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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 71

    What a sweet kid Tommy is thinking of his friends at the orphanage and asking to take them to the zoo.It's good thing he started to learn Italian since it looks like he's going on that trip with them. The part about Colin buying peanuts reminded me of my time visiting The San Diego Zoo as kid.The elephants used to walk up to us (we were separated by a barrier) and stick their trunks out to us in hopes of getting peanuts I swear their trunks seem to work like vacuum cleaners when they took the peanuts from us
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    Chapter 19

    You use the word promoted. Not only do you kill off Kage YOU DEMOTE HIM AFTER HE DIES!!!!!!!!!(via smaller picture now) Talk about no respect for the dead😄 I hope I'm never a character in one of your stories.....something tells me I should't have typed that
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    Chapter 19

    Some younger people may not know this but Howard Johnson's was known for having a lot of flavors of ice cream people today think Baskin-Robbin but HoJo was before them. If you get a DVD of the movie Blazing Saddles which was set in the old west everybody in the town had the last name Johnson and you can see in the background a Howard Johnson's where there's a sign in front proudly proclaiming that they had one flavor.
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    Chapter 70

    Armand can be quite the politician when he needs to be when he didn't engage the professor. It's hard to believe they didn't do these security measures at the same time they put fire systems in
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    Chapter 19

    You wonder why there's a korner krew look how the author and editor act
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    Chapter 19

    Is that so? Well Mama better not find out YOU killed off Kage
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    Chapter 19

    That's only because @raven1is MIA and YOU weren't reminding us how long until the next chapter
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    Chapter 19

    You should have seen her at communion when you were only suppose to SIP the wine
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    Chapter 19

    Eh! I'm used to that.
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    Chapter 69

    Normally I would think GG would come to Armand and she would tell him to paint the mural but Armand about to talk to the professor so that's not going to happen.The mural was mentioned for a reason so I'm thinking Armand going to be an advisor or something like that.
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    Chapter 19

    Speaking of the laptop when it was revealed they were going to leave the Chevy at E's house My first though was Huntington will get a tip that the laptop was in the chevy and they will ransack E's house and chevy looking for it .Hope I'm wrong.Luckily I usually am when I guess
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    Chapter 19

    How can you not love Tyler's family or I should say Ty's and E's family. For me the plan to meet the Boss isn't safe enough but I sure can't think of a better alternative so🤞. @Mrsgnomie has Aido-patato and in this chapter you had Carina-beana what kind of names do you two come up with with people you don't like? Wait I don't want to know Early in this chapter "Thank fuck the dean finally finished spewing whatever inspirational crap came from his pie hole" I bet your teachers and professors just loved you😄
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 19

    OK nitpicker how about this? They are still in the hurricane. Right now they are in the eye so things are calmer at the moment.Is that better?
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    Chapter 19

    The calm before the storm🤞
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    Chapter 18

    My step dad was in the military and as a kid my family lived in Key West for awhile when the town had more of a military presence there (still does but not as much).I bet that last revelation on my part gave @kbois the chills that conceivably I could have been living that much closer to her. Have a great trip
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    Chapter 18

    That's all? What makes you think this upcoming chapter won't be as good as the others
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    Chapter 18

    The other day when we were partying in the korner @chris191070 asked if anyone wanted any spotted dick unfortunately they didn't understand what he meant (Did I go too far 😄)
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    Chapter 18

    People from Britain shouldn't mention dessert because I understand there is a dessert there called spotted dick😄.(I'm kidding around of course but there really is a dessert there called that)
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    Chapter 18

    Your hidden comment about Trevor certainly explains why he was so clueless about the laptop at E's house. As far as the simpler is better comment goes maybe that's not true if it means Trevor understands it. BTW you don't have to be simple with me I talk really good American language.
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    Chapter 68

    Did I forget or miss something? I was under the impression Armand had to go to City Hall. Something to watch for Tommy had trouble sleeping alone I don't know what the arrangements at the orphanage was if he had a roommate or something. I also wonder if Tommy had friends there.He spent a lot of time at the gallery did the atmosphere at the orphanage have something to do with that?
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    Chapter 18

    You mean there's something else?
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Zoel will be so hell bent to please Cain that he will do anything to the point of recklessness.If Zoel ends up hurting Andre as collateral damage what Cain did to Zoel will be childs play compared what Rafe would do
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    Chapter 18

    You know there has been a lot of long words that have mentioned by readers do these count as a word? (For those who don't live in The U.S. this is part of the cowboy language mostly in Texas and Oklahoma and places nearby) YeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaHaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!! Or OOhooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooWeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! One thing for sure @kbois would definitely find a way to use it
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    Chapter 67

    Armand and Colin are not going to need their alarm clock for awhile the way Tommy woke them up. It seemed like Tommy had a brief flashback when he saw the painting was taken off the wall like with the other painting . I'm guessing Tommy never had any kind of counseling after his Parents died is there still some lingering effects there?
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    Chapter 18

    If we get a chapter delay it will be because @kboisis going to try to fit that word in the chapter.And it will be YOUR!!!!! fault.😄
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