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After 9/11 the media talked about how some Muslims mostly teenagers but adults also have been radicalized to the point where they can't ever be reasoned with I think we have that here in the U.S.except its people who follow and believe the Trent Adams of the world. I have heard of isolated cases of individuals being former members of terrorist organization and changing their ways but its the exception we should study how they came to realize the error of their ways.I can only wish what happened to Trent Adams in your story would happen IRL but as you said what would it take for that to happen?
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It may be necessary for Dad to show Mom how AM blew through $10,000 in such a short time It MIGHT and I only say might get Mom to see the reason why Tim is doing this.
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I wonder if Deme might even be able to make a friend at school without Shane freaking out. it would be nice if someone could tell Shane not to so possessive but he doesn't have anybody like that to tell him. While I hope I'm wrong that's where this might be going.
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If that's Henry's usual waking up routine I think I'll try to find a way to pay them a visit one morning. Deep fried Oreos never heard of it but it sounds interesting.healthy also🙄
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Chapter 5 - Strange Encounters
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Strange Encounters
Duh!!! That's right my bad.Although it would be a good twist if Ryan and Alex could suddenly be able to do that. I'm curious when Ian encountered Owen and Alex in the previous story if Alex would be able to sense there is something different about Ian. -
“She went to call your dad, and she wants him to come and get her. She’s angry for what you did.” She angry for what TIM did?? Never visiting after she left home and not even a Christmas Card for 10 years that's something to be angry at not Tim. Mom has to realize left to her own devices AM would be penniless again if Tim didn't intercede it doesn't take a rocket scientist to know that
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Chapter 5 - Strange Encounters
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 5 - Strange Encounters
I didn't know for sure but I thought there was a reason why this story was being told from Ian's POV still a surprise somewhat.I'm going to assume the wolves were Ryan and Alex or is that that to easy? What up with Ian losing interest in Kevin so fast?Is there even something more going on with Ian🤔 -
I think I know as do most of the readers I'm sure know who Trent Adams is suppose to represent.Out of all the media outlets you mentioned the one Trent Adams is from wasn't mentioned thank you for that. I can't wait to see what Micah's plan is for the above mentioned person ( and I use that term loosely )
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I was so worried when you had the lyrics to the Skeeter Davis song in the chapter I guess it pertained to Mary Ellen but I'm not sure. The timing of this chapter was also eerie as there was ANOTHER incident last week.What is it going to take for the right thing to happen?
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@drsawzall alluded to this.AM could have appealed this by arguing she is a grown adult capable of handling he own affairs and not be treated like a minor with no rights.But her childish outburst gives Tim and the court plenty of evidence that the proper action has been taken. I wonder if AM was only surrounded by her stuff instead of Eva's would she have broken anything🤔
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“When I get my inheritance, you all can go to hell.” OMG!!! I don't think there has ever been a more arrogant comment in any one of your stories. Tim later mentioned "Later that evening, after our shower, lying in bed, I told Stephen about my argument with Ann Marie. I hadn’t mentioned it to Mom, and I don’t intend to tell her." I think that's exactly what his Mom needs to hear I don't think she fully gets it yet.
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Oh I'll bet you she'll talk to him after she finds out
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The kind of set up Tim is doing for AM is what her husband would have done since he had to know her crazy spending.What was that marriage about?I don't think he loved her. I bet AM in high school was one of those girls who were part of the "popular crowd" but in reality was a spoiled b---h
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Chapter 4 - Unreachable
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 4 - Unreachable
Kevin read there are no wolves in these parts I'm guessing that is a clue.Was that howling from Owen? From boners touching the night before to Kevin choosing to spoon Ian? Not exactly subtle -
A lot involved in moving to New York city what happens if it turns out J.J. doesn't like his new position? Gonzales-Jefferies enterprises.I don't think there is going to be a problem but now wouldn't Henry now have to sign off on the proposed partnership J.J would have with Greg and Billy?Greg J.J.'s first BF.. again I don't see a problem but you never know.
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So Tim has come to the conclusion AM doesn't like him because of his orientation AM also doesn't speak to Eva is that because she's close to Tim? Did Eva tell John this?It would explain why John asked AM such a pointed question
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Interesting first chapter that cover story picture is that the picture Evan's dad was referring to at the beginning of the chapter? It's only been one chapter and I already miss Mary Ellen. "to a fondness to bread and butter pickles and the juice straight from the jar" What's wrong with that?I have that sometimes LOL
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The way you wrote this I briefly thought Mattias was dead.No surprise He is in juvie as for if Kyle will end up there maybe for a shorter time if that detective Wheeler read Kyle's journal and realizes Kyle's involvement but based on owning money to that thug Salvatore and the people he killed was really self defense kill or be killed and I'm guessing Mattias took the brunt of the blame when he spoke to the police.Like @chris191070 mentioned Amy and Hudson seem to love Kyle like family so I can see them taking Kyle in.
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While Belle was working up to telling everybody what the Doctor said I could really feel her tension.Its so good to see that while going through this terrible ordeal Belle has such a great support system. The cats are getting along even better.
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So AM spends her money on clothes the very idea of being seen in clothes over a month old perish the thought😱She needs a serious lifestyle adjustment .Tim thinks she need to see a psychiatrist I bet she has no idea if she has insurance or not. This is only a story so I won't harp on this too much but in California $170,000 would not get you diddily let alone a farm I suppose it could be different in other states.One thing is Donnie parents are not looking the get the max amount only enough to live comfortably.Besides Donnie set the price right?
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Tim is definitely doing the right thing but I'm curious what threshold does he have to meet to declare AM legally incapable of controlling her money ?Yes you can show what a moron she is by showing how she ran thru $10,000 but it's not illegal to be stupid I guess the judge must have a lot of discretion. I loved the line" Eva said she wants to check her luggage.”
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J.J.. and Henry seem perfect for each other but I felt that way about Shaun also so while I'm optimistic for the record I'll go with🤞 A little predicting the future in this chapter is this what you think will happen or hope will happen?I won't go into much detail but I hope parts of what Henry said turns out to be right. Are they going to look up Franklin?
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Chapter 3 - Friends and Enemies
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Friends and Enemies
It was definitely out of character for Owen to do what he did. Was that wolf really random or is there a connection to characters in the previous stories? Kevin didn't say anything to Ian about laying down naked on the top of the sheets if I was Kevin I would not have said anything either I wouldn't want to discourage him from doing it again.I wonder if Kevin is thinking the same way? -
The whispered voice Tim AND Stephen heard safe to say was Donnie by letting Stephen hear him I guess Donnie approves of him. If the money is Off shore it may be hard to get to it's a classic way for the wealthy to avoid paying taxes but I don't know how it would play out here.
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Well that was sure an interesting new development.What has to happen for some kind of action has to be taken against this gang? I can see another confrontation in the future after Kasper finds out everything between West and Neil. A fight maybe what if Neil or Kasper gets seriously hurt?How does West deal then?
