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Everything posted by weinerdog
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The GM/director who has been flawless up to this point makes one of the stupidest mistakes. He should have done a profile on himself VULNERABILITIES: THINKING HE'S SMARTER THEN EVERYONE
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Yikes I was being facetious in my comment but I was closer than I thought and I almost said CW but I wasn't sure if that was still around.
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Not done reading the chapter yet but when I saw this **HILCREST HIGH: SEASON 1**. Was that on Fox? Oh wait this is Canada CTV? YTV?
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Australian-Texan?🤔
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. “Why would you tell him?” “Because they asked. They knew something was wrong, and they asked, and I answered.” “But—but, uh.” He darts his eyes around. “But what?” I push past him. “You act like it's this huge fucking secret that would be the downfall of humanity. The thing is, though, Bryan, is that the only person who got hurt in this whole thing was me. Sure, it was stupid of me to kiss you, but I was twelve years old and confused, and my best friend kicked me to the curb.” “It wasn’t like that,” he says. On one hand Cooper says his parents asked and he answered simple communication right? So why can't he communicate with Bryan?
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Welcome the story @Jason Rimbaud without giving anything away I'll only suggest this..Be patient...But it will be worth it
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Determination and Misunderstanding
weinerdog commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Determination and Misunderstanding
Out of all the way I imagined it going I have to admit this wasn't one of them So now I imagine Kitt is going to have conversations with Tom.Mateo and perhaps even Leah, Wouldn't it be something if one of the children at the center says something that inspires Kitt to take some kind of action? Now what does Matt do? I guess he is going to stay quiet as far as telling any adult about this.He absolutely won't tell Kitt's parent because Stephen is the one responsible for this happening. Matt won't tell his parents because he'll be afraid they will tell Kitt's parents. One scene I hope to see is IF Matt somehow lets it leak that he knows where Kitt is and Stephen approaches Matt is his boorish way and demands Matt tell him where Kitt is I want Matt to go off on Stephen with some choice words Not that I disliked the character before but in this chapter we find out Lindsay is an awesome person -
Summer Ends and a Bunch of Happy (and Horny) Boys
weinerdog commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Summer Ends and a Bunch of Happy (and Horny) Boys
I’m pretty sure I'll be the biggest guy in ninth grade. Yeah, they better watch out. Are they in a junior high or high school? Middle school doesn't have ninth graders.If they are in a junior high then Scott can take care of things but if it's high school uh-oh Sam's birthday party is next weekend. Virgil's a couple weeks later. Well Scott doesn't have to buy them a birthday present he already has it on him. Of course it's debatable who is really getting the present🤔 "Yes Bobby. And saying nakkie isn't cool. Just go with nude, naked, or even bare-assed." Yeah I would never say nakki I would be to embare-assed to -
The Soldier's are one thing but it seems Septimus himself is not aware of the rooftops. I mean if they can't find the children anywhere where else could they be? The Knights might be aged and smaller in numbers but as far as being tacticians they have a huge advantage
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I think it's Septimus himself shifting into whatever that was.If I'm right I think this would be known among the more elder knights
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Then Mrs. Hartley said: "I'm going to need more tea. Much more tea." She didn't mention what she was going to put in the tea. "Does it count as pansexual if you only, technically, sleep with yourself?" I wonder if a pansexual with a double jointed back has this conversation with himself
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I have to think there's a way for the GM to think things are going to plan and BOOM at the very last second before he can react something happens, Tim being an insider now might be in a position to do that
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You need this more than I do
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I'll refrain from commenting on chapters that haven't appeared on GA yet but I will say I'm disappointed in Hunter also, But I remember how horny I was when I was Hunter's age, Could I honestly say I would not have done what he did? I hope I wouldn't have but I can't say for sure,
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There has to be some way for Kitt to let Matt know he's alive and surviving without giving away where he is. “It leads to hardship. To judgment. To sickness. To danger. To a life without… without normalcy. I didn’t want that for him.” Right now Kitt has all of that.Is it because he's gay? No Stephen it is not it is because of YOU!!!!!!!
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So the very idea he could think, even for a moment, that Tom would turn on him made him nauseous. It was a feeling he never wanted to feel again. For a person who is so good at what he does Gabriel sure fucks up a lot Sean, with zero training, had an innate ability to observe and correctly read people’s motivations, Who knows how far this Sean/Gabriel thing goes Gean? Sabriel? but I digress. Even if they only end up being friends it sounds like Sean could make appearances in future Gabriel stories with this ability he has. Hmmm🤔 is Justin Timberlake an operative by any chance? At the far back was a large table with a brightly lit vanity. This is where he’d alter his appearance and change the look with wigs and makeup to transform into other people. When I first read that I was thinking if Gabriel messes up with Sean he could his appearance and start over. Unless Sean seen a certain body part of course.......Actually I would not surprise if Gabriel has stuff to change the appearance of that also
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All these things happening....... Sound like a typical day of a rock band to me
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Jesse put a hand to his chest. “Excuse you. I am wearing a costume.” Ariel raised one dark eyebrow. “Oh?” “Yes,” Jesse said gravely. “I’m a tired dad.” That reminds of a time we had a costume party at a house I was a roommate at. I was in my regular clothes and somebody approach me and said "You're suppose to have a costume" And I said 'I do I came as Comfortable Man"
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Chloe snorted. "Charlemagne? You want to call him Charlemagne?" @Topher Lydon since your stories are set in Canada I assume you're Canadian. Well if you are I'm sure you know who Burton Cummings is (He's been forgotten by some in the U.S.) Well he wrote a song called Charlemagne (probably could be found on YouTube) where there are lyrics that read 'I did not and I could not change my name to Charlemagne" I wonder if you were thinking of that🤔
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They were brothers, bonded by a weird twist of demon trickery that had them in each other’s bodies, and forced to share a bedroom. One thing about those two sharing a bedroom...Seeing each other naked is not an issue since they sort of do 24/7
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You forgot to include (Not her real name)
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No no It's not As The World Turns this story has a different Lily Snyder
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I'm in if Jacy will visit the office a lot
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Maybe he is and Mr Chen knew that and THATS the reason he told Ben to stay away away from his son😄
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I have no idea where this is going and what @Topher Lydon is going to write next (That might be impossible) but here's an idea if Justin is trying to tell the police what is happening and he is being dismissed as a babbling idiot why not have all the other pieces Ben,Asher,Marc ,Chloe and all the others I'm not mentioning come forward with the same nutty story with the same texts that should still be on their phone and especially the suicide arc how could the authorities ignore all that? I'm guessing what I just wrote is flawed.So somebody tell me why it is
