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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 34

    I can't help but see the parallel between our college football and players turning pro and these guys in this story big TV contracts and everything. Knowledge is power and they know Zoel stole the plant. Plan wisely
  2. Thank you for this Ballade and for explaining your influence in writing this I was thinking of the immigrant children separated from their families while reading this
  3. Things are just starting for these two . Looking forward to see how this progresses. BTW how the heck did you find out about my word "Sugar bananas "?...uh never mind
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    Like I said in the last chapter comment I sort of remember reading this but I believe I have confused some of this story with another one so what I said about reading some tough subject matter might be exaggerated as I could be thinking of another story. Since my memory is a little senile here goes.I suspect Mom's silent treatment is not related to what happened in school.Perhaps she found evidence James is gay and is upset he hasn't told her? Dion stealing a sandwich might be clue to why he doesn't talk. Great gag by Mr. Marshall
  5. What a spot(no pun intended)for this chapter to end.This story now spans into two Christmas seasons and its more than worthy of it.
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 40

    🎉🎇🎶🔔🍻
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    Chapter 40

    If we get no more stories he'll be shot somewhere else(poetic license not to taken seriously)
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    Chapter 40

    Thank you for that list I was so glad to see almost all the other stories that list except for two I have read Think about it most GA readers like the same stuff I like......scary huh? One last thought this author has a story entitled Corrupting the Innocent on this list yet she blames us in the krew for being how we are🤔hmm.
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    When the ghost first appeared I was thinking CC but Karen is good (and she isn't a Karen) When it was mentioned that "maybe somebody will write about it you can read all about it" reincarnated Ron can tell everyone to read @AquariusGuy stories
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    I have no problem with that but why the Chrysler buiding.
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 128

    When Tommy said "Dad you won't forget us." it made me a little sad it sounds like there's still some vulnerability there
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 127

    They still have to sell Grandfather on the idea.From what we know of him Alesander seems like he's willing to do the work.
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Merry Christmas everybody a @Ronyxstory for the holidays. The author did say it was one of his earlier stories so I'm not sure but I think I might have read it on TMJ the alphathizing the stacks sounds familiar. If I'm right I remember it being a good story (of course) but I don't remember a lot so I'll still read and comment. After beaning someone in the face with a schoolbooks there is no way Mrs. Horner should be still teaching I hope I'm not out of line saying this but without giving any details be prepared for some very difficult subject matter (trust me it's a good story)
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    Chapter 126

    That was sort of like a mini cliffhanger. I thought the conversation was going to happen in this chapter. But now we know it will be in the next chapter with the question "Can they convince Grandfather "
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 40

    On the chapter page of Spirt Woives
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    Chapter 40

    Outstanding pics.I see one small problem. There is no picture of Caleb .I heard there was a disturbance in the Pacific Northwest are the two connected?🤔 @Mrsgnomie hasn't been heard from since
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 125

    I think a pool for the orphanage is an outstanding idea, I don't believe this has been mentioned but what year is this story set in?I had that thought when they though about getting a copy of the film for the orphanage.I then realized there is never any mention of going online either for the kids for school or Colin's business (not that I remember at least) The kids never play any video games I'll let everybody debate if thats good or bad
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 37

    I don't know if that disqualifies you for the Korner krew or if you're perfect for it.
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 37

    Oh just ask all the readers they would want to do a whole lot more then slap him
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 33

    For a moment I thought Pergapo killed Cersi So Pegapo competed wearing a just a pink speedo? I can think of another occupation where that would be the case I wonder if he does that in his spare time? The name of the announcer "Lick Dane"? I used to watch as a little kid wrestling on tv from the Olympic auditorium in Los Angeles and the announcer for that was named "Dick Lane" did you know that and named your announcer that intentionally? Or was it just a coincidence😄
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    Chapter 124

    I don't know much about the fisherman business but can't Grandfather find a good business plan AND catch a large tuna at the same time
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    Chapter 124

    Hey @CLJobewho was it that fell in the water
  23. Happy Thanksgiving Parker. I bet you're thinking why is he telling me this here? This was the chapter they all spent at Eustace farm for Thanksgiving and in Addition to Andy's families with the Stevenson's and Whitley's he also had his Grandmother plus his uncle's family I guess he met his cousins for the first time such a huge contrast to his Thanksgiving in Chap.36. Andy in that one Thanksgiving found out what it was all about and you told it perfectly. I have a lot to be thankful for.I know this sounds corny but it's true one thing I count among being thankful for is coming across this wonderful story and being able to tell people about it and I got some to read it. Again Happy Thanksgiving
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 8

    For those of us who read this it is so hard not to say anything so I know it's even harder for @kboiswho wrote it to begin with for what it's worth interesting thought
  25. Perfection is a heck of a title to give something to live to it.But what I will say the more and more you do these the closer and closer you get to it
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