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Everything posted by weinerdog
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Pretty much the only difference between Matt and Charles situation is Charles had support from a loving Aunt while Matt had nothing and hence you see the results.After hearing how Charles has moved on and after Charles told Matt about Ricky going to college in California I bet Matt never felt more lonely at any time is his life😢.I was very disturbed to read the last line of the chapter when Matt left with Sergeant Lattimore about him leading him to his final destination. Matt's emotions are in a horrible place right now. Lattimore seems to be a police officer doing his job in good faith unlike in other GA stories where law enforcement officers are morons.Maybe somebody can help me/us with this Lattimore wants to investigate the molestation allegations but the Pastor is dead so really all that is left for the victim is a civil suit would the police still investigate if the accused is dead? One more thing to consider the Pastor didn't have Matt long enough to molest him but before he showed up at the Pastor's place the Pastor had Charles alone for awhile so you have to wonder if he molested Charles.If that did happen I'm betting Charles won't want to talk about it now that everything is good for him.This story is breaking my heart but I'm loving it
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When. The owner of thr cafe said he had an apartment on the second floor that sounded familiar was he a character from a previous story? Oops I double posted this only seems to happen when I post on my smartphone .Sorry
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I'm glad Jack got past what Joey and Roman did relatively easy. I hope when Roman went into Jack's parents room that he got a few pictures of Jack's mom preferably ones with just Jack and and his mom. This may be nothing or it may be huge but that card that Joey saw in Jack's room from what looks to be from his ex the mere fact Jack still has that card implies that this Anthony guy meant a lot to Jack. Unless it turns out Anthony died short of that there's a potential that it could be a problem and in this case it wouldn't insecure jealousy on Joey's part if he thought that it would be valid. What if Anthony finds Jack?
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When. The owner of thr cafe said he had an apartment on the second floor that sounded familiar was he a character from a previous story?
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Wow they sure how to throw a party.I guess I'm like the kids a burger off the grill any time over that fancy shancy stuff
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It sounds classic Neil and West don't like each other now but by the end of the story they'll be together I'li withhold that prediction for now but if that happened they'll be plenty of reactions from both families sort of like a gay West Side Story BTW I didn't realize my comment from last chapter didn't end up getting posted I messed up.If I remember right I was going to say Tuct Side Satans
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Do I Even Wanna Know?
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Do I Even Wanna Know?
Sandra's reaction was almost priceless how dare Andy don't walk lockstep with what she wants I don't think what Joey and Roman did should be a big issue I mean it's not common but it isn't unheard of either do you think Joey owes it to Jack to reveal that I personally don't think so. There was a few hints about Roman being a closet case and now Ryan comes along hmm do you think? -
So too many gay characters didn't seem real to that reader but an explosion every 3 chapters or so eh happens all the time
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They got each other and they can stick things into other things.They are not THAT old are they?
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Not only no cliffhanger he introduced Paulo a straight character STRAIGHT!!!!!! What is @AquariusGuy on anyway?
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Always Getting it Wrong
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Always Getting it Wrong
That was the wrong time for Joey to up that issue. Still I'm not so sure I get her logic. and Joey still does harder work then Jason I hope after considering it for a few day she will bump up his pay a little bit. -
I hope he confronted that schemer in a voice loud enough that all the other people at the buffet heard what was going on..
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Totally Wet and Full of Surprises
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Totally Wet and Full of Surprises
We had enough clues about what happened between Roman and Joey before it happened Roman broke up with his GF and recently Roman broke up with another GF and shortly after that was sort of flirting with Olly just saying. Well it looks like everything is starting to look good I'm sure the worst has already happened in this story right?....RIGHT??? -
You know what I find trippy?I was told this was first posted in 2016 yet there is dialog about refusing to wear a mask and the word Pandemic was mentioned (cue twilight zone music)
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You hear of people having these medical problems and you say to yourself oh that is sad but you can't really know unless you or someone close experiences it.You captured that feeling very well.
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Coming Out Of The Jungle Into The Savannah
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Coming Out Of The Jungle Into The Savannah
Well everything seems to be moving in the right direction Joey and Jack, Joey and Dean plus Toby and Olly hanging out sounds like a good thing.No huge surprise Joey not being allowed at Shaun's funeral.Shauns parents were nightmares and Jack's family sounds just as bad if Shaun hadn't taken his life He and Jack could have been confidants. -
As I was reading this I was thinking wow a real calm chapter but then the last words of the chapter "Jack said in a severe tone".AGGGH you just could'n help your self huh?
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Man there are so many possibilities here.These aliens is Adam seeing their real appearance or are they making themselves appear that way for Adam benefit?Are their internal systems just like humans on Earth?I know read the story and all will be revealed.What are the chances that these aliens speak English? Where they originally from Earth? I noticed they use the title Lord maybe they are British? OK I know I'm babbling I'll stop now. As far as that other mysterious ship that reminds me of Star Trek II The Wrath Of Khan remember they couldn't talk to that ship and then BOOM.I hope the Commander saw that movie LOL. Where's Sage?
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You didn't say but I guess he resigned from the restaurant by now.I wonder how hiring his former boss daughter went over
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Shaun Hits the Nuclear Button
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Shaun Hits the Nuclear Button
There are still a whole lot of things yet to be found out like did Shaun's parents do or say anything that made things worse in Shaun'd disturb mine.Shaun Mom told Dean not to come around did Shaun know that?Or did he think Dean did that on his own?Then there are the eleven messages Joey ignored not that I blame him but now he's going to look at what those messages read and it could only be bad. This happened at such an accelerated pace and there are so many things not done while I don't like his parents his Mom must be beating herself up for not calling the right people after his break down.Such an senseless tragedy and it will continue to be so😭 On a lighter note Roman isn't all that much older than Olly is he?Think of a couple of subtle hints.He broke up with his girl ,he called Jack cute he acted very relaxed when Olly said he was hot. Maybe not much to go on but I have to think that scene was written that way for a reason. -
I'm not sure how a memory wipe works Jackie forgot all that happened but remembered Peter.Can you be selective in a memory wipe? I like the idea of James and Casper later down the road . I agree with James playing a guitar makes you 10% hotter.So who's the nerd? Casper or James and I?
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Confronting the Worst Day of my Life - Part 2
weinerdog commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Confronting the Worst Day of my Life - Part 2
One huge question that needs to be asked is Shaun's state of mind temporary?Will he calm down after some time has past?Or is he going to stay like this.If he does then he is dangerous and Joey and his family have to keep their guard up.And if his idiot parents take him to "fixed" for being gay then he's going to be even more f'd up.- 28 comments
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I had a pretty good idea shortly after he met Jon where this was going.Well no worries about the contractor eh?
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I thought as soon as they went to get Adam that would be the last we would see of Sage but it sounds like they need to get him also this gets more intriguing as we go along
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It was obvious that if they looked at what JJ designed that they would know they had someone extraordinary.JJ said Mr Winters sent it in 2 months ago so safe to say during that time the higher ups investigated him and they know he isn't who he says he is. I get the feeling JJ may have to tell these guys the whole story and my hunch is they are going to try to fix things.How? Well the details should be interesting. whatever they do.
