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Still feeling under the weather and it's been a challenge with Gnomie down too. It's hard being the same person. For real we appreciate your efforts both of you....Or is it one of you?🤔

Yeah I'm going the read the chapter now also.....Can you imagine that?

Not happy with just being the first comment ? You had to be the first TWO comments.

Your midnight? One might think she didn't calculate the time difference right........but we know better don't we?

GA has not been sending notification on certain stories lately. Catherine and Henry shouldn't make a big deal about their code named being Pooh and Eeyore they could have been named Beavis and Butthead

You prefaced the chapter about medical reality but as far as anybody knows has there been Brian tumor remissions? I know it's rare but is it unheard of? Your title of the next chapter is intriguing. Are you speaking of THE Smokey Robinson? If its a positive thing then I second that emotion

Once on a TV show where the topic was about amazing incidents involving animals there was one about a man being lost in the woods on a cold freezing night and he collapsed from exhaustion according to his testimony during the night three wolves came along and laid down on top of him and then left when it became light and a little while later rescuers found him this chapter reminded me of that story. Forgive me if this sounds ignorant but shouldn't have Mac told the parents when they came back with Jack that the dogs were his dogs? if they were dogs wandering around in the woods wouldn't they act more like wild dogs instead of domesticated dogs? I'm sure Jack's parents didn't think of that because they were so relieved when Jack was found but I bet they wondered about that later. I found that suddenly having to use my arms, or wings, to do it was more difficult than you might imagine. I quickly grew tired at first and my longest attempt was 33 feet (10 m), so I knew I’d have to build up my stamina before I could fly farther. You know that old vaudeville joke comedians like Milton Berle used to say "I just flew in from New York and boy are my arms tired" I guess that was true for Mac😄

This is the second time today I didn't get a notification for a new chapter GA is at it again. I'm very curious what's going to happen when they see Pierre cottage it sounds like he has a surprise for them

In California it is 40 days after the date of death I don't know what it would be in this kind of situation. And it varies from state to state.Just saw that @Lee Wilson explained it

I wasn't surprised that Vincent was Ok with his son and Barney being gay and even doing some things in the same room but I was surprised that he joined them. So there were three rapes with the same M.O. and three murders with the same M.O. so safe to say they are connected .was it the J.F. guy has it been seven years? Or did he get out of prison early? Another possibility is he has a rich dad who wants revenge.I say rich because the fact that Barney's parents are wealthy didn't seem to stop anything from happening so however the murders were planned a lot of details were known such as turning off the alarm and finding out what women were alone etc. if this sounds like it was financed by somebody who knew the right people to hire. Maybe J.F. family had mob connections?

Not that Jeremy would want to stay around but can Mrs Lindin do that legally I'm sure she didn't ask beforehand "Are you gay"? I wonder if she had known what Jeremy's dad wanted to do with the conversion place If she would have supported that? It sort of reminded me of Three's Company in reverse they didn't want Jack to room with two pretty girls but oh he's gay thats OK then🙄 Well then Jeremy doesn't have to worry about a job or finding a place now. I looked up Zackby salad wow that sounded goooooood. But alas we don't have any in San Diego

Another outstanding offer from an amazing author. This has the usual elements all his other stories have in this one there seem to be more dysfunctional families involved that leads to bad situations which leads to bad judgement decision by teenagers and some worst ones by flawed parents. Also the topic of mental illness get discussed with adds to the chaos as the title of the story states. There are a few more flawed characters than usual in this story that the readers will despise but this author does manage to navigate this to a satisfactory ending

Another excellent @Ronyx story but IMO he left a few unanswered questions. I'll get to that later. First we can be reasonably sure Seth relationship with his Mother will improve although it's a small sample the mere fact Julie got into Stacy's face for her behavior spoke volumes. I agree with @Cane23that Seth leaving the house may have been a wake up call for her. Another thing we can assume is the four boys are going to continue the bond they formed .I don't think Seth has ever had three friends over his house in his entire life let alone all at once and it was also a good sign Julie didn't object to that (I believe Jim would have more on that later). And lastly it looks very good for Blake he looks to be in the perfect place with Marie and Steve. Now for the unanswered parts.Will Seth have a relationship with his Father? I think Jim showed some irrational and ignorant homophobia with these rules he set down for Seth . I don't get the sense he cares for Seth and Stacy like he does Emily. And speaking of Emily will Seth have any kind of relationship with his half sister? Would Jim allow Stacy to have a relationship with Emily?(Although knowing Stacy she probably doesn't want one).And about Stacy will she improve into someone resembling a human being or it too late? Ron has done two sequels both of them excellent he did Scott's Story because he said he didn't like how like how he left things with Scott in the Mark's Revenge story he also wrote A Bridge To Yesterday in part I suspect because of how he left things with Gene in Brittle As A Bird. Now it sounds like I'm calling for a sequel to this story .I'm not(Although I would be OK with that) but what I would like to see in a future story perhaps centered around another troubled teen boy is to have Emily appear in it as a high school student and a supportive friend of the protagonist. She can mentioned she has older gay brother in Seth who just graduated college. Through that we can get some of these questions answered from this story. But I would like to stress this is still an excellent offering from one of our favorite authors.

c'est ta faute, je l'ai raté

Get with the program you didn't brag about being first on page 5

The synopsis of the story said murder mystery as the chapter went along I was thinking to myself I guess it's going to be Carolyn who is found dead. My first reaction is that it's someone from the staff that only works during the day it would not be unusual if Vincent saw one of them plus they would know their way around the house to get the knife.If Jim and Barney (Yes I'm going to call him Barney I don't like the name Claude either) do play detective I wonder if they will do something they saw in one of Barney's dad movies

I was hoping Billie would know a way. Would going to business that does DNA tests and explaining to them he thinks his house had an intruder and asks that he wants to know if it's his blood or someone's else's be too risky?

It looks like @CincyKris Asher comment last chapter called it right.Well at least its out in the open now I hope Chase left so he could ponder everything. I agree with @drpaladin that Micco is being gaslighted.One thing I don't get I'm am far from the smartest guy around and the Micco character is smarter then me but my first thought after Micco saw the blood was collect it and do a test to see if it yours.Why didn't he think of that?

Very well said you forgot one key critical part "If it didn't happen then it happened"

Who took video of you on the dance floor?

Not a bad thought how about Corbin for that matter with a new mate?

The more I think about it the more I believe that something significant is going to happen in Germany

Perhaps this is comment # 25 lets see if @kbois beats me this time......yep she did but she's not doing it on purpose of course not

Great point Huntington may not go the fortified castle but he could be playing opossum for some other reason.

Ass crack is you being classy huh? Well that sort of says it all