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Chapter 3- The Mark's Call
weinerdog commented on BendtedWreath's story chapter in Chapter 3- The Mark's Call
When Sven found out about Nos fated mate why was he using female pronouns?- 13 comments
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Chapter Five - Ben's POV
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Five - Ben's POV
I wonder what is the rapid transit system like where they live. I San Diego where I live it used to be terrible it has improved a lot and you can fine your way to places.So I have to wonder why can't Mason do that? Or did I mention something sacrilegious? I would not be surprised if Julian suggests that. So what am I missing here? Mom kicked Mason but she always calls Ben on behalf of Mason. And why couldn't she drive him? Unless she can't drive -
Chapter Five - Ben's POV
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Five - Ben's POV
Or noise levels. Or cleaning up. And I work from home, so when he's there at noon eating cereal and watching YouTube at full volume while I'm on a call about a property damage claim, Hey Mason...MORON! one word.... HEADPHONES!!!!!! -
You can argue that Brooke may have overstepped when she prevented Levi from talking to Casey but I do believe her intentions were good. The extended kiss at the beach leads me to believe Brooke believes there's something between them. At the same time Casey also affects Levi. Levi being sheltered like he has he may not realize he could be playing with fire. I'm picturing a scene where Casey sneaks a surprise kiss on Levi and Brooke happens to see it. This has the makings of Brooke's heart being broken and I'm sure Levi doesn't want to break the heart of someone who reminds him of his mom(Should he tell her that part?)
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Wha?......No WONDER I couldn't find it
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When Levi is in bed thinking something will be sprung
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Chapter 13: The Mote and the Beam
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Mote and the Beam
Are we supposed to know this Darien guy? Has he been in another story? That picture of Andrew hugging Jason? Big deal on its own but I'm guessing there is other "Evidence" taken out of context that is disturbing And the fact he has one of Tanaka's burners ...very disturbing Just saw your comment above mine I guess we are not suppose to know who this Darien guy is LOL. Now DARIUS on the other hand....... -
Chapter 13: The Mote and the Beam
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: The Mote and the Beam
The parking enforcement screamer? That one went to trial. Andrew lost. The woman was fined four hundred dollars and ordered to take an anger management course. Was her name Karen by any chance? -
unfolding in the sunlight like a beautiful flower🤔...That's ALWAYS the FIRST thought I have when I read a @kbois story
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Chapter Four - Julian's POV
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
Jillian? ..Uh Julian ....Looks like Spellcheck strikes again.... I sure hope Spellcheck isn't involved with the Nuclear codes -
Chapter Four - Julian's POV
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
And of course it will be Ben's fault for Mason not working if Ben doesn't drive him -
Chapter Four - Julian's POV
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
Yeah but it's harder with your fingers to put a U on your forehead -
Chapter Four - Julian's POV
weinerdog commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Four - Julian's POV
It is actually good Julian going along to observe this. Is Julian programed to say to someone (Mason) "You're a loser" or better yet put an L on his forehead -
So we know Jason had a thing for Will and we find out Dylan looks like Jason and Will has a like for that kind of look.You're not really going have Jason and Will..... I can't even finish the thought. They say timing is everything looks like it may be for Dylan. I can just see the scene where Will takes Dylan to his place for the first time and Peter already noticing the similarities to Jason and thinking to himself WTF???????
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Sort of an emotional cliffhanger Andrew calling at the end of the chapter.So how does that change things? Part of the plans that are going on around everyone involve Will and Andrew being a thing.If that isn't part of the mix who gets affected the most? Merrill also wants this so if it f--ks him up I'm all for it
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Oh yikes now the real life changing serious stuff is happening
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First on page 4 (Hey only doing what @FanLitsuggested)
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You just gave me an
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You may want to skim parts of some of the early stories of the WAR series to get a gist of some of the recurring characters personality quirks Brett in particular along with Billy and Dustin since they'll be in this story.I would say read all of them but that's a lot of reading I get it. Ironically my favorite one is Aidan's War the first one where Billy isn't the main protagonist. I hope @jkwsquirrel finds a way to put Aidan in this story
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Something is missing...@chris191070 when is the next chapter?
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And THERE it is the very first "It's Gnome's fault" of this new @kbois stories
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Geez another person that comments before reading a word of the chapter where do all these people come from
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They are missing a damn good story
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I hope he doesn't mind me doing this @jkwsquirrel
