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You heard the old saying about New York,New York the city they had to name twice or words to that effect. Well this is the chapter you have to read twice

Welcome back I was worried you got sick or something. I'm glad Steven and Puppy seem to be on the same page.It sound like Hunter is going to be an issue in the future

I'll go do that now I hadn't done so yet because along with the choices they give you like Addictve/Pacing,Characters etc. they haven't added "Kbois edited it" I've been waiting for that .

I'll make no comment on this being posted on Sunday I'm guessing anything I say will get me in trouble with one of you two.S will will be posted at the usual morning time on Wednesday? @kbois was right this is a excellent chapter.When Jays dad said "Jay Clarence Petermeyer" that reminds to the truths in life besides Death and taxes and that is if your full name is being used either your Parents are pissed at you or you just got arrested for being a serial killer. Aidan saying the sign off was awesome😀 After the question “Okay Jay, what would you order if you were first in line?” Kbois must have edited out the line "Dirty Dr Pepper because @Mrsgnomiesaid it was so good.

Oh jeez Am I as twisted as you or what as soon Zeke spoke of being a fruit in a school play how come I just knew he was banana? How does the station dynamics work is Maya and Jerry above Mr. Allison?I thought being station manager he could over rule Maya and Jerry unless I'm mistaken

Curious if Lauti insecurities will be a continuing problem but I'n really glad they did THE deed. Don't quite know what to make of Lauti and Lauti(Cappa) getting on well. Didn't see that coming

If you ask me getting another day of brand new banter between you two is lot like getting a new chapter.

I think the word Deja vu fits here somewhere

Rafe,Joe and Daeran sound like me when I was in classes although if I had a shapeshifter professor who changed appearances every 5 minutes that would keep me from sleeping. wonder what Mr. Surf actual original appearance is. There's some reason why it was mentioned Rafe witnessed an aide taking something out of a student's hand and I bet its ominous

So it's the best chapter because its @kboisfavorite chapter right?....(crickets chirping) ,uh right? Of course that's right

I don't know how you do it the chapters keep getting better and better. Some quotes from the story. "Almost on cue, Jay and Aidan start pouting"---Now I know how President Biden can get things done in Washington D.C. when negotiating bring those two along to pout. “I twiple pwomise I won’t pee on you!”And since Aidan’s sleeping with us, Carson has to,too----I'm sure Aidan will keep his twiple pwomise but he didn't promise that Carson wouldn't pee on him. Aido Potato? Mya Papaya? Any of you reader who are expecting newborns speak to @Mrsgnomieabout choosing a name. On a more serious note I'm not sure anyone else has mentioned this possibility/probability but we hear Loren's stance on having kids but given his expierience growing up I bet if he hears about a neglected kid from someone in his circle of friends he would not hesitate to adopt the kid or two....or three

As if you don't know

I guess Finn read what @Hermetically Sealedwrote in the previous chapter comments because he said close to the same thing. Before I make a judgment on this I'm going to wait to see what Finn proposes but it sounds like he's on the right track and for what it's worth I'm optimistic

Call me a nerd or annoying but this thought just popped in my head while re-reading this chapter . Andy found out from Alan Walker that his mother died and then found out that the Walkers sent birthdays cards and Christmas gifts to him but Gunnar made sure he never knew about it he had to have Stephan think that side of the family didn't care for him.My question?Had he stayed alive what the heck was Gunnars end game?When Stephan would turn 18 Gunnar could not chance Stephan leaving and maybe trying to find his mother. Also when Stephan turned 18 Alan Walker with his high profile job with the government might have tried using his government contacts to try to contact Stephan now that Gunnar no longer had the legal tools to keep them away from Stephan.Gunnar was smart enough to know this so I have to think his solution was for Stephan to meet his demise someway. I know of what I just wrote was thankfully a moot point but I ask you Parker this because you created these wonderful (And In Gunnars case not so wonderful) characters so you would have the best insight as to what could have or would have happened.Interesting after all this time after reading this story and a thought like this comes from nowhere before now I never even considered that. Thanks for indulging me.

While researching Lauti's disorder Valen is remembering things about his Mom.Is Lauti aware of what happened with Valen's Mom? If not I can definitely see this being brought up if Lautu is going through a bad stretch. As far as Lauti going out Valens with his Uni mates that might be a bad idea I'm sure there will be some anxiety issues with Lauti and perhaps Cappa looks At Valen in a certain way one that Valen is unaware of but Lauti might notice

You beat me to it I was going to suggest #noneoftheabove but yours is better

Of course not you only kill characters willy-nilly when you're editing @Mrsgnomie stories.But she keeps catching it before she posts it.

Marylou what a piece of work.I'm glad the camera caught everything. I guess all of this is happening in the present time unlike some of your other stories. July 1 is indeed on a Friday this year

Loren matured looks like @kboisdid also(at least compared to before)

Perfect Chapter there is nothing to add.Except maybe @kbois saying the chapter was perfect because of her editing. "The little guy looks at me like, who is this guy?" "Even nails me with the same unimpressed stare.” Yep Carson is definitely Seamus son

OMG then he has no idea what kind of hornets nest he will stir

You already challenged him to come cross country what's taking him so long? This goes back to a previous story we read Etotsira used sad puppy eyes on the author Dabeagle don't fall for it

How did I miss this?Any way Jerry is a special class of A---hole he already got Zeke time slot there was no reason to say that outrageous lie in from of Dillan.So petty.I hope Zeke goes head to head with Jerry's time slot and blows him away (hint,hint).Noe to read the next chapter which just got posted

Wow so much goes into planning a club and I bet you left out a lot. What was GG hinting at?What gift?Maybe adopting a Kid?

@DemiurgeNotice he said that you have no proof NOT that he doesn't lie