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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    You know sometimes I think I've gone to far and I feel bad about some of the things I've said about @kbois........NOT ANYMORE!!!
  2. weinerdog

    Chapter 85

    It was cool that the boys got along with the neighborhood kids I guess the kids were fascinated by having American kids around The women at the farm got taken care of but what about the young man?Will he work at the hostel?
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Besides you just can't say "suck up" enough
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 26

    How fu---ed up a first year against a forth year I know it doesn't matter if they win or lose but still fu..d-up And Frood group is more fu---d-up. Can't wait to see who Rafe will go up against.
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Notice how @spyke has Jay Petermeyer applauding? Wonder if that was on purpose😄(And Jay gets another mention in your chapter comments should we not tell you know who)
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Excellent story. So it's up to the magic of our imagination? I'm guessing everybody here is imagining the exact same thing details and everything
  7. weinerdog

    Chapter 84

    I learned something in this chapter Business class is better then first class.I wish the airlines would find another term to use "first class" makes it sound like those people are better then you.I've only been on short 2-3 hour connecting flights never a long trip like this I have heard airline food is brutal but omelets for breakfast? That sounds good Like the other readers I'm guessing Armand and Colin will invest in the farm.Colin has the business know how to implement a business plan.They need to find adequate help to run the farm.
  8. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Judging by the way the other hiker reacted I hope there was a disclaimer "No idiots were hurt while creating this gif"
  9. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Plus we're blabbering on
  10. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Making a Mango habarnero whiskey run are you?
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    So? What else is there🤔
  12. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    @chris191070 WHERE ARE YOU????You said you had Wednesday off.The man clearly doesn't know his priorities.
  13. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Something I forgot to mention in my comment .After you are done with the trilogy if you have the twins surviving maybe a story about them working together based on their experience to help kids/pups and to get bad guys would work.
  14. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    I have a nagging thought while Eli's dad wasn't familiar with the pups he might have stumbled on to the pedophile ring(Chickenhawk entertainment? jeez talk about drawing attention to yourself) Perhaps instead of his boss it was that scum Kenneman who killed Eli parents just a thought “For being a pain in the ass, you should pour it for me and fix me breakfast too,” Tyler growled at him. “Like hell, Williamson.” “Bite me, Garrison.” “In your dreams.” When you wrote that exchange between Ty and Eli were you recalling the most recent conversation you had with @Mrsgnomie?
  15. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    Two words..Head shot
  16. weinerdog

    Chapter 24

    You now have a target on your back and @Mrsgnomiejust put it there
  17. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    The family move? hmm it's not Tristian's move is it🤔 All due respect to Wesley stance the only way to really emphasize is to have something similar happen to you and I wouldn't wish that on anybody A couple of other takeaways .A technicality that was never fully explained? Sound like some corruption going on. Also they should get that incompetent Doctor license taken away
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 14

    I only read the opening line so far and then I skimmed real quick after that unless I missed it I think it would have been great if you had Nathan mentioned @Wesley8890by name😄 OK back to the chapter see you in a few
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 83

    I bet the first thing the boys will ask about is the pizza in Italy although it's quite different there.I can see the boys being a hit with all the people Armand and Colin know there.
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 27

    You wrote a lot of scenes like this in other stories but you always write it in a way that you know what a new experience it is for these guys .
  21. weinerdog

    Chapter 82

    So Marcel may take James to France. He will certainly have a bright future as a chef. I'm curious as the why the Judge even needs to speak to James he already know Armand will do right by him. Next time you write a chapter like this put a disclaimer saying" Don't read if you're hungry."After I post this I'm off to make something
  22. weinerdog

    Chapter 23

    I'm sorry I'm an little behind now I fell asleep looking at that gif Strange I have the urge to hop on one leg for some reason
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    Chapter 23

    Here kitty, kitty,kitty
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    Chapter 23

    I have dog sat (Dog sitted?)both a beagle and a bassett hound at separate times and they both got along great with my dog I bet your grand puppy will be a fun dog.I remember when I was about six or seven My mom got me a hot dog and ice cream cone to eat outside while she went to shop at Sears my older brother was with me anyways a Bassett hound came up to me and kept staring at me with sad eyes I ended up splitting the hot dog and cone half and half.I didn't know any better😄
  25. weinerdog

    Chapter 23

    When?? Geez do you really think I would go that far??...........Don't answer that
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