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Here's an excerpt from this chapter "When they arrived, the sandy parking lot of Ironward was filled to the brim with other aircrafts and strange-looking automobiles, and a large throng of people was already heading into the monolith. Though, despite the jam-packed lot, Toby was able to spot an empty lot, which they later found out was designated for them. “And we’re back,” the Irons relaxed back in his seat. “And with a lot more company, too.” “Take a good look, guys,” Beau pointed out the window. “Stare them down if you have to. These are the people you’ll be surrounded by for the next nine years." In another chapter they said ten years I'm not sure if Beau has already counted one year down and that's why he said the next nine years

I though 4 years at high school was daunting but 10 years at that place? Rafe at a moments notice is always on the defensive and that's probably good at Ironwood but I see Andre as being a moderating influence on Rafe

I think you're right about that.I also think Jay without going into detail asked his family NOT to ask any questions or make any references to Loren's family(or lack of)

Meeting the family went great despite Loren's misgivings.Should Loren keep the conversation about what his brothers said to himself probably yes but it might be good for Jay to be made aware of this some way but how? I like your variation on the Folgers coffee slogan“The best part of waking up...”“Is bein’ in Loe’s butt?”Very catchy but how do you get it pass the censors🤔 A very minor editing oversight “You have a thicc ass, too.” Is @kbois who takes credit for all the good edits responsible for that one also?Oh wait what am I thinking that was obviously @Mawgrim responsibility BTW shouldn't you have asked me first before you used all my DM's?...Uh I mean....never mind

I was going to mention this possibility on Thursday but I'll throw it out there now in case this gets answered in some way in the next chapter.I just thought of this that women that Sven seen with Lars is it possible that its a younger sister Loren has never met?I know its crazy nutty that they would have another kid after abandoning Loren but the parents ARE crazy nutty(and evil).As I'm typing this I'm starting to think no I would guess that would have been brought up in court. But that doesn't leave out that it's a possible half sister from one of the parents fooling around and that was also kept secret from Lars.OK thanks for indulging me I might bring this up again depending

I agree with the previous readers comments about Keith not telling Amy but Bradd will speak to Patrickso now Bradd will be single until Keith does God know what' Officially I don't think this will happen less then a 25% chance of this but I'll throw it out there anyway.Earl seems to be really into Bradd yep I mean in that way .The nuttier part of this is I'm thinking did Earl and Keith cross the line? It would explain why Earl is walking all over Keith

As great as this chapter was if that original paragraph was allowed to stand all of us readers would have scratched our collective heads and thought to ourselves something critical seems to be missing but we can't put our finger on it.But "whew" kbois solved that with great editing. As far as Skrewball being kbois go-to? How about a variation on an old saying "It takes one to like one" or something like that.

Just don't make the Packers as bad as you made the Rams and you'll be okay

If she has that in her possession NOTHING will make her part with that

Too many obvious comments to be made about Aido peeing on Loren so I'll refrain. Jay think that they are going to throw away the license plate number.If he's right it sounds like Lars has to make the move not Loren.I think they share Sven's concern that Lars is up to no good but I guess would be if this and the backstory became public Loren would get a tremendous amount of public support.The parents probably lied to Lars about happen with Loren and didn't get the truth until they tried to get custody of Loren again.I bet Lars has no idea how to approach Loren after all this time and not seem like he wants something you can say he's a victim in this also. Somehow saying Jay leads the league in hugs instead of sacks totally changes the meaning of that.BTW you didn't say who they beat to get to the Super Bowl or who they played in the Super Bowl .Avoiding your brother's wrath? So they just happen to be playing in Denver on Christmas where Aido Potato is .WHAT a coincidence.Its like a higher power is at work here.....The Author

The way I see it baby steps.At first Alec wanted to high tail it out of there but ended up going on a hike with Finn even said something I thought was significant “Finn it’s one of the happiest memories I have from that time of my life.” I don't think he ever expressed himself like that to Finn in the past.On the hike back I hope the subject of that girl in the picture comes up. Milo reaction to Alec somewhat surprised me(Jailbait made me laugh) I get the impression Finn's entire family liked Alec. So you dance when you reach 600,000 written words?What are you going to do when you reach 1,000,000?

