered how many minute was in a "ish" now I know in your case it 55 minutes....ish. BTW good morning❤️
  13. If the romance box is checked and the unit (Julian) has an...uh ..unit. What substance would be squirting out of if.....
  14. Hey. About next week. Courtney and I have a thing on Saturday. If Kevin cancels on the girls can I bring them by? I need to know by Thursday. This comment would make more sense if I had said it last chapter because it looks like some progress was made but here goes Kevin always bailing out should be an issue between Kevin and Diane but it isn't because everyone Kevin does it's Ben that has to cover.Kevin looks like a lame father who can't be bothered with HIS kids. I see a scene where Julian asks Sophie why her Dad is always busy and Sophie saying something like Diane always says "Okay I'll get Ben to do it" So does Julian get involved in that? On one hand it's supposed to Diane's business but it does affect Ben which is Julian's purpose for being there. Now that may be a complication as far as the company goes.
  15. GO ANDREW!! although there are still some chapters to go so I'm sure Merrick has a counter. There is no doubt Tanaka can match Merrick in ruthlessness but can he be that evil? Where as Merrick would not think twice about killing someone what is Tanaka view I'm know he could if he absolutely had to but would he if he doesn't have to?
  16. after that you were able to successfully hit the publish button
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 3

    You're asking this in the chapter three comments🤔 If your asking about chapter four that already happened.If you're asking about chapter five you're in the wrong place
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter One

    The story isn't only a wild Ride for Owen it is also a wild ride for the reader
  19. Ben should have said "BTW you're welcome"
  20. Can't believe I'm saying this but I'm somewhat surprised Tarquin didn't become more of a POS than he did
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    Chapter 19

    So is Lucas......Marcus Draven's kryptonite?🤔
  22. Happy to hear that
  23. Man there is so much to say but I do have to leave for an appointment so just the hi lights or with this family lowlights. Diane said "Learning their patterns and using them." Who would know about that better than Diane" Benjamin, that thing just stood in my dining room and lectured your family. In my house. About private family matters. Which tommorow you're going to tell your friend at church who said her friend Carol who know a women whose daughter companion became so controlling that the daughter stopped speaking to her own mother...So Diane what about speaking to your friends about Ben's PRI VATE MATTERS!!!! And Julian controlling??? Oh that's your job. And I hate to say this part I love Vera but she should have said stuff here or will Rachel with Diane support keep her Grand childred away from her if she does? I'm guessing the company will have Julian's words verbatim. They were ALL facts I hope that counts for something
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 23

    Oh jeez the word isn't in the comment but the word I see is COMPOUNDING I lost count of many times I yelled in my head. NO!! DON"T DO IT!! STOP!!!!!!AGGGGH!!
  25. Could Merrill plan stand up under media attention yes he has a plan to get Marcus back at that place he calls a church and he has a plan to discredit Jason but not all the kids .There has to be a way to discredit Marcus
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