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A Banquet for the Future
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in A Banquet for the Future
That might have of been too much of a hint.I'm thinking Henry's suit didn't fit so he wore the vest or something like that .I guess we'll find out next chapter. Who ever did it probably couldn't get away in that crowd so that will be interesting also. -
A Banquet for the Future
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in A Banquet for the Future
Before I get to the big incident in the chapters a couple of thoughts.This was interesting timing for the chapter with Elon Musk to appear he just got sued by his stockholders a few days ago. J.J. speech was awesome and I loved how he mentioned all the people who helped him on his journey but it chicken s--- how Jeff surprised him like that. As far as the shooting goes it was aimed specifically at Henry since J.J was in another part of the room. What possible reason would someone want Henry dead? This is a long shot but maybe some nut case who has a crush on J.J. is angry at Henry because he has him. J.J. mentioned they didn't wear thier bulletproof vests not good thinking.I'm hoping Henry's bodyguard maybe convinced him to put it on anyway. -
"and you are the perfect narcotic," That's one I never heard that one before but that's perfect.This would be an example of a good narcotic
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This was when 20 years ago or so? The School board and most of the staff must have been close to retirement age then.As distasteful as no redress is I wouldn't want to hurt Bruce wife either.I bet stuff like this has happened more than we know.
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West points out that the gang won't kill because he's the son of a famous basketball player and they don't want the attention. That could be true but would it be true for Kasper,Finn and Justin? Neil now knows how persistent West is.After the latest session they just had I get the feeling Neil is now just as committed
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Good thing for AM that she has Alex.Imagine if Tim sold the lodge for 2 million and AM didn't have Alex and AM had control of the money? The money may not have lasted a year🤔Maybe not even 6 months.
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My Mom grew up in Rumania but she had to leave because of the events of WWII as did most of family.Thats why I have family in different parts of the world including as far as Australia. Going abroad was perfect for Tim and Stephen being as far away from all that mess as possible.Donnie is making sure this marriage is staying strong
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My first reaction after meeting Max is that He is somehow connected to the problems with the paperwork
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One quick comment before talking about this chapter the people who demanded a "seat at the table" on one of the three ships were probably part of families whose businesses helped put Earth in the dying position it got in. I sure hope this story stays science fiction instead of science fact 100 years from now. I'll be very interested to see what the instructions are next chapter.I couldn't help but be reminded of the story The Lottery as I was reading this I wonder if that's what you were going for. The difference in that story is the end results was more severe and barbaric then it would seem to be here
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What you just wrote I'm so afraid is the only way that we as a planet will do the things we have to do to save it
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So glad they had that vacation.One thing you mentioned surprised me is that they stayed on the plane during the stop over in Denmark on every one of the flights I took we always had to go to another plane on a stop over. When Tim mentioned holding Stephen hand in public while in Hungary you can do that in most of Europe unlike the U.S.But I heard it said don't do that in a Muslim country.
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I get the impression Alec was going to text Finn if he does it's critical that he he has to say the right thing whatever that is.He should make clear that he feels bad about upsetting Finn. Finn on the other hand should realize Alec has been sheltered all his life and that was A big reason why Alec didn't understand his question. What Finn thinks should be obvious Alec doesn't get. The way River was trying to explain things to Alec tells me River and Finn should have a similar conversation River can tell him things about Alec and why he reacts the way he does
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That Shapiro women is certainly guilty of a lot of stuff which she will pay for in some way but as far as the shooting goes Altimexis implied it will be a surprise right now it looks a lot like it's Shapiro so that wouldn't be a surprise so then who is it🤔.
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Not all but most high school basketball teams have an assistant coach and a JV coach if they are still around maybe they can shed some light
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I'm going to state the obvious I feel really bad for what's going to happen to Patrick and Amy.And all because Keith couldn't say how he really feels all this could have been avoided if he was able to.As much of a dick as Earl can be he had Keith figured out better then Bradd.
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I'll be very curious to see how Donnie helps Andrew I don't think Donnie can speak to him like he does Tim ,Andrew would freak out once he hears a voice coming from nowhere.But I'm confident our great author will come up with something
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Wow Shapiro is sure a piece of work.I hope the Henry went down line to end the chapter isn't as bad as it COULD possibly sound at the same time it may not be serious I hope for the latter.I got to believe with the video surveillance and Henry's recording of their conversation that Shapiro will be toast. On the subject of climate deniers there are still too many of them in key positions of power.
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So Shaina is a nymphomaniac and Zack was complaining about it? Doesn't sound like a teenager to me. After hearing about the stacked dirty plates and utensils in Zack and Trevor's bedrooms I wonder if I'm related to them
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Where would he have the time to get his GF preggers? He's either growing vegetables or working with Stephen on the computer😄
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I understand Tim and Stephen wanting to put this behind them but there has to be a way to have all the enablers The Coach,The principle,The staff the School district be held accountable for this.I get it if Tim doesn't want to do it himself but maybe contact some representative of an organization that specializes in helping victims of sexual abuse etc. With all due respect too much damage has been done to "Let it go"
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I understand the safety precautions FF has but correct me if I'm wrong it would only take one rouge subscriber to put that video somewhere and all hell would break loose. I get the feeling Leo is going to lose yet another job.In the U.S. we don't have enough workers to fill all the available jobs if its the same over where they live I guess Leo will then get another job. Curious about Sasha change of heart🤔
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The cover up by the staff is reason why Tim should consider a class action lawsuit not only against the estate of Bruce but also the Coach and the school district and have all the victims in on it as well as AM. The "cow manure would smell like roses next to him" comment should have been printed instead of printing the word shit they could have printed the word excrement in brackets.That comment would have really got a lot of attention
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leave it to me to be the spoil sport in a otherwise hot chapter I see a red flag about the paperwork Noah mentioned at work
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Well Bruce being a star basketball player in a small town is probably another reason he got away with all that crap.You didn't mention any pro-Bruce responses unless you count the condolence responses which are still appropriate. Along with Rich his boss the editor will also have to sign off on doing the article Tim suggests.The responses to that one would be about 50/50.Anybody who might be offended at being called partly responsible for what happen I'm sure the victims will write and put then in their place. This might be a topic that could span between 2-5 editions worth of comments in the paper
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I guess its fair to say Finn is a little naive.That conversation Alec and River overheard was typical of the conversations I heard when I was in HS wayyyyy back when.I never participated in that try to listen to but even minding my own business I managed to still overhear a lot of that crap I guess that's one thing that hasn't changed over the years.For Finn not to realize that was out there shows he has a lot to learn. I'm guessing nobody thinks Finn may be gay otherwise he wouldn't be so popular.But saving a parking space for them might get some observers thinking that he is. Being two years older if Alec leaves town after graduation that would most likely put that though on the back burner so that would save Finn some possible grief at school.I'm really anxious to hear their upcoming conversation things that haven't been said yet are going to be said.I'm thinking the words will come out wrong by one or both of them
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