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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Geez why did you have name one of his friends Rush?????You know who I thought of didn't you?Thats all 'll say before I get into trouble. I hope Damon isn't too sick. BTW someone tell Ronnie the Twink I'm interested
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That thought occured to me also if that gets attempted then he JJ could always evoke the no-contact clause
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Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
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Ms Weiss is who I thought she would be judging by the last chapter but @Christopherasks a very good question if she is a past victim of Bruce other then that happening I hope the article Rich writes exposes her. I have a question was a rape ever officially reported with AM?I'm not a lawyer(thank God) but if there is no official report there is no statute of limitations I would think but Tim would know that so I'm probably mistaken
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Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
weinerdog commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 156 The Scarlet Pimpernel
Interesting clue you gave at the end of the chapter .I think Mr. Lube is right there is going to be disaster with Don's boat not because of the bad luck renaming a boat it is because it's...Don enough said. I have a funny feeling when the dust clears Robbie will end up being involved in the baby's life- 36 comments
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Interesting times ahead they have to find a way for J.J. and Henry to live on on their own.Whatever they try to do with a lawyer that is going to get a ton of attention from the media I would imagine So James grew up in Riverdale does he know Archie and Jughead's families maybe he was a lawyer for Mr. Lodge OK I know that's lame I'll stop now. Franklin seems to have picked up something else from J.J. the last two chapters he's been shirtless.On a serious note Both J.J and Henry should watch for signs that Franklin isn't suffering the same kind of stuff they did being genius level kids.They should make James and Mora aware of it.
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I read this over two days.I guess it natural for Jake to blame himself I hope he finds a way to let himself off the hook. The line in a earlier letter said something to the effect I'm a boy I'm not supposed to cry.It sucks that its considered a sign of weakness.More people have the exact same thoughts and feelings Jake expressed which he otherwise would not have.We never tell certain people how we really feel about each other when we are alive and sadly most people never will.
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What the heck was the father of the little boy afraid of? You think at the trial Donny might pay a visit to tell Tim to ask a specific question or something along those lines
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In an odd way the tux no longer fitting worked out better than actually going to the dance.You left us with a lot to ponder but all the pieces seem to be in place and I agree Ridley a very unique character
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Spiderman web sling ropes? I never heard that described that way.I bet some author reading that will borrow that phrase in one of their future stories.( I just realized as I was typing that and just to be clear I wasn't necessarily referring to Arch)
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Two men that the hotel clerk didn't know Tim and Stephen walk in and he automatically assumes they want those special rooms hmm.I bet there are also two sets of books for tax purposes also. So Tim mentions to Rich to follow him to his parents house that he has a scoop for him.Would that involve Rich speaking to Tim's mom for the story?Would she be willing to talk to Rich about it?
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Well he already has some irresistible treats isn't that the reason for the website?
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In addition to the client Chet sounds like a dumb ass also as the boss isn't he suppose to be reachable?Of course not if they can't reach him then he can't be blamed for telling them to do wrong thing can he? Judging by your story synopsis Damon has just returned to town and hasn't seen Cole yet but they both seem to go to McGee's and know the owner Tommy so do I sense a reunion here?If they do I hope Scott from the last chapter shows up and gets Damon ticked off enough to show some of his military training.
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You got to be kidding me really?I can't wait It's not even close Bruce is the most evil character you ever written. That Motel Tom mentioned I'm guessing too much time has passed for there to be any security video available.I'm hoping Bruce messed up once and paid with a credit card.
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The moment I saw Franklin's name in the the chapter even before the dialog explaining everything I went 'You got to be kidding me" It wasn't said but when J.J. told Rob the news I hope he said to tell the family to keep it between themselves because the way I see it all the possible legal issues they may have to keep things Status quo for awhile.I wonder if one day he will go by David Walters I guess that's who he legally is. I'm not 100% clear but from what I understand Franklin has figured it out but parents haven't yet that is going to be an interesting scene
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A couple of thoughts Leo lost two Jobs in a relatively short amount of time is there something hinky about that? I picture Jake and Sammy while shoveling knocking on a house door where the resident recognizes them from their online content could be dangerous. I like the other readers is curious about the young women with Billy's dad.Maybe with Sammy's camera they can get some video of them.A principle with a women like that would not look good but I don't think Sammy and Jake would do extortion
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Theres a shield law for rape victims but as far as I know there isn't for for the kind of extortion Bruce did to Tom is there a way to protect him if he cooperates?
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Since the school board would be bringing the suit they would have to prove the article is inaccurate how would they go about doing that? It's a great sign that AM apologized to Stephen
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Or another senior moment? Kidding😄
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On the surface I also think it suspicious that Tom got a job at a all girls school but the above comment makes me wonder if Tom wants to use his influence as a teacher to warn girls of what to look out for.
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It's already good can't wait to see how things go when Damon shows up.After he gets done tripping out over meeting Micah that is.
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A Conversation with the Boss
weinerdog commented on Altimexis's story chapter in A Conversation with the Boss
Make no mistake all those people attended the funeral because J.J. has made quite an impression on them and I think they also know he will be in the Forbes 200 soon.Just the same might want to be careful with his words when he speaks at the funeral and not reveal too much about his past while speaking about Jerry. It's a no brainer he has to meet his parents and his brother. I don't know what is going to happen but this would be a good place to see Shaun in the story again -
OK I might as well add my two points.If Ridley still resists Gabe might have go to a full court press he will prevail but it might go into overtime
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Normally I would say their Mom is quite naive but being a single who's working her ass off and her few spare moments are spent watching TV instead of the internet that's what people did before the internet so I can see her being unaware of what Sammy and Jake may be doing if she had spent her time online instead of TV she might have though of the possibility. Having said all that if they end up making a thousand plus or so a month that will raise a red flag.This may not happen in the story but what I would worry about is Leo showing them a way to fraudulently access the money on the credit card or somehow divert it to somewhere else to cover how much they are really making.I'm probably wrong but that is in the back of my mind.
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Ridley is a very complicated person he kisses someone twice in one night something he's never done before and then wants nothing to do with the same person don't know what to think about that🤔 Well obviously Ridley and James are going to connect again otherwise the story ends here but Ridley seems to be really stubborn so while I don't know what is going to happen somebody will have to influence Ridley into making the first move or being receptive to move Gabe may make.Maybe his Father?
