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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    So? What else is there🤔
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    @chris191070 WHERE ARE YOU????You said you had Wednesday off.The man clearly doesn't know his priorities.
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    Chapter 24

    Something I forgot to mention in my comment .After you are done with the trilogy if you have the twins surviving maybe a story about them working together based on their experience to help kids/pups and to get bad guys would work.
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    I have a nagging thought while Eli's dad wasn't familiar with the pups he might have stumbled on to the pedophile ring(Chickenhawk entertainment? jeez talk about drawing attention to yourself) Perhaps instead of his boss it was that scum Kenneman who killed Eli parents just a thought “For being a pain in the ass, you should pour it for me and fix me breakfast too,” Tyler growled at him. “Like hell, Williamson.” “Bite me, Garrison.” “In your dreams.” When you wrote that exchange between Ty and Eli were you recalling the most recent conversation you had with @Mrsgnomie?
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Two words..Head shot
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    Chapter 24

    You now have a target on your back and @Mrsgnomiejust put it there
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    The family move? hmm it's not Tristian's move is it🤔 All due respect to Wesley stance the only way to really emphasize is to have something similar happen to you and I wouldn't wish that on anybody A couple of other takeaways .A technicality that was never fully explained? Sound like some corruption going on. Also they should get that incompetent Doctor license taken away
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    Chapter 14

    I only read the opening line so far and then I skimmed real quick after that unless I missed it I think it would have been great if you had Nathan mentioned @Wesley8890by name😄 OK back to the chapter see you in a few
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 83

    I bet the first thing the boys will ask about is the pizza in Italy although it's quite different there.I can see the boys being a hit with all the people Armand and Colin know there.
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    You wrote a lot of scenes like this in other stories but you always write it in a way that you know what a new experience it is for these guys .
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 82

    So Marcel may take James to France. He will certainly have a bright future as a chef. I'm curious as the why the Judge even needs to speak to James he already know Armand will do right by him. Next time you write a chapter like this put a disclaimer saying" Don't read if you're hungry."After I post this I'm off to make something
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 23

    I'm sorry I'm an little behind now I fell asleep looking at that gif Strange I have the urge to hop on one leg for some reason
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    Chapter 23

    Here kitty, kitty,kitty
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    Chapter 23

    I have dog sat (Dog sitted?)both a beagle and a bassett hound at separate times and they both got along great with my dog I bet your grand puppy will be a fun dog.I remember when I was about six or seven My mom got me a hot dog and ice cream cone to eat outside while she went to shop at Sears my older brother was with me anyways a Bassett hound came up to me and kept staring at me with sad eyes I ended up splitting the hot dog and cone half and half.I didn't know any better😄
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    Chapter 23

    When?? Geez do you really think I would go that far??...........Don't answer that
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    Chapter 23

    I concur with all of that.But as far as @Mrsgnomie letting it get to her head .I don't recall her saying words to the effect that she's the worlds best editor Unlike (ahem ,cough, cough) someone else around here😄
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    Chapter 23

    I know Sebastian said rescue only but its better then a 50/50 chance thats not going to be the case🤞.I think the edge Ty and E will have is when E shifts into to something at the right moment surprising the scumbags. "Tyler’s a hoo-man, donna hav’ da skullzz ta git da jub dun’.” I liked that😄 Ty and myself share the same breakfast diet .Bacon and mugs of coffee yum that's gourmet dining.Yeah Elijah said when he woke up Ty “Get your fat ass out of bed. It’s eight forty-five"(Although we know he was kidding) Fat ass applies to me a little bit also .But hey bacon and coffee its worth it
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    Chapter 23

    More special?OK OK give me Caleb's address.....I better be prepared to dodge the tomatoes that are going to be thrown at me
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    Chapter 23

    She found a way to sabotage @Danilo Syrtis efforts.Ssh I'm not telling how
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 81

    Happy that the kids had a good time. MARY LOU!!!!!! I would tell James to run and not look back but ML knows where he works😄
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 80

    Since you asked they are affiliated with the major league team The Colorado Rockies.I don't know the nuts and bolts on how their agreement works but the long and short of it is if The Rockies wants a player from the Yard Goats they can call that player up to their team. There are also independent non-affiliated minor league teams in that case any Major league team could contact said team and purchase the contract of said player
  22. Gingerbread twink?Does that mean the Prince is gay?
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 80

    That sounds like it would be an awesome painting. This is so good for James and having the three younger boys around I think would make James want to try to be a good influence on them which would make Armand happy. In an earlier chapter either it was a mistype or I misread it (probably the ladder) I thought the baseball team was the Harvard goats not the Hartford goats now that makes a lot more sense the comment I made at the time made no sense. I googled the baseball team. You know this but for the readers they are called The Hartford Yard Goats. I found out some interesting information about them who they are affiliated with etc. I hesitate to say anything in case you wanted you wanted to include any of this in the chapter where they are at the games so I'll withhold it for now.
  24. I bet you were trying to figure out a way to get beef stroganoff in that statement
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    Chapter 22

    Does that mean another future tornado won't be a sufficient reason?🤔
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