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In case @kbois lives in🇬🇧 it not Wednesday yet for her ...Oh wait I'm sorry I forgot the world revolves around @chris191070 forgive me (Kidding😄)
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Chapter 6 - Being Me | A Twilight Hours Special
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 6 - Being Me | A Twilight Hours Special
Some of those thing Luke mentioned" I don't want people to think I'm looking for sympathy" "I want to be on my own, and not pollute others with how I'm feeling." I have to confess I have had thoughts like that and can relate.You have me wondering if I have a lesser degree of what Luke has. I don't have the dreams Luke has but the dreams I do have make no sense or logic at all does that correlate? Now this stalker thing at the very least escalated to a huge red flag.Unless this guy lived on the street which I'm sure Luke would know if he did there is no reason he should be aware of Luke laying down on his lawn unless he got up and at that time of night and drove past Luke's house.Very disturbing sign. If "Wonderfucking boy" still works for the fair then chances are Luke will see him there.Oh boy🤞- 10 comments
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🤔..........I can't ...I really can't
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Appetizers? What appetizers? How come I don't know about this?Why am I being left out😢
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Chapter 5 - Crashing at Taz's
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Crashing at Taz's
OMG Totally agree with Luke about Elaine way too soon to be making that kind of a statement about school.I have a bad feeling Len is going to act whipped with Elaine. That stuff you said about McDonald's is that stuff you know about personally😳I afraid to eat there now. I'm not familiar with British expressions but when Taz mom said "Coffee then, Luke, I'll pop you one up."After what she just saw was those choice of words intentional😄 -
Chapter 4 - You Have Nothing to Apologise For
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 4 - You Have Nothing to Apologise For
"Your hair smells nice"? Pantene? Not exactly what one expects to hear when meeting somebody for the first time but Donna took it in stride makes me wonder if Lee said something to Donna about Luke without revealing too much.Lee and Taz must know the possibility of something happening with Luke in an social situation I hope they are prepared to properly handle it when it does. Although we don't know yet it sounds like Edith is going to be less then a nice person to Luke if she does that I hope if that happens Len sets her straight -
To describe this great story I'm going to refer to recent review @Mrsgnomiewrote and borrow from it ..pfft not borrow from it flat out steal it.And I'm going to be just as comprehensive and detailed as she was and here it is WOW! Just WOW! Read this story
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Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
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Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
weinerdog commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Epilogue - 4 Years Later in Mexico
@SAW I second that if you haven't started reading Jay's Loelife yet WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR??? kidding😄- 79 comments
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Oh come on he may not be lying.......delusional maybe but not lying
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Unless you're using the smartphone.Remember it's always the smartphone fault.As Homer would say" DOH! STUPID SMARTPHONE"
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That's not true of me I'm fiercely loyal....win or tie.
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You only had the recommendation record for a few days and we have @astone2292and @kbois already trying to knock you off your perch and these are your FRIENDS!!!????🤔
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I wonder how many readers are going to count the words before commenting
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Great start!WOW! You got to the point really quick.Murdered parents I wouldn't wish that on my worst enemy.When Elijah couldn't think of anybody who wanted his parents dead my next thought made me wonder if it was connected to Elijah's association to Sebastian and the others but it's way, way, way to early to speculate especially after meeting this character Kage. "They'd been best friends since kindergarten. He was the only one, other than his parents, who knew Elijah could shapeshift. They spent a good part of their teenage years using that to their full advantage. It was easy to purchase alcohol when you were a forty-year-old tourist." Out of all the things I was thinking about what I would do if I was a shapeshifter buying alcohol wasn't one of them but I guess it's appropriate that you would think of that after all those times I heard you mention whiskey.Hmm were you a shapeshifter growing up🤔
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Or he took you up on your challenge and you guys did fight
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Oh my six calls in a short period of time from Alec's Dad that could only be one of two things and that is that it has happen or is very very close to happening.Since it was six calls it sounds like a sense of urgency one can't help to think maybe one last conversation
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Another great chapter but you know what's the toughest thing about reading your chapters?The make the Buffetts sound awesome I had to get up and make a snack a few times
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So now it's been revealed how the two parts of the story connect.I have not looked at the chapter comments yet to see if anybody said this so my guess is Zev and Ben resemble the other two images in the painting Rosalie referred to.But before I start sounding like I'm a know-it-all I didn't see the part about Reilly's brother being involved in this coming.Oh yeah this story has all the good elements in it.
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Chapter 3 - A Couple of Outings
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 3 - A Couple of Outings
On one hand mentioning the guy he met at the fair and then wondering if that was him who he almost ran into with the coffee would make a reader think there is a reason why that guy was mentioned.But on the other side of the coin judging by the title of the story it could be Luke's way of second guessing himself and chiding himself for missing an opportunity I guess the next few chapters will tell which way this going.Or because this is me saying this both of my thoughts could be wrong that would be nothing new.- 4 comments
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You wrote that Ben's first night at the Diner went "smooth as molasses" I guess Ben and I have a little something in common except I'm slow as molasses. This is really, really good
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Adding to Mikedup comment I'm not sure did the story end? It would be a trip if Theresa and Geno visited someday and then see themselves in the mural
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Although Parker is smart I think he said fifth in his class if I'm not mistaken that probably won't get him in Harvard but Massachusetts has the most universities per square mile in the country(something like that) the majority of them are prestigious so I'm sure Parker can attend a nearby place while Darius is attending Harvard but I guess that will be up to Ronyx LOL
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The way Rafe was reacting when he though he heard Andre cry foe help pretty much revealed how he feels about Andre. That class definitely not you typical first day introduction class. Rotar already knew their names so he/she possesses super natural abilities
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uh-oh you heard her everybody .All of you who have a Costco card(I do) buy a bag and send it to @mfa607No excuses.( @Mrsgnomieyou might have inadvertently put a target on mfa607 back I see a number of readers forming a circle around mfa607 with an unfinished bag saying EAT IT!!!!!)
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