weinerdog

This story has all the elements a good love story should have.Good characters, dramatic moments and humor in all the right places.What sets this author apart is her unique way of telling the story. She share's all the qualities of other excellent GA authors but has certain ones of her own others don't have and if you're unfamiliar with her stories this will become apparent with the first couple of chapters. Highly recommended

Don't get wrong what Maggie has done was awful but I always thought there was a some hope for her and that she wasn't near as bad as Jonathan. Another plus in her favor is it seems she doesn't share Jonathan's homophobia otherwise she wouldn't have done the gesture she did. To give you an idea how disoriented Sawyer and Marc was leaving the diner. Rick had foresight to go to Aunt May's house and not Sawyer and Marc .RICK!!!!! But good on him though😀 Only one thing would have made the chapter better.And that was to hear Bruce's secret of his success...The non PG version. Thank you,Thank you ,Thank you for an awesome story

About a year or so ago TikTok had something called The Junebug Challenge (true story) Looks like Greg just won it

Just kiss?🤔

oops I never done that before quoting myself I have to stop posting on a smartphone.I don't even know how I did it🤔

@scrubber6620 asks a valid question weather Thad getting shot was connected to Seth attack and I don't rule it out but I suspect its unrelated I think it's someone from that pack that was stealing from them The teenage Lycan Rick was his name? Surely he had to have known he would have left his scent on Seth and In a town he knows there are other Lycans .Is he a moron or what?

The one consensus so far ? Dickie Ranshaw is an ass.He has the perfect first name especially the first 4 letters .When you act like he does he really should go by Richie. If it was just him and his loser friends to worry about I would see no problem those idiots could not come up with a good plan to deal with Donnie and Andy in fact I can see Dickie be getting the better of (again) in front of the whole school.What I worry about is the older brothers getting involved. We learned that Donnie doesn't take shit and in the first chapter that his mouth can get him in trouble.That combination could mean a problem could escalate in a case like this.I see Preston (Ox ) maybe becoming an Ally to Andy and Donny

I'm sure this will be addressed in the epilog but will Jonathan blame Maggie for giving Marc that extra day? As Sasha said Jonathan is a horses ass.Perhaps Marc should instruct Finn to word the document that their half goes to MAGGIE and NOT Jonathan.That would probably stop Jonathan of having any ideas of leaving Maggie

I'm sure all us readers were anticipating an "dun-dun-DAHH!!!" moment in the lawyers office but this scene at Rachel's was sooooo much better. That's why @Libby Drew is the author and we're not. Jonathan got way more then he deserved but reading Marc reasoning about why he did it because of Aunt May then it was a good thing the ultimate tribute to Aunt May. And I if these humanitarian projects that Jonathan spoke of are on the level then its a good thing for that reason also. “That‘s Bruce Banner,” Karen piped up. “And I think you just made him angry.” As far as Jonathan knew it could have been THE Bruce Banner and you definitely don't want to get him angry"'HULK SMASH" I don't know who was the star of the Rachel's Diner scene .Frank Jones definitely gets kudos as does Bruce but I would say it was Rachel. There was a Tim/Bruce thing hinted at and Rachel put her number in Bruce phone .As much as I like Tim I'm rooting for Rachel in this case BTW what's in a Greek omelet?If its like any Greek food I've had I so have to find out.Does it have feta cheese in it? (In Homer voice) 'Hmmmmmm Greek omelet".

Is there going to be another chapter? Or is it a one off the way this ended it could go either way. I know it says " In process " but that's not always accurate. This is good either way. Do all adults and kids in the city say "youse"? I lived in the Boston area and a lot of people drove their "cah" and liked clam "chowdah".

Nice story Thank you😀 In the epilogue the only person I worry about is Tanner I'm sure Mom M did a great job but Tanner did have a tramatic experience thanks to his parental unit it might be hard for him to get to meet and know someone other than Brian

You wrote that in a way we could all relate.BTW I don't think I ever knew anyone like Nancy you we're lucky to have her as a friend

