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Since Harris knows there was a mole on his staff could the stuff the safe be disinformation? "Yeah. Something has Travis stirred up. He's stressed and bitchy." He shrugged. "Won't tell the rest of us what's going on, but he was talking to the ISP (Idaho State Patrol) about some joint project coming up. I overheard a little, but then he closed his door." I'm surprised more wasn't mention about that from the readers .Could it have been about the family opening up a new restaurant in town
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I'm going to say something that maybe is obvious this conference that Thorvil is at how important is it? After finding out more of what they are up against is there a way for Jamie to communicate with Thorvil? Or should he transport himself to the conference? This now sounds like all hands on deck situation including Thorvil
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“I guess a book fell out of your locker and hit you on your neck? Huh?” Sounds like Blake may have used that one himself in the past. Glad he is finally going to Seth's school and he has classes with Seth (as well as Roni) the only bad part is there is one class with Craig. I bet Roni will already get info from Blake on their way to class. Okay WARNING: Crazy prediction time from yours truly Jennifer and Sherman don't have dates for the dance followed by Sherman saying he's not going to the dance I don't think @Ronyx put that in there for no reason. So here's what MAY happen Roni or Seth may get Blake to take Jennifer to the dance while Roni gets Julie to go with Sherman that means all the relevant characters are going to be at the dance. If that happen Roni won't be able to not flirt with Julie while Blake may flirt with Seth .Insanely jealous Craig will see this and react. Even if he manages to restraint himself from not making too big of scene in front of everybody(not guaranteed BTW) Stacy will notice something and even her dumb ass will know something is up. Of course my predictions are only right about 20-25% of time but I think a few of these I mentioned will happen and as a result this dance is going to be a doozie
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Now that would be something to take a gander at.............So so sorry for that
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The goal was for Corbin to blend into the town and jus like any other Joe Blow but now he's a partner in a local popular coffee shop.Granted Hailey may be out in the sticks and but he now has a higher profile it may be just enough difference for Stefano to find him. Corbin has to make sure that Karen doesn't put his image on their website etc. This is wishful thinking but could the new "Family" in town have a beef with Stefano and they take care of him, Would be an interesting twist BTW hope the Coffee business really is profitable because $50,000 is not a lot of money these days
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When Corbin showed up at the construction site was there something about the way family interacted that distinguished them as a mafia family as opposed to just some random Italian family? I guess Corbin would notice something. Otherwise it looks like he's giving into a stereotype although under the circumstances it's understandable.
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Are you sure it's not one of those missing classified documents
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No just annoying 😄
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So who was this beggar? My first thought was that its Urvan in disguise but while he's formidable this Beggar seemed to be of another level.
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I'm surprised none of your astute readers didn't mention this but Paul's comment “Well, I don’t have the right to ask it of you, but I’d like if it stayed that way.” Now we know Bruce has noticed Corbin more then a little bit what do you want to bet at the coffee shop Paul will walk in see Corbin and Bruce conversing and exchanging a smile and Paul will jump to the wrong conclusion
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I have a good friend who was a cop and one of the first things he did was did a background check on me just for the hell of it.He told me I was clean ..gee thanks. I bring this up because I can picture Paul doing that on Corbin.Now obviously nothing about Corbin's former life is going to come up but after seeing the background check will Paul think "this seems too neat and clean not even a parking ticket.It's almost like he's another person hmm🤔"
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As long as Stefano is out there Corbin is not in the clear but Harris is so good at his job and has Corbin's back and Corbin picked a place that's so remote there's no way Stefano can find him...........OK you can stop laughing now
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The truth is the only option any kind of cover story just won't do. I bet the rabbit was Bugs Bunny anybody that crosses his path gets in trouble
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@Timothy M. and @raven1 are the closest to what I'm thinking I believe Corbin thinks it's too risky for the other person Paul or whoever to have a relationship with him
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Like many others I also thought witness protection but can the word handler be used another way besides government? Corbin spoke Italian so is his family part of THE family? Maybe dear old dad is protecting him that would explain the oodles of money Corbin has. And perhaps what happened to Liam was supposed to happen to him. I'm probably wrong but it is fun to guess
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Before I say anything else I'm going to mention something I should mention much more often I noticed @craftingmom is editing this just recently I noticed that is the case with a lot of other stories I read on GA including my very favorite story (I won't say which unless you ask) that right there says what an incredible editor @craftingmom is. Snave had the very same thoughts I had and that is just wait until his brother hears him.Snave being able to communicate thoughts now will be a tremendous asset. When Dorf said "That would upset me as well. They were lucky to escape so easily. I am not certain I would not have lopped off a piece or two of each, just as a lesson in manners." I shudder to think what piece or two he was referring to🫢
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Did it on a smartphone right?
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You answered a question I was going to ask and that was when Devin turns into another person does he still have his fingerprints? We found out from Barry the answer is no.It does makes me wonder when Devin changes into another person is it a fictional person that doesn't exist or is it a random person that does exist if you understand my question. So Devin agreed to tell the same story to his family that Mac is going to tell his parents.Well that's a good idea except for one thing MAC HASN"T EVEN TOLD DEVIN THE STORY YET!!!!!!
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You really do know me too well Now write this date down I was thinking of commenting on what @Fanciful Soul wrote but this time had the discretion not to.BUT!!!!! since you called me out here's what I was going to write "You better be careful with those hard questions @Fanciful Soul otherwise you'll be in the Korner with the rest of us." Hmm🤔 I guess I responded anyway
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Opps smartphone strikes again I'm going on my desktop know
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My first reaction is Urvan is going to do something to have Mort and Miles angry at Raimey again maybe even others.I worry that he found a way to eavesdrop in their conversations
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Whew we get a breather today only 10,367 words
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Totally agree with the two previous readers about the judge.Is there a stenographer for adoption cases?Because that would mean there would be a record of the Judge statement and that WILL come back to haunt him I bet Colin knows a reporter that could make that better known.
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Some readers are assuming Paul is straight but he spent a good chunk of the day helping Corbin no mention of a wife and child. That's not proof he's gay either just saying.
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Really liking this and want to find out more about Corbin past.I'm not worried about the guy with the rifle if he were dangerous the story would be over. I don't know if you like this or not but as great as the chapter was my biggest takeaway from this was I now need check out Idaho.Why? Idaho nachos of course
