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  1. This deserves 5 stars there will characters you'll and a few you will get attached to, And of course son=e you'll despise.That's all a good author needs to make a good story and this is a good author
  2. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
  3. Teen gay couples and exes can be just as ridiculous as straight teen couples and exes.I second what @Lee Wilson said about Ollie and Logan. So Toby questioning God about what has happened in his life. What does Ollie think about the bible and and a man laying with another man?
  4. “John saved your life,” Susan continued. “If you think you’re too righteous to accept that, then maybe you don’t deserve to still be here.” Right on Susan but it should have been said a whole lot sooner “Why do good people get shit parents?” I wonder if that happened to Mateo or someone close to him? BTW aren't hospitals suppose to report someone driving under the influence? Stephen is lucky that it apparently didn't happen
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    Ardent

    So who else besides Tom is in on this? Whatever the plans were for the Senator pretty much everything has to be reevaluated
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    Ardent

    Scott looked at his phone as Gabriel abruptly hung up on him. “I don’t know why you always expect miracles. My name isn’t Scotty.” But it is isn't it?.....In a way🤔 OK now to finish the rest of the chapter
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    Chapter 16

    OK you asked for it .I personally think it's too soon to guess as there will be more developments. But at the moment the top two contenders are Jimmy Wong and Susan Urban. Or course the affair between Susan and Healy maybe an urban legend.......Sorry about that😆 ..
  8. It is going to be so good when Carter gets what coming
  9. It sounds like if Carter really will give the meds to Leo then Leo won't be there because he is at Jordan's hotel room Something else to complicate things
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    Chapter 16

    Maybe we can ask Killian to try to replicate Lee Harvey Oswald three shots in eight seconds
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    Chapter 2

    "Fair enough. Demons on holiday, witches to be stopped. I've had weirder days." Which we will read about in future @Topher Lydon stories Mrs. Hartley's expression flickered—surprise, then consideration, then something that might have been amusement. "Demon girlfriend?" I could see how Mrs. Hartley could be confused mother's don't usually call their son's girl demons until after they marry He kept having small arguments with himself, I see that on the trolley I ride all the time. Wait......I just those were just mentally ill people could they be people taking to demons?🤔.....Maybe I'll stop riding the trolley
  12. She may not be hateful like her son but it's still possible she could have a problem with Sam and Virgil being close
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    Chapter 16

    Bridgit Foxwell? That sounds like a less risqué name of some of the Bond girl characters remember Pussy Galore and Molly Goodhead? But those ladies were smart so the similarities end there.Bridget sounds like the stereotypical blonde "Did you win the lottery and not tell me? You just bought the building and had it renovated, and now you want to buy me an expensive desk too?" "How about if you leave the finances to me, huh?" I don't think that exchange was put there for no reason. You don't get rich from a policemen pension and of course it's possible his P.I. business has done well and he invested wisely. But I hope you're not setting us up for in a future story or maybe even this one that Novak is involved in something hinkey. When we reached the parking lot, Jacy caught my arm. "Hey, Sherlock, you want to take my bike?" I bit my lip. The offer was tempting, but I knew it wasn't a good idea. "Not this time. We'd better use my car." "That's cool. I was just offering." Me thinks Jacy wanted an excuse for Killian to have to wrap his arms around him.....WHAT!? Okay,okay that's something I would think of only I would ask if he would like to drive so I would be the one wrapping my arms around him.
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    Chapter 14

    Your mismanagement of these Pieces has jeopardized the integrity of the entire Game. There are a lot of words you can say in regards to the game......Integrity is ABSOULUTELY not one of them
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    Chapter 14

    The evidence was fabricated with chilling ease: a timestamped photo, pulled from a compromised school security camera feed, showed a figure matching Justin’s build entering the autoshop after hours. A can of accelerant, purchased with a pre-paid card whose transaction record was digitally planted at a gas station Justin frequented, would be found near the scene. A single, stray hockey keychain, identical to the one on Justin’s bag, would be ‘discovered’ in the aftermath. I don't know it's all circumstantial a good lawyer could stop this in its tracks......Does Andy know these guys
  16. WOW!!!! finally.I initially was mad at Tom but when he said why he did what he did it made sense. Well it looks like there isn't a way back to Lakehurst at least not a way that's apparent as long as Stephen is in the picture. Kitt could get a scholarship if he could get back to swimming it is still early in the new school year.But how? Can't wait to see how it all happens. And speaking of Stephen I thought maybe last chapter he was slowly moving in the right direction but then this happened “Listen here, young man,” Stephen snapped. “The reason Kitt left in the first place was because of you and the influence you had over him. So do me a favor and stay away from my family. I don’t need you telling me what to do,” he said in a low voice, pointing his finger at Matt. He still as big of Jackass as ever . I would hope Stephen could be put up on some charges because he had to of broken some laws. “He will come to his senses soon. Matt's mom is quite naive
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    Chapter 1

    Gee..........which part?
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    Chapter 1

    I don't do that with a keyboard but some of my hand writing resembles that
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    Chapter 1

    Ok be honest how many of you looked up "使用权.
  20. The solution you wrote is the best one especially since Maggie said "Well, if my son wasn't a homophobic jerk, but before she said that I had other thoughts in mind.You never gave any details like if the house was close to being paid off or if Phil had any savings or investments (Of course he would have to be a non imbecile to have that so probably not) even if the house was paid off I think you have to be a senior to do a reverse mortgage.
  21. Well, it looks like Sam and Virgil can resume the sexual part of their relationship. That is of course unless or until I think of another twist. Why that thought never crossed my mind
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    Prologue

    Taine commented, wholly invested in his boyfriend’s career, and an avid amateur wrestling fanatic. (It definitely had nothing to do with the shorts his boyfriend wore in the ring.) Although the shorts don't hurt
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    Chapter 15

    OH MY! Good catch. That would make sense. That would be yet another reason to not go with Micah......You know there are times that love doesn't conquer all and this looks like one of these times
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    Chapter 13

    They were cheering for the tragedy, placing bets on the outcome. The sheer, inhuman cruelty of it filled him with a rage so vast it was dizzying. “The one that protects the school from liability, Take those two statement from parts of this chapter. These evil morons should realize a suicide could bring unwanted scrutiny to what happened which could lead back to them. They should stop this to cover their own miserable ass but it looks like they are out of control
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    Chapter 49

    Please have Bobby plan sone very stupid revenge to where he gets arrested.....Perhaps he and Erin can be cellmates. I think it would be cool to have Imani show up in typical metalhead fan gear
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