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All this talk about going Jamie and Garvin going back to their quiet lives in the shop . To late @Geron Kees started writing about them their lives will never be quiet again. (But fun)

I'm so glad a few other readers already wrote well thought out eloquent reviews because I had no idea how I could have described it.Best I can come up with GA love story meets Back To The Future. I'm sure this subject matter has been written about on GA but it is the first one out of the hundreds of GA I read I have come across that itself makes this story unique add to that its written by an incredible author and your in for an very enjoyable journey

How was Snave able to see Travels Between Worlds. I guess Thorvil took him to see it and nobody said anything about it Jamie gaped at that. "You mean, for us to stay in contact, even if we are not together in the nether?" "Yes. I have some ideas, actually." Flitch emitted another whispery laugh. "Go. I will work on this new idea here, and see what comes of it. Perhaps by the next time you visit, I will have an answer." From that exchange I'm thinking when Jamie battles Porvus that is when Flicth figures it out and then just at the right moment will tell Jamie what to do next. Just a guess I was so glad to hear everybody in the group say they don't understand all the explanations about magick I know I sure don't .......Does the author🤔

I wonder if we have the Magick Urvan used on Earth? You know the part about making it bigger? That would explain all the porn stars

That one would be worn out by overuse from one of your stories

Okay believe it not a serious comment thats actually about the story It had been mentioned in the comments perhaps Perry has felt this way all along for Kyan and that is a reasonable speculation I'll go a little farther perhaps not as reasonable.In addition to not much being said about Perry's back story there hasn't been a explanation on why Kyan and his parents are estranged(still no contact as far as I can tell). I'm sure @Mrsgnomie is going to explain all that in the coming chapters but in the meantime I'll throw this out there. Perhaps Kyan as a teenager had a brief fling with a buddy and the parental units found out freaked out causing the rift.When Kyan married Dayna the parents may have it was a sham. OK thats my nutty spec. I am really anticipating the next meeting between Kyan and his parents which I assume will happen

Wha.....wha.......WHAT DO YOU MEAN NON-EXISTENT????

He wore that number 72 Jersey just so you can tell us its 72 hours to the next chapter didn't he

I totally believe it when Perry says that being with his nieces and nephews are the best part of his day how can you not love those kids.

Just noticed .This is the only time I'll ever be able to say this so forgive me "NYAH,NYAH I beat you"

This!!!! Is bright and early to you??????? Seriously I was worried something was wrong glad to see this and that you're OK

He said 6 chapter just in case Porvus was spying on us .Just wait till he sees that this is still going after chapter 35. It was Jamie's idea

You just a-mage me sometimes (Yeah I know that was a reach)

Good riddance Urvan although I do appreciate the attempt to bring a little sympathy to the character evil is evil. I suspect I have not read more of Geron's stories that what I have read. I'm thinking back to the CB stories and Doorways stories has a main character the readers liked or loved perished yet in one of these types of stories? I ask this because were that to happen it would be in this story where there is all this unknown danger. But just to be clear I want all the group to be there alive and well at the end "Exactly," Jamie replied. "This needs exploring, before we go marching into Methuwan. Understanding how magick does what it does may lead to a better control of its use." "Consider it a group study, for all of us will be engaged." Shouldn't this group study take place in the nether? That way no time will elapse when they are done studying and head on back

While these kind of chapters are hardly my favorite you have written quite few of these in this and other stories of yours and I have to say nobody writes this kind of scene better than you

Just thought of something. Imagine if they actually HAD gone skinny dipping

I understand why you say that but that's a classic part of an abusive controlling relationship and that is never good there has to be another way of dealing with this. But I do say Blake has to be brought up to speed of the nature of Craig and Seth so-called relationship so he can least be made aware of Craig and the possible danger. Sadly knowing how fragile Blake's emotions are I can also see this devastating him

Well one thing is for sure as much criticism as Seth Mom deservedly gets from us readers Blake clearly has the worst parents. I didn't see the end of the chapter happening like that but I guess I should have .WTF was Craig stalking them? Following them from school? Apparently he missed football practice because of his jealousy.It is starting to look like extreme behavior on Craig's part . If I'm right (I hopeI'm not ) I fear for Blake's well being🤞

That sort of confirms my Scooby-Doo comparison from an earlier chapter

Trust me when I'm a customer you don't want ME to be right

Jamie leaned forward. "You have been to Methuwan?" "Yes. In the service of Porvus, I was taken many places." "I see. And this...portal. It's a device for translocation?" "Yes. But it only will take one to Cotrin. There are no other destinations left, it seems." I took that to mean he's been there but I suppose it can be interpreted that he hasn't been there

Since Lautan has been there Jamie can translocate all of them there.

Urvan realizes at least at the moment he was overmatched. The smart thing to do is to come back with Porvus but with years of arrogance he may think all he has to do is makes some adjustments and have another go at Jamie .That would not surprise me or perhaps Porvus insists he takes him on one on one. "Ah, yes. Procreation." Flitch's interest intensified yet another degree. "Perhaps now you can now show me how this is done?" We all know even if Jamie wasn't gay he would be a gentleman and refuse but I could see others saying (not from the group of course)"This is in the interest of science"

Like @Geron Kees said in a previous chapter comments it's in his contract Urvan has to stay around for a number of more chapters

You initially described Jun as a boy so I guess he's around Liam's age? I had some nutty thoughts as I was reading this . Could the HAWT profile of Alex actually be Jun? Why would Jun do that you ask? Maybe he felt being Asian in a non asian country has been a barrier to him finding someone .I know that's a reach but it could explain why "ALEX" wouldn't send a picture of himself