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Ron was referring to his website The Mustard Jar over on that site the story is about three chapters ahead of where it's at on GA and other sites. I like to comment on GA so I purposely don't go to TMJ because it might unintentionally influence my comment here. So since you saw that on FB it sounds like there are about 3 more chapters left on GA. Your point is still valid I would have thought there would be at least 5 more chapters. But have faith Ron will cover everything

I see you learned well from @Danilo Syrtis

No,no,no it's not super sperm it's super splerm

You saw the comments in @kbois latest chapter some readers already think you two are the same person so that would stand to reason

So @kboisis going to post two chapters a week while you will post one.I'm surprised she hasn't commented on that yet by sayIng "Wimp"(BTW I don't think that)

Ow Ow Ow my head hurts from all this science talk I'm glad Mike and Bobby are there to ask them to explain things in English Speaking of Mike and Bobby I heard them say"'Twelve hours" and "More thumb twiddlin' for us, I reckon."They are still teenagers right? You would think they would have brought the latest Playstation for times like these. Maybe Illia could whip something up for them. "Simple caution, probably," Pacha observed. "Just as my own people did not make contact with the vessels and inhabited worlds they encountered. Much more must be known before diplomatic steps are taken" That got me thinking people on earth who are skeptics have asked why haven't these UFO's contacted us? I bet they observed us for awhile and concluded" This planet is too primitive we're out of here"

I hope their aim is off then

Yeah she missed you alright ....her aim was a little off.

One down and one to go.Most likely Nettleman would be gone anyway but the fact the Governor got involved in asking Morgan to resign and Nettleman and Morgan were joined at the hip on this issue even a dumb ass like Nettleman could see the writing on the wall he's toast. What would normally be a happy chapter with Morgan resigning and Myles and Peter making it official has me really ,really worried.Now granted I tend to worry about the worst happening when I read GA stories but I can't shake the feeling some other incident might happen. I have been thinking about the chapter ending on what would be sort of a double date with Parker/Darius and Myles/Peter going to the ice cream parlor. Sounds innocent enough but I think the Ice cream place was mentioned for a reason.Parker and later Natalie ate at Charley's with no problems but that was at a busy popular place during lunch time and early dinner time during the daylight and Charley was seen interacting with them so any customer who may have wanted to say something didn't out of respect for Charley possibly.Contrast that to the ice cream place which we know nothing about yet it's is in a different part of town but more importantly it's night time on a Saturday night which will be probably a younger crowd with Rosemont High students there.What if Rosemont's version of Dan and a few of his friends are there. They will not only see two same sex couples there but two mixed race same sex couples that will stick out like sore thumbs .I worry that will be conditions for some kind of confrontation. I sure hope I'm wrong

Rollercoaster ride is an understatement it was brilliant how you had us close to crying and then🎇🎉 But I did sort of figured when Katje was worried the second time that it was going to be good.Forgive my ignorance how do you pronounce Katje? Loren's parents are💩with most people I would say they can't sink any lower but the mere fact this wasn't a surprise to me shows there's no rock bottom with those two with the possible exception of whatever attorney they hired what line of bull did he state in the lawsuit? I hope the the P.I's find something so damning on them that it never gets to court. Loved how you used Seamus in this chapter. You have writing drunk dialog down pat.Makes me wonder how you are so good at it.Hmm🤔 conversations with @kbois? We in the corner did find the keys to her liquor cabinet while she was on vacation....OK I know how you're so good at writing drunk dialog

You mentioned Thanksgiving. Marcel being from France how well does he know Thanksgiving he might need James help for the menu? Knowing how you write I can picture Thanksgiving at the orphanage being both happy and tugging at the heartstrings at the same time.And then Christmas shortly after that it's going to almost 24/7 busy for Armand and Colin

If you really believe that then you must have gone to Fantasyland (Welcome back)

I wondered if only Kyle and Brady knew about Devlin situation but it looks like Marisa and Marlena are also aware of it.I'm glad Devlin has a good support system I do worry about Devin having a panic attack while out on a charter I would think that would be among the worse time and place. So Marc is into Devlin and is wealthy I can see that working in Devlin's favor if Devlin's siblings screwed him out of anything 🤞And I got to believe they did

If they haven't by now I wouldn't worry about it

Do whatever you have to do for your dog I don't care how much of a delay it would make.I remember the dogs I owned when they felt bad so did I. Jack has an incredible ability but he also sounds like a loose cannon. So what did Tristan find out? I don't you would mentioned the possibility of Mattie,Nick etc having powers unless they actually will have them. We'll see

Now that's a reference I never expected

So it looks like the Braunigan will be the obstacle they will face.Is this journey so important to take that possibly fatal risk? IIllia and Pacha could have a plan to abort if it becomes too dangerous but we know that won't happen because then the story will be over. Is it possible the Hartonin race doesn't exist no more because of the moving of stars? Sort of like unintended consequences? If what I just said was nonsense cut me some slack I"m out of my element on this topic. Element ...that was an unintentional pun.

I doubt Armand and Colin planned to live the over the club forever if they do indeed adopt the baby it's time to think of a house. Given the dreams Armand has had his current painting might reflect that and I would think the painting will create a lot of buzz in the art world

You already have the next 4 cued-up don't you😄

It will be interesting to read story with these guys as the protagonists.Will they have any reason to have communications with Charlie and Co.? Two mouths?Could you imagine a typical attorney using two mouths I would like to amend one statement made "being a bachelor was much the same everywhere in the galaxy. You cooked, or you starved!" In my case and many other friends I know it's "You have a microwave or you starved" BTW I have a craving for some rrretachuf

The naughty step? That's worse than the corner huh? Uuuummmm!

The abandoned child really shook Armand up as it would anybody.I don't know if Colin and Armand taking on an infant is something they could do. Three somewhat grown kids is a lot different. But I bet Armand has a idea but what?

Please enough of that I don't want to hear any MOE of this

Out of many sad moments in this story you just said the saddest words "only one chapter left".😭 Alec scenarios that he comes up with are valid but the problem is he comes to the worst conclusions,There are going to be moments in relationship even with people who don't have Alec's issues I hope the therapist gets through to Alec that somewhere along the line that WILL happen just like with any other couple BUT it won't necessarily be fatal.The way Finn is when Alec has these moments should tell Alec how committed Finn is to this. I think it cool Finn was able to make friends with Luke and the others will Alec ever want to go back and visit? If River and Ken go back there that would be even more reason to.I guess you'll cover that next chapter you have a lot to pack in. In your previous story you had Seth and Noah with the family at Christmas it would be Cool to see a little of Alec with the Larson family at Christmas (Just a thought) Only one small tiny issue after 3 three chapters or thereabout of Alec being in Washington state you finally had it raining.It would have closer to being accurate if you had it raining the whole time he was there 😄

As alluded to by other readersI don't think the Neo-supremacist would be mentioned unless they figure in the story at a later time.There might be one or two still out there and they might see them being on a cruise as a good opportunity. Hope I'm wrong