Congratulations to the readers who figured out the will was in the secret room. There is still one possibility for @raven1 hope for the Mom to redeem herself and that would be at the meeting at the lawyers office when they produce the will Jonathan will scream forgery and threaten to take them to court only for Maggie to say " It's not a forgery I have May's copy right here." Yeah I know wishful thinking but it would be a reason for Marc to have a relationship with Maggie.Despite everything Marc is sad about possibly never seeing his parents again after this so this could be a positive🤞. “The lost research on how many licks it takes to get to the center of a Tootsie Pop?” 😄 I bet that reference has never been used in any other GA story,TV show ,movie etc. very good. For those of you who are old enough to remember how many you tried counting licks with one of those? When I was 10 I tried that I got up to six hundred something before my Mom INSISTED I come to the dining room for supper. I wrapped the Tootsie Pop in a napkin and left it on my bed determined to continue only to find when I got back the dog ate it (And yes it was a weinerdog)

I had a similar thought .The main reason why I don't think that will be the case is there is only two more chapters to go and I believe Jonathan is confident the Will isn't going to be found. But I wonder would Jonathan really do that?

I knew when Matthew was writing about his Mom and Dad not acting the way they used to I figured divorce was coming but I thought it was going to be the Dad that had the same sex attraction not the Mom.Dad saying "I miss that" when he walked in on Tommy and Matthew had me thinking that way.Mom still mentioned Nancy does she understand the Matthew/Tommy thing?

A great,great lead up.Maybe it's just my nervous nature but I keep having in the back of my mind the parents returning unexpectedly early. I guess we'll see

Boy you sure know how to tug at the heartstrings I was bawling when Marie said "I’m going to see my husband. I can hear him calling me.”And Pepe walked in just at that time.I thought it was great that GG visited Pepe As sad as all this was Pepe is now with the perfect people especially with Tommy sharing his room with him. Arnaud keep asking if something like the Home would work in Europe.I guess the orphanages there don't resemble anything like the Home. Does Arnaud have the financial means along with maybe getting a few backers to pull this off?

I started reading Paying the Piper based on @danalford mentioning it.Love what I'm reading so far

"He only dislikes you because I do.” Oddly enough that comment might have started the thawing out between the two brothers. Later when Finn finds out it was his Grandfather who pulled him out of the water I would think that also be some kind of gamechanger.Judging by how eight year old Sawyer's reaction was described there was once brotherly love between the two. So now it looks like the top two possibilities are Sawyer's Mom will come through or its in Aunt May's photo album (If it is Donovan wouldn't think to look there) But knowing @Libby Drew it will be neither. How about a covert operation where Marc's team and Bruce infiltrates Aunt May's house in search of the will?.....OK ignore me just my nutty imagination running wild

Too bad you are not Finn's assistant @drsawzall .You could have told him about checking Aunt May's trash

I was worried about them losing track of time .Close call I'm curious if Nancy notices anything or is oblivious.I'm afraid that may be messy

I'm trying to figure out what what Cindy can possibly do to F this up and I bet you she'll notice the cuff links. “And one good thing about Cindy chaperoning is that she will be stuck there until it is over,” Mom added, winking at me. “So if you and Luke wanted to leave early, you could.” .....I'm not sure Jackson and Luke thought of that but guess what?It's sure on their mind now.(maybe the only thing on the mind)

Well I'm thinking the next chapter is from either Wayne or Andy' s POV. I can't imagine what Andy did and why.

Timing is everything and the timing here seems almost perfect.I'm not sure one way or another since I don't remember this being mentioned but was this Marc's first time? Speaking of timing not sure Bruce calling singing Billy Joel songs was good timing (At least he didn't sing We Didn't Start The Fire😄) I wonder what Bruce wants to speak with Marc about? How's this for a scene Marc and Sawyer do an all nighter(looking through the boxes for those of you with a dirty mind)And they show up at the lawyers office the next day wearing the same clothes looking disheveled and evidence of what just happened.That should go over well with Jonathan

We got a hint Cassidy was homophobic a few chapters back but geez no way I expected something that extreme. It was lunch time so I don't think alcohol contributed to Cassidy's bitchy outburst but apparently a good chunk of her friends support her, I don't think we have been told one way or another Seth is Cassidy's younger brother but is he underage? That would also explain that bitch Cassiday pedophile comment. So I wonder who the Lycan was that part of that thug mob? Is he part of the local pack? Or from out of town.And should Thad and Wade be worried? One other question perhaps the Lycan bit Wade during the attack would it be possible Seth could be part wolf now? BTW I didn't say it I'm proud of Trevor also