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On to read chap 19 so I'll take my wild stab before I read it.Macy somehow prevents Swift killing Lucas.
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Interesting all this time Jace assumed he was working for good and he might very well be doing that but those questions he asked himself about Christian and Harry Karns if they had gone on to do evil OMG. One would think Jase would want to do do some google search to see how the the people he healed turned out. Did something prevent him from thinking about that?
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Oh my.You gave a hint things might turn out well in the end but not without a lot of drama before that
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It's sad and dissapointing that dad said something like that to begin with
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I have the same question @scrubber6620had why can't Jace heal himself🤔 It seems like all these stories about people with supernatural abilities have these annoying rules.People who are called on to do what Jace does have the ability to heal people....except for themselves of course
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"Unless you hit Master Bait and Tackle Shop. Their T-shirts are worth their weight in gold on eBay.” I'm not kidding I have a step brother who lives in Ft Myers Beach and he sent me one of those t-shirts for my birthday. Excuse me while I go on eBay.
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Simple deduction if there isn't a clue in the stuff Lucas and Jace brought back with them then this chapter would have been pointless and you don't write pointless chapters
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One thought what an incompetent security staff the hospital had.
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So many theories expressed and every single one of them plausible .Thats the sign of a good mystery
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If Macy was taken against her will there are two possibilities It somehow has something to do with Martinez car or Connie looked at Lucas recent assignments and noticed Lucas never returned the keys to the condo and put two and two together
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Adding one more thing to speculation about Swift if he were really a detective assigned to this case he would have had more of an objection to Jase presence
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Intellectually we all know this will happen again and again but it still hurts deeply especially when its such a gentle soul like @Mawgrim
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Every thought I had has been covered in the chapter comments.What @raven1 said is a concern but Jase has been at this for awhile and after that talk with Philip he's aware of that possibility so I'm guessing he has found ways to counteract that. Only one flaw in this chapter Jace went to Starbuck and only had a bill of $4.16?Even in 2007 that was almost impossible to do😄
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Remember the slogan "Must see TV"? Chapter nine will be "Must read GA" I'm going to get slightly off topic here when Lucas said “On the lam? Really?” Lucas arched his eyebrow at the tiny pair of sparkly jeans Jase had picked. “Do people still say that?” I reminded of a recent local story on the news about about a person who been going on farm and how should I put this? Diddleing the sheep.A couple of nights after I saw that one of the late night one of the late night comedians(I forget which one) referred to that story and "Police haven't found him yet he's taking it on the lam" Sorry I thought this would be a good place to share that
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On one hand thats an excellent question on the other hand if that would be the case perhaps Jace would stop trying to save Macy(maybe not)This tells me Jace expects to move on.
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Was there any explanation why Waynes mom never told the dad about him?
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I was thinking the same thing @Daddydavekwas thinking that the boys were in love but your response implies something else.BTW I'm in th USA like yourself can you imagine that.
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The main reason I'm writing this review is so this story will get the 5 stars it deserves although I'm confident others will follow. There isn't much I can say about this story without being redundant about what I reviewed about his other stories what I wrote about those apply here it has all the elements a great @Ronyxstory has and of course that can only be a good thing. I will say in this story there are two supporting characters who are exceptional even by Ron's high standards( I won't do a spoiler and say who)
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We found out the reason why Dion stole food from the cafeteria. I liked Mr Marshall as a character I but I felt after finding out why Dion took the pieces of fruit he should have just let it go but then again if he hadn't given Dion detention he probably doesn't get interested in James. I'm so glad Mr Wilbur was at the barbecue. As good as all the characters were Mr Wilbur was the star of the story I hope I'm not out of line for mentioning this Ron has this on his Facebook page but there is a brand new story coming soon (he didn't say when) I can't wait😀
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A thought Trevor had "Trevor felt his wolf give him a little mental kick to remind him to breathe harder like the others". Would it really be suspicious if Trevor wasn't breathing hard? I can't shake the felling things are going to smoothly in recovering the stolen funds. Trevor is certainly a magnet first Skyler and then Randy.It's good thing I'm not doing Trevor's job after Skyler opening comment to Trevor I probably would have kept Skyler from doing his security detail
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You might have just given @WolfM an idea for a future chapter or story
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Most of my thoughts in this chapter have been covered by the smart readers @raven1has a good point about a tracking device on Martinez car I had the same thought about Lucas phone which he ditched.Was it a CPS issued phone? That could help explain how the bad guys found them. The stuff Macy was saying to Jase was extraordinarily intelligent coming from a 7 year old I'm guessing thats one reason why Jase was drawn to Macy's situation
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Based on the subtle clues the author has said in her comments I guess Lucas will be able to handle Boss Hogg in the next chapter and Jace will be able to stay close enough to Macy wherever they decide to place her.Bur like @drsawzalland @CincyKrishave stated I see Jace special ability coming into play somewhere down the line. BTW question for @Libby Drew you have this taking place in Florida and you describe the surroundings in a lot of detail.Do you live in or are from Florida? I ask because another GA author who all the readers of this story know who I'm referring to is from Florida.Both of you have similar styles
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Someone or something made the determination that Jace has to help 40 souls in trouble and its taken him seven years to do so.The numbers 40 and 7 show up in the Bible a lot maybe I'm off but that's an interesting coincidence. Other then that that I'm still pretty clueless where all this going
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Jace reacted like knew his usual powers of persuasion wasn't working on Lucas so he decided to leave regroup and find another way.Is there something unique about Lucas that even he doesn't know? What will situation be when Jace tries again to see Macy?
