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Moving to a four-day schedule, mainly because I'm excited about the direction the story is taking, and I want you to see it! That means the next chapter will post Sunday. Hey @kbois tell him you're shopping on Saturday he'll for sure post it then
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Chapter Nine: The Ward
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Nine: The Ward
But I'm not comfortable continuing a heavy antipsychotic regimen based solely on a parent's report." "The nurses will bring you food. I recommend you eat it. You're underweight." Those two comments right there tells me Dr. Raines is suspicious of Diana. Going Judge shopping to put Caleb in the hospital might be the biggest mistake Diana made. Since Dr Raines asked Caleb if he knew Riley and the next chapter is from Rileys POV I'm anticipating Riley being asked about Caleb -
Colin saying cool after Ryder introduced Owen as his boyfriend tells me he knows that the incident he saw when he was eight years old was incredibly stupid. And it shaped his attitude on this issue. Eric at the very least has to know in the back of his mind that Owen isn't meant for this. The next chapter should be a doozy the SUMMIT!!!
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Finally, "Is the law involved?" "No, sir. My father doesn't want the law in our-" he corrected himself, "in his business." Well that was something I wasn't considering until this chapter maybe I should have. If there is something that could involve the law perhaps that could be used as leverage. Then—Ash’s fingers brushed over something wrong on Taggert's back. His left shoulder blade. Something thick. Raised. Warped. Always where the towel draped after showers. Always ark eyes lifted to his. Ash kept his voice soft. “You don’t gotta tell me.” the left side. A scar. Big. Dark eyes lifted to his. Ash kept his voice soft. “You don’t gotta tell me.” It is out in the open now between Ash and Taggert. Ash won't push but this is the first step to Taggert telling Ash about it
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man that was a roller coaster ride
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A mess thats really isn't anyone fault
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In the previous story it was clear Ken and Kent were close but there was nothing to imply Ken was also gay. Twins are known to be closer than other sibling so losing one has more impact. But there is something deeper here. This should be interesting
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This may be a comment for another chapter but I don't think it's fair to blow up somebody's wedding to solve your problems. Of course the timing would have to be right. Would it be before the wedding? Or after at the reception? But if they don't then no s__t hits the fanwhat would a @mastershakeme be without that?🤔
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My Bad
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Of course in that town I bet everyone had thrown a phone at somebody at least once
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I like everyone else took a deep breath and was so relieved it wasn't one of the seahorses.The family of the boy don't know this but he helped save a life today....Owen's. I wonder if the dislike of Margot will lessen now.Yeah she was still stubbornly committed to the plan but today's conversation showed that she had misgivings in the back of her mind. Since no one yet had mentioned this (yet)Ryder and Owen will watch Colin's practice from a distance but that doesn't mean Colin won't see them out of the corner of his eye and perhaps after practice run them down.That could be an interesting scene in it's own right. Not that I'm telling @mastershakeme what to write
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Uh.....wouldn't matter to me.
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I was getting worried about this posting it was getting late.I thought perhaps did this time you pressed "delete" instead of the 'Publish" button
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The "Gay House" could have only come from adults the parents of 'The arseholes" otherwise how the hell do they know where a new kid on his first day live? I was sort of surprised by the Churchie comments.When I was in public school I heard all the inappropriate slurs their really wasn't all that much hate confrontations but we were all casual about using those words in jokes etc. and it ws wrong of course.But Churchie or anything like that was something that would never occur to anybody back then.Not because we were enlighten(We were not) but because it wasn't a big deal to anybody.Our student body has a lot of Latinos and Filipinos a high percentage Catholic group so perhaps thats why.Could it be a more Europe or Australia thing @Mark Ponyboy Peters? Or did all the religious scandals over the years cause that? There was one minor exception but these 3 students were extreme.They constantly preached and it seemed try to recruit people almost like a cult would.I don't think they could even say "pass the salt please" with invoking the name of God.Remember the police show The Mod Squad? It was a white male ,a black male and a woman as the squad.Well this was the make up of these three people so whenever people would see them coming someone would say "Oh look here comes The GOD squad" Get it?🙄
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Chapter Eight: The Kitchen Table
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Eight: The Kitchen Table
The what do you want question Caleb asked Billy and Billy saying I want you to know who you are? I'm thinking Billy and Caleb were intimate and Caleb doesn't remember. -
Hey @Summerabbacat interesting on @Mark Ponyboy Peters story we were talking about Taco Bell. (eerie music)
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Well Owen thinking of being a teacher and if he marries Ryder he could use the name Novak so.... COMING THIS FALL ON THE CW,,,A remake of Mr Novak
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Colin Novak. Novak. Ryder’s last name was Novak. And it only took 24 chapters to find out
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I suspect Lothar in a rage will do something ill advised
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You should have hadinstead
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Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
Well then Tyler's dad would have had to help he's the only one in town that looks like he could afford a butler -
Oh trust me she'll find lots of reason to spank you
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When @kbois messes up she blames it on her editors or beta readers so since you don't have editors for this you "accidentally" pressed the publish buttonGreat chapter regardless
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Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
I like your spec. This chapter cleared the EVIL Diana Holloway IMO because I don't think she's smart enough to have Chloe guessing. (they can still get Diana for abuse though) Elena IS smart enough but I hope it isn;t her
