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Charlie is content with his new life and the only way to get him to come back is the subdue the Whale and that might mean killing it if they can so what is the plan after that if they do .Charlie would be furious do they have some kind of deprogramming in mind?
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I don't know who's worst Ann Marie or the other heirs the love of money is indeed the root of all evil. The details of this case remind of another famous case the Anna Nicole Smith case the other heirs tried to screw her in that one also.Did that case influence your writing here? After Tim wins the case(I'm sure he will) I would make it short and sweet Ana Marie you won.NOW GET OUT!!!!!!!
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You can't ignore being told in your sleep to buy a farm for a specific amount like that. Naming their Son Donald is a given but although I don't know this for sure I think you can give your child more then one middle name so how about in no particular order after Donald you have Stephen Randall Timothy as the in between names.
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sounds good to me.
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Chapter 2 - Strangers in the Night
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 2 - Strangers in the Night
Is Owens condition making him act the way he is?And the breakup might amplify things.I wonder if Owen still has the same passion for the band can he still drum well or maybe the band will dump him. I get the feeling when Ian tells another one of his scary stories it will coincide with Owen transforming -
All the readers here had adequately pointed out Ann Marie many faults lets add being a ditz as another.What part of pre in the word prenuptial did the person with the college degree not understand?
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I'm really surprised J.J. didn't know about the less than four years apart rule many states have that.Conversely I remember reading a sex offender registry online think it was Washington State the "offender"was 19 and the "victim " was 17 I kid you not . Well it looks like things are falling into place for J.J. and Henry my first reaction ...cool
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There you go you can make Jamie be like @wildone friend ane be around awhile It looks like Jamie and Robbie are good for each other. It has become apparent that Robbie's Mom withheld a lot of information.It might be good for Robbie to speak to his Uncle and maybe his Uncle could tell Robbie what his Dad said about why he never contacted Robbie it could answer some questions he has.He also has cousins who want to meet him if they are bad people then never see them again but if they are good people it never hurts to have more family who could be your allies.I'm certain there isn't another Don in that bunch.
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What an incredible chapter.From his first time being intimate(I don't remember Kyle speaking of a previous time)from that to shooting guns and killing people I use the term people loosely to describe Kyle's victims. It's a damn good thing they found Kyle's journal now the police know that there were extenuating circumstances although I can still see Mattias maybe doing a little time. Who is this guy Copeland?Salvatore spoke of him like he's his boss.My bet is he's involved in law enforcement.
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@bottomguy has an interesting though about Ann Marie coming into play at the farm like maybe Ann Marie working there to pay off the invoice? I could just see her milking a goat. @drsawzall thought about getting a lecture from Stephen Grandfather I was thinking maybe Stephen Mom might be better to talk to her she could say I acted like you until I realized I could lose my family Happy Thanks giving to the readers and The Author
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This is difficult to read about but it is reality I almost put a tear icon as a chapter reaction.The day Belle passes(hopefully not soon) Having Felica around would be like having a piece of Belle still around.I hope Belle fights for a long long time but I get the feeling arrangement will be made for Hunter and Dale or maybe Vicky to get her kids
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Chapter 1 - Thanksgiving
weinerdog commented on AquariusGuy's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Thanksgiving
Perfect subject matter for Thanksgiving.I get Tristan grief but if you see said loved ones in ghost form like that then they are really still around just not the same way I would love to speak to my mom in ghost form(I don't worry about people thinking I'm nuts I already am) I hope Jamie condition is temporary he didn't seem to know yet how will he find out?When he tries to take a leak?🤔 -
I'm very happy to see this uh is there a chapter yet? I don't see it
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How clueless is she?She signed a pre-nup even if her husband's death was unexpected and he died too young she could have planned for when this happened.I'm sure you know of some similar case like this and we will find out what the loophole is my guess is it will be the legality of the prenup.If Tim does find something I hope he tells her I did this for Mom,Dad Aunt Clara and Randy NOT for you
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The part about talking to a patient who is comatose is true I was told to do with a close relative she claimed bits and pieces sounded familiar🤔 Well this was a rather appropriate ending to a story that had it's share of unusual occurrences.So Jake wants to hear more?If any of you readers were Ben would you bring the intimate stuff up? That could be a basis for another story Well done😄
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I loved how he called Camilla his sister and how he thinks of the Gonzalez's as his family. You're absolutely right about how filling authentic Chicago deep dish pizza is the first time I had it I was with two friends we heard eight slices and wondered if it would be enough we only finished a little over half of it we were all chow hounds.We don't have Giordano's where I live now there is something new for my bucket list. The author probably ticked off Chicago Cubs fans when he didn't mention Wrigley Field I know J.J. isn't a sports fan but the place is legendary
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Ignore mistake
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That was beautiful. Dogs before dawn?Never heard that phrase before but it fits.
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If Ana Marie makes any kind of issue with Aunt Clara and Randy implying her need should come before theirs I would say OUT!!! DO NOT PASS GO DO NOT COLLECT $200.00 JUST GO AND HAVE A NICE LIFE.
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Not only that her s--t doesn't stink
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Out of all the things I didn't see this book being told from Ian's POV. Confession time cutting a slit into the sheet was something I might have done.I would not have recored anybody with my phone without them knowing though.Speaking of Ian said he never seen a real life naked boy body he doesn't count recording Owen and Alex as that? It's way, way too early to take a guess but I will do so anyway Ian's missing dad could that be the one who attacked Owen in the last book?
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Ana Marie was everything as advertised too bad.She needs a serious reality check.“It’s hardly enough to cover my staff.”🙄Oh my that would be slumming it.
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Great ending of the chapter I didn't see it coming.On one hand it's a perfect idea but on the other hand who will they get to run the farm? Maybe Randy eventually if he wants to do that but who in the mean time?I don't think Tim would quit being a lawyer
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I didn't get the notification for this chapter that's been happening occasionally with other stories I read. West instincts might be right.It sounds like this Erick Manzanares is taking the rap for the vandalism.And pretty interesting timing was the conversation the four had overheard?
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Oh boy another chapter where my head hurts I didn't know so much was involved in auto racing.J.J has come a long way from not being able to park Rob's car to driving an Indy car on the track. That Pizza and gourmet cookies he described I got a coronary just imagining it
