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and 1/3 of those comments are actually about the story😄
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I agree with @chris191070it looks like adopting Thomas woul be a natural thing to do . The one thing I'm surprised Armand hasn't asked Thomas is why was he hanging around the gallery that is an unusual place for most kids to hang out at . If Thomas has an interest in painting the he would be perfect for Armand and Colin
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To say that principle is a POS would be an insult to other POS's
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You heard of synchronized swimming? This is synchronized tail wagging.An event at the Westminster dog show.
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Your characters talk to you?🤔 I'm not sure how to take that. Eh doesn't matter it's still a great story😀 Look at it this way this will not happen or course but if for some reason a chapter isn't well received It won't be your fault it will be your character's fault for telling you to do the wrong thing👌
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Absolutely taking care of one is enough for me.😱
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AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
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Having a drinking game with her? You know you'll surely lose
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I was unaware of this story until about a hour ago wonder why I didn't get a notification.Anyway glad you're back and I love how you set the stage looking forward to reading more
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I could see where having Kage around literally 24/7 can at times be exasperating but it is also the the most likely most safe route Elijah can take.I believe he also chose this route because the place is his home and Tyler really does mean that much to him. I still hope we see 'The overgrown pups" as Kage calls them in the story. When Kage said "you can bet your ass Satan himself created those creatures,” I can relate right now I'm feeding a stray and I think it really believes that every time it continually meows I come with food how annoying. Wow Jay Petermeyer gets mentioned in a second chapter? Ok you can tell us you lost a bet with @Mrsgnomie right?
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Three minutes after the chapter posted?You'll do anything to be first huh? Kidding😄
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I have to say for all us annoying guessers like myself this wasn't anywhere on my radar very well done.Any thoughts from readers on why no police? So Bear's family will take care of this?Sounds almost Mob like maybe Luke is dodging a bullet not being involved with Bear's family (I know dumb thing to say after a knife attack) I'm going to assume it over between Luke and Bear but after this chapter with this author I don't rule out anything. Can't wait to read more. -
It's too bad we could not have an elf secretly run for president disguised as a human a lot of our problems could be solved.Come to think of it I'm sure most of the readers remember this guy Ross Perot sort of looked like an Elf hmm did we miss our chance when he ran for president 🤔
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All good except for Tony and Anna of course. I The only thing I can think of is they have a painful memory of what was painted All due respect to the previous comment write how you feel if it's short so be it
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Excellent chapter. I can't wait to hear Charlie's idea I had to scoff when Charlie said this "I don't know what the rest of us can do just yet while we wait." Lets see Ilessa said there are a number of rooms that they can use ,Rooms that can accommodate two.I can think of something you all can do can't you🤔
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Chapter 21 - Homeless
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 21 - Homeless
First the good stuff .I love Sharon. Now the other stuff.Have to say the way the chapter ended it didn't sound good .My guess? Which will probably miss by a mile.Bear might have been thinking of leaving the family but then his Dad died he probably thinks this would be there worst time for him to leave.I can see him asking Luke to go with them when the fair leaves town BUT Luke had this thought "But I am also conscious that I would have to give up other parts of my life, such as Taz and Lee, my family? No way. I won't be like other people and abandon them like disposable wipes" So IF I'm right would there be a solution to that?.....Am I close?...I guess you can't answer that😄 -
Chapter 20 - Aftermath
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 20 - Aftermath
It took my dense brain a moment until "DING" oh I get it Family Feud except at the moment I refuse to think of Elaine as family However I would love to see Steve Harvey observe Luke and Elaine and then after one of his classic expressions make one of his comments -
I totally agree with that. I now ALWAYS check now there's a reason that almost every comment I post has "edited by weinerdog " on it.Once before sending a text I looked at it before pressing send and autocorrect changed my message in a way that could have gotten me arrested for stalking.
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No way is Chris managing her schedule if he was there would be a new chapter every day.
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I'm jealous I wanted to be on your last nerves I bet @Mrsgnomieis bummed also
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It might have been explained earlier in the story and I don't remember but why doesn't the Boojums have presence in Charlie's (our?)world? Figures the Boojum picked Chicago you know Al Capone and all that. You mentioned last chapter you didn't want to discuss a certain topic but the way Ilessa described the humans helping the Boojums that sound very similar to some people in our world. You made the planning sound fun so to paraphrase Robin let the real fun begin
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Oh that's going to stop them for sure🙄
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You doing something like that? Why I would never think you.......What am I saying of course you would
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There's a line in the chapter "It was also interesting, and informative to hear the myth of the Sentinels and their apparent resurgence in this generation. He wouldn’t mind seeing those wolves. It must be an amazing sight" I think that's foreshadowing Kage meeting these guys
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I was going to say that Kage is a good person he just doesn't know it yet but Elijah beat me to it. The one possible worry is perhaps a neighbor witnessed Kage when he took human form and told the police that also the two police cars at each end of the street probably seen Kage leave with Elijah in the morning just a thought it could get complicated. I saw the notification for the chapter as soon as it popped up but @Danilo Syrtisand @chris191070 beat me by quite a bit I bet they had a wager on who would post first.Maybe you should post a chapter 8 P.M. our time while these guys are asleep. Nah scratch that knowing them they'll stay up all night
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