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Mission - Personal Attack
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Personal Attack
It would take some extraordinary writing to have g still alive (I refuse to capitalize his name) The only thing I would have done differently was I would have pissed in his face while he was still barely alive.Now as Corey said "Let's go find Tyler" -
I was late to the previous chapter and as soon as I commented on it the new chapter got posted I swear I didn't have an advance copy of your chapter LOL. Adam asked for alternatives besides death so I wonder if he's really going to go through with the hanging.I'm against any kind of death penalty but if I were to do that this would be one of the offenses.
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Loved the chapter.Although there is no evidence of anything and while I'm sure the majority of the Ministers are faithfully doing their duties people being people some Minister might try something because Gerry is so young and thinks he can get away with it.Maybe Adam can do background checks etc.
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I missed the notification on this chapter sorry about that. I'm getting that uneasy feeling that Bran is connected to the Amber alerts. As far as the garage door goes we knew that attitude existed but before it was subtle not anymore
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I was under the impression he was no longer with us. Well if that's not the case we can always hope
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What an awesome gesture by Gerry and smart also what his Dad told him in his sleep was very wise.There is no doubt Gerry will attempt to do what is right but sometimes the best intentions are foiled because of complications only governments can have you need good advisors.I suspect there will be a lot of Skype calls between Gerry and Adam in the future
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Wow word got around fast about the quality of Kings College of course if I was thinking what college should I go to and somebody told me about the Apple Watch I'm there LOL. When Adam retires it will be critical to make sure the right people are in place to continue not that Adam will not recognize the qualified people but the shoes will be awfully hard to fill
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I just binged read this .This was one of these stories where I said just one more chapter,just one more chapter until finally I said screw it I'll read the whole thing LOL. I couldn't stop another awesome Ronyx story.There are only two stories left of his that I haven't read I have mixed feeling about that maybe I'll read those a little at a time I would hate to have a lull in new stories to read on GA and not have a Ronyx story to fall back on. Thank you sir
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The Family got some background on JJ from Papi so that will absolutely help in how they will deal with him especially the sexual abuse.JJ intelligence might be good for their kids also. I mentioned this in a previous chapter comment But maybe Jerry through his position in the military has a contact that could get some info Adam/Simon/JJ dad'd police case(I won't use the word murder) BTW he didn't know Snapple? Geez.
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Clark Kent didn't lose over 50% of his body weight
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I am glad Jack and Tracy remembered their experience. I gotta say Tristan and Hunter bonding wow I pity the fool who would get both of them PO'd
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Are the younger sibs aware of Tristan doing that? Uh come to think of it better not tell them that's where a little knowledge is a dangerous thing
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Sounds like that land with the barn has just been sitting there not being used Adam could probably negotiate a good deal. Making it as a singer is a long shot even if you're good like Abe but if Adam knows the right person who knows
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So the Sheriffs knew where to find them . I don't think Pete told on them you don't bring them something to eat and drink and then call the Sheriffs. Pete said he would come back with more food in the morning so my guess is he was caught by his parents trying to do that. Being that it was two high school kids that Pete knows I would think they would talk to them to find out what's up but they called the Sherriff to get them why? I think the Pastor when he reported the incident added some worse stuff that didn't happen like they were armed and dangerous or something like that something that would activate an alert on people's smartphones or be reported on the local news that's the reason why Pete's parents called the Sheriff. From here there are three things that can happen to Matt and Charles they could end up back at the Pastor's place, back at their parent's house or in Juvenile detention I really think Juvy might be the least bad of the three options at least in Matt's case. Sadly I'm seeing a lot of adversity for Matt. Charles I'm not sure.
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I love the friendships that the academy and college have formed Adam has gotten close to a lot of kids will there be a kid that will want to follow in Adam's footsteps?It is never too early to groom a successor of course that could be Little Adam (BTW there is a really old cartoon going way back called Big World of Little Adam)
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Wow you really like to draaaaaag it out LOL. Sturgis goose is cooked.Sounds like a pretty good gig for Farmer. I wonder if he'll ever try to covertly communicate with Phillip just to advise him
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Mission - Do You Want to Know the Truth?
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in Mission - Do You Want to Know the Truth?
I had Wyatt in the back of my mind that he would show again.I suspect the stuff Zeke found is planted to make Tyler look guilty. I tend to be optimistic -
What boggles my mind is Jack and Tracy was ostracized for being gay in Dancing and TJ and Jackson being gay is well aware of what went on when they were kids and what still goes on they should be smarter then that.
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Wow things are moving fast if Abe got his GED and Buster is knocking Adam down. It must be getting close to the time Gerry is in charge of the country
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Aw this chapter was so feel good but then three men with bombs strapped on their chest you just could't help yourself. You said you were returning some characters and I figured the brothers would be there and seriously in my head I thought I wonder if someone like Jimmy would show and sure enough that was a nice surprise did we ever know who his husband was? I remember you saying in a chapter comment that nobody really dies in your stories so I was wary that Emily might show but all she got was an mention
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well in that case Wesley can have all the royalties.
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Naturally Adam would want a son but as he said as long as the baby is healthy. So Little Marie is three?I guess you didn't want to write about what people call the terrible two's
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Threesomes are definitely not for everybody but with these three it just somehow seems right.
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Very well done especially when you consider it was only suppose to be three chapters.I'm an almost life long San Diego resident so Ethan went to SDSU I wonder if I crossed paths with them LOL. Thank you so much again
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Welcome little Marie. I'm about to ask something I have no idea if it's possible.Is there a way Amir could go online and have the English text translated into the text he needs and then have it printed out?I'm sure there's a flaw in there somewhere just thinking out loud.
