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    Chapter 27: Easy

    Alec has no idea what a referee does in baseball
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    Chapter 27: Easy

    That went really well maybe too well. My cynical part of my limited brain is thinking OMG what's going to happen it can't be this easy can it. Finn forgot to mention he has buns.He definitely has those too.(sorry best I can do)
  3. The stalker was mentioned again so I guess he's an important part of this story.On one hand if he were dangerous he would have tried something by now but then where would the story go?Blocking him from sending texts could escalate things maybe. Luke seems to think his dad with that Women will be short lived I wouldn't be so sure. I chuckled when Luke waved at Edith at the curtain when he drove past.You know she might be the one with the more serious mental health issue.
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    Chapter 45

    I'm curious what the consequences would be for MaryLou.I understand the Mom being clueless about her daughter but why was she tolerated for so long by others?And a tape was needed to change things.
  5. You think sweets are awful? Then I wonder how you ended up having Alec and Finn meet in a shoppe that specializes in them.
  6. Really? Even with the doughnuts with bacon strips on top and fried candy bars
  7. @Dodger has said a couple of times the trust is set up to where Don can't access the money.That of course doesn't mean he might have found a way to do it illegality if so that would be be a whole other issue and Don would be in deep doo-doo but I wouldn't even know if that would be possible.
  8. Hey @James Matthewssounds like @Anton_Cloche wants to write the story interested in co-autoring?
  9. The fact that these attacks come out of nowhere is disconcerting this particular day seemed to be a calm uneventful day so what brings it on? I have a really good buddy who's impossible to dislike every time you interact with him you walk away smiling.A few years back he was telling me his doctor prescribed medication for him for his anxiety I had no idea and he was the last person I would associate with that.Which is why when Luke's doctor said "Turn the dial down lad." well geez the guy you work out with at the gym or the guy you're having a beer with at the bar can pretty much tell you same thing "Pull yourself up by your bootstraps" "Buck up" for a doctor this guy sounds pretty simplistic
  10. Well the stage is set if that's the right term.Will Alec be more assertive in this next conversation with Finn? And how will Finn react?Based on how Finn was when Alec left I see no reason why this won't be okay but I've been surprised before.I hope River designs an awesome selfie Alec can send Finn. So you were intent on dying this weekend? Do I see the makings of another story coming?If that came of as flippant I didn't mean it to but I find that comment interesting. Fried candy bar? You mean a regular candy bar isn't unhealthy enough?
  11. In this case either word is accurate
  12. All the baggage is gone from Puppy's life at the moment at the moment BTW I have relatives in Austrailia but I never been there do you know where they are going?If they are going to Adalaide this would be a good time to go.🤔I'd like to watch Puppy and Steven bicker So Puppy says he's through with men?We all know how likely that is.Hope you revisit his life down the road.I'll be interested to see how he's doing.Thank you for the story
  13. Put THAT in your next story description trust me the readers will come
  14. MORE!MORE! I"M STILL NOT SATIFIED
  15. I normally don't lobby an author to put something in a in process story that would make me more annoying than I am now. Having said that I know this one character hasn't been mentioned at least I don't recall in this story and it makes sense since the story centered around Jay and Loe but I hope at the wedding you mention in passing that Matt's Dad Brad was there.
  16. Gee you don't think I was too obvious do you
  17. Oh man if that ever became the case I would be going on the lam
  18. Make up fake accounts if you have too.....Who said that?
  19. For a very brief moment I thought the Pastor had a little bit of intelligence but the more he started talking about the gay topic the more he sounded like the idiot he is and I'm convinced they should not sail I just hope nobody gets hurt or even worse dies. Assuming they all survive I hope Robbie stays at Rory's house for the time being.There is still a slight worry there Rory is cute if the stars line up just so its not out of the question that Rory and Robbie have an encounter
  20. You heard the old saying about New York,New York the city they had to name twice or words to that effect. Well this is the chapter you have to read twice
  21. Welcome back I was worried you got sick or something. I'm glad Steven and Puppy seem to be on the same page.It sound like Hunter is going to be an issue in the future
  22. I'll go do that now I hadn't done so yet because along with the choices they give you like Addictve/Pacing,Characters etc. they haven't added "Kbois edited it" I've been waiting for that .
  23. I'll make no comment on this being posted on Sunday I'm guessing anything I say will get me in trouble with one of you two.S will will be posted at the usual morning time on Wednesday? @kbois was right this is a excellent chapter.When Jays dad said "Jay Clarence Petermeyer" that reminds to the truths in life besides Death and taxes and that is if your full name is being used either your Parents are pissed at you or you just got arrested for being a serial killer. Aidan saying the sign off was awesome😀 After the question “Okay Jay, what would you order if you were first in line?” Kbois must have edited out the line "Dirty Dr Pepper because @Mrsgnomiesaid it was so good.
  24. Oh jeez Am I as twisted as you or what as soon Zeke spoke of being a fruit in a school play how come I just knew he was banana? How does the station dynamics work is Maya and Jerry above Mr. Allison?I thought being station manager he could over rule Maya and Jerry unless I'm mistaken
  25. Curious if Lauti insecurities will be a continuing problem but I'n really glad they did THE deed. Don't quite know what to make of Lauti and Lauti(Cappa) getting on well. Didn't see that coming
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