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    Chapter 22

    Maybe Vincent and his partner? We found out Brett's dad can't stand George so perhaps Brett's dad might even be someone reasonable.Perhaps he might even have a low key positive relationship with Vincent he is the Sheriff after all.So maybe Vincent can go to him. “Then explain it to me,” Brett said, and for once, he didn’t sound mocking. At this point I was picturing Brett pushing for more info and Noah losing his temper and screaming "YOUR DAD DOESN"T RAPE YOU!!!!!!!" Actually that probably would have been a good thing because I believe everyone in that room would have believed him.
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    Chapter 6

    New daytime TV show As Thompsonville Turns
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    Chapter 18

    Will Darien 's son consider Wyland another Dad?
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    Chapter 18

    Hey all you of you who are straight I bet after this you would be glad to have Wyland as your mate "I am never going back to an abbey, Ashot," That is exactly what Ashot needed to hear "I am suspended over a bottomless abyss of certain death. If we hit a storm, I am going to feed Pudding the pony to the sharks to buy us time." Sort of puts a new spin of having Pudding for dessert huh?
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    Chapter 18

    I think I know but who is in the picture? BTW I'll surrender to them anytime
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    Chapter 15

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    Chapter 6

    ‘You don’t really have a home right now, Levi.’Oh man what a blunder anybody could have done,It's unfortunate Matt did. not everything was covered by Medicare Ah they call it Medicare down under also. I hope they run it better than they do in the U.S. ‘Yeah. I do like reading.’ I wonder if Levi is a fan of Tony Scott?
  8. I hope congress was in session
  9. Jesse? Edit: What a trip @Topher Lydon posted pretty much the same thing at the same time
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    Chapter 21

    The only way to get the group on their side is for Colt to tell them what George has been doing (or perhaps just Amy) Colt outed both he and Noah to them so he has a history of doing that even if he doesn't plan to.Is Noah going to be prepared for that?
  11. It was a crude, wireframe diagram of two human skeletons, rendered with terrifying anatomical inaccuracy.Where did they get that from......A skelton porn mag?
  12. "You're going to walk through a highly fortified Veth mothership wearing nothing but a gun, a backward hat, and a pair of dirty underwear?" I don't know know pretty much a typical day for Mickey
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    Chapter 17

    This chapter and the two before it were heartbreaking.Tam and Connor really did it for me
  14. Does he have a chaturbate account? I want to see this mighty Glorb.(Hey he's 18)
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    Chapter 16

    Hey Wylan you may be a prophet but @Topher Lydon is the author so in this case he outranks you
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    Chapter 16

    I know Raymond's men are basically lunatics but I wonder were Bible's written yet at this time? If they were I know they weren't massed produced.yet. I just wonder even in their deranged starving state they have to know what they are doing goes against any teachings of God
  17. Here's what I don't get Kyle has a human form except for the antennae and he communicates in a language that can be translated so why do these guys think of him as a pet? The Veth might be advanced but they are as ignorant as the most racist human. I want Mickey and Isaiah to get back together but maybe still have Kyle be part of the crew
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    The Stand Off

    Outstanding story .Only one tiny flaw.Remember the scene in Spacebars where the combination was 1-2-3-4? And Dark Helment said 'WHAT KIND OF COMBINATION IS THAT? That's what I thought of when Jerry typed the combo 9-1-1😄
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    Chapter 20

    I got itWhen they go to trial send Noah's attorney that chapter that should help
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    Chapter 15

    I didn't know he was a hooker
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    Chapter 15

    I hope they got to Ishan in time
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    Clarity

    The Senator might get killed because some dumb ass 15 year old didn't see where he was going
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    Chapter 19

    If Brett really didn't burn down the tree house then his anger is justified. But if he did shut the F up hypocrite. Although I do think Colt and Noah shouldn't have done it. The customer who ordered the slightly scrambled eggs probably ordered eggs sunny side DOWN and then complained the yolks were broken
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    The Call

    You packed a lot in 1,209 words in this chapter
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    The Call

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