Once Rafe finds a way to control those lasers he is even going to be more of a bad ass then he already is but there has to be a better way than imagining Andre being hurt. I need to find out more about this restraining order.The Coat seems to be a lawless bunch who exactly would enforce this restraining order?

Did you miss chap 7 earlier today? I ask because you didn't react to that one.

What an odd place a bunch of destruction and everyone is like ho-hum.😴 I have to believe in that environment that it's imperative Rafe trains Andre to defend himself. I thinks it's obvious somewhere down the line the Coat will find Rafe

Oh that's right Poland right next door to that.I'm praying for the people of Ukraine and now also Poland since they have been threaten. This was in addition to being happy for Sammy and Drake it was also suspenseful for me for them being on the living room rug I just kept picturing their Mom coming in and say "Guess what they let me off ear....".I would say she suspects in the back of her mind but since she's away a lot maybe not. A thought about Sasha perhaps he secretly has a thing for Sammy and he's mad at himself for it so he's sort of mad at Sammy just a thought

That was a cryptic comment by the husband of the Priestly women.I'm going to take an admittedly wild guess here.I wonder if they are related to the college roommate guy in the previous story (I don't remember his name at the moment and I really don't care to) that would be motivation for Priestly to take the kids away maybe they attended the trial. Okay since I'm probably wrong it will be interesting to see the back story and how they know them

I suppose it's human nature to worry what can go wrong now.Judging by how the chapter ended there's another hurdle.The most likely source?I'm thinking Carson

Excellent chapter. Now why would Armand want to show Colin the sex room🤔

Before anybody answers that how much storage space does GA allow in our comments?

A real fun story thank you.Good thing Mike and Robbie aren't cops otherwise they might recharged with cruel and unusual punishment. Jeez you had to mention a steak and cheese omelet. After I'm done posting this message I know what I gotta do now.

When @Mrsgnomie mentioned @scrubber6620 instead of @kbois I though uh-oh something is going to hit the fan but Kbois enjoyed it anyway Another great chapter .I don't remember if what Loren proposed to Seamus and Matt was mentioned in BN.I'll reserve comment on that until I check it out.In any case it was a great gesture by Loren I had a news channel on TV in the back ground when you posted the new chapter.I didn't have the sound on but the picture looked like one of those White House Press conferences settings and there was a empty microphone I guess the press briefing was delayed.I know what happened whoever was suppose to be there waited for your new chapter to come up to read first.

Like I said in a previous chapter comment there wasn't any reason that the police needs Parker's phone to see the video has gone viral .So why do they want Parker's phone?It can't be for a good reason I think they are looking for Parkers personal texts,sites etc. to use to their advantage I hope the lawyer has a counter ready for that. The Principal is a moron this Principal has no principles he kept saying"What Parker did..."PARKER DIDN'T DO IT!!!.First the students at the basketball game did and then the police officer.The Principal shout be asked what should Parker have done after he saw what happened just move on like nothing happened?Is that his position?He doesn't care if there's a racial problem at his he only cares that everyone knows about it.It's been mentioned that there is one black student are there any Hispanics or Asians at the school?If there are the ignorant student body would probably think the Hispanic family are illegal immigrants and the Asian family started covid. Things could escalate to the point where Parker isn't safe at school I see an scenario where he transfers to another school maybe a private school that Darius attends it's one way they can get to know each other

Thing are awesome between Mike and Robbie so of course bank robbers have to get into the picture and F things up for them.My guess is and I stress this is a guess that Mike and Robbie go out for a walk and wouldn't you know it they somehow come across that tree I can think of some other scenario's also so I'll be interested to see what happens.I will say this I guess the tree is in a secluded place but I would feel comfortable leaving a lot of money there then again I also would not rob a bank either so who knows how these guys think.Depending on how long Theo has done his job I bet he would consider that possibility also

My first reaction at how the chapter ended is those large blurry masses are bullies or they are a species that are naturally hostile toward Bones kind. Either way I see Rafe coming to his defense

Wasn't Aidan's terrible twos already a horror story?