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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 2

    Make that your story page pic I bet readership would increase
  2. but the three of us, we’ve always been so misaligned. Don’t laugh at me. I looked up the word. I know it fits us. He didn't look it up he found @Laura S. Fox story on GA
  3. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    I'm late to the Party here you have so many stories going it's hard to tell which one is a new one but I'll catch up. Knowing you I would not be surprised if you did go to the past with this car. • Conservative (Rebuild, Refresh): $45,000 Radical (LS Swap, Full Restoration): $75,000+ He let out a long, slow whistle. It was the biggest number he’d ever contemplated. It was a down payment on a house. It may NOT be a down payment on a house in California
  4. weinerdog

    Chapter 37

    ‘Joe! Glad you could make it,’ the inspector said with a smile. ‘Where else would I rather be? That comment made me chuckle😄 ‘But the float will be moving, so how do we allow for that? Unless, of course, Cooper is on the float . . .’ ‘Which can’t happen,’ Joe Benevetti interjected, ‘as he is the bait and needs to be accessible.’ Jim Harris and Joe Benevetti would have our backs, which in itself made me nervous, but this was something that the inspector insisted upon, for reasons I wasn’t entirely sure of. Benevetti comment here was legitimate and the inspector must trust him to assign him having Rick's back so I'm thinking even if he doesn't like Rick he will be a professional. ‘Just look at him,’ Adam urged. ‘He’s into this whole scene just as much as Nick is.’ ‘Yeah, but he’s only thirteen, for fuck’s sake. How many times did you change your mind about things between when you were thirteen, and eighteen or twenty?’ Oh I think even a straight 13 year old boy would be into this the idea go being almost naked in public and it's OK would peak their interest, Although a few might feel thinned to make sarcastic gay comments I don't think Brad is like that
  5. weinerdog

    Chapter 32 S3

    I think your right about that. One possibility is the Police may not have released it publicly but that doesn't mean there would be no scuttlebutt among the staff at campus
  6. weinerdog

    Chapter 32 S3

    Wow you new chapter is in sync with Martin Luther King day and the NCAA championship game.Has that ever happened before with any of your chapters? You could have edited the chapter to mention the actual teams in the game 😄
  7. What clean up? If one of their properties blows up they just get a new one
  8. I won't lie when I was 16 I would have probably envied Hunter for all the action he's getting.But if he's really isn't using a condom and he's supposedly a good student he must have been asleep in the US schools about having multiple partners without a condom or his US school was just lame.
  9. DE stands for defensive end there is also a position on offense called TE Tight end and I'm pretty sure you can think of the double entendre's in that
  10. I'm glad to see Leon say if Asha had any trouble with gays he would drop her.But it seems like she's cool Cut this one a little shorter, kinda stuck on where to go right now. That's where musician have an advantage over author's if they get stuck they can just do a cover of an oldie
  11. weinerdog

    Chapter 36

    The security cams didn't show anything .They said they would check too see if other possible cams caught something.Could another cam show that Corcoran did the murder? Wouldn't it be something if it turns out Benevetti stops Corcoran from killing Rick. Or perhaps even the other way around
  12. Hah!!! Name One of us.....OH except @chris191070 of course
  13. weinerdog

    Apostasy

    Another thing I could see happening is Gabriel and Lonnie having a confrontation due to a misunderstanding or even Lonnie assistance in something
  14. weinerdog

    Apostasy

    Oh I'm sure readers will like this. So it's safe to sat Gabriel will interact with the band......He may want to kill Sean while doing so
  15. Did Brad perhaps hire a P.I. .Which would then be a whole other issue
  16. weinerdog

    Chapter 1

    Good story Thank you
  17. I really think Hunter does love Yeison but not on a BF level. I think it's a no brainer that he should break it off .Is there a good way to do without Yeison being hurt? Damn I sure don't see it. But Hunter should really take to heart what Rory said and not do that to Yeison. Because Hunter WILL cheat if this continues. Cheese in hot chocolate? You know that doesn't sound so bad. Maybe one day they would turn my life into a telenovela. Why not @LittleBuddhaTW has already turned it into a GA story
  18. weinerdog

    Chapter 36

    Well if Kyle remains in custody then there is no concern about what could happen Ethan will probably continue to lay low.Everything will be nice and orderly and no drama. Something your stories NEVER are.(But that's good)
  19. weinerdog

    Chapter 36

    My angry reaction isn't at you it's at the situation that Kyle may(will) be out on bond. My first thought when I heard the police have Kyle was just that and then of course Shaun and Kyle crossing paths.But I guess if Kyle had stayed in custody it wouldn't be a @mastershakeme story would it? Monica rounded on Jesse again, voice sharp and bitter. “So this is what happens when you shirk responsibility—” Winner winner chicken dinner ...Winner of the most hypocritical comment of the year
  20. weinerdog

    Chapter 32 - End

    You forgot: Found On Road Dead
  21. How did I miss this chapter being posted? I guess it's because you missed your Monday deadline. Thankfully you were able to post it on Monday
  22. Oh shoot what did Oliver come down with? I bet his mom will blame it on Cody You both will shower separately, will have lockers on opposite sides of the locker room, and if we travel, you two will be in separate hotel rooms. Am I clear?” The separate hotel rooms I get but the lockers and showers stupid ,stupid ,stupid.What does the coach think? That they won't be able to control themselves and have sex then and there? If I were on the basketball team and Oliver and Cody are showering separately I would have to ask myself who do I want to sneak peeks at Oliver or Cody Logan and Kyle were chewing on popcorn watching the scene unfold. Why not it's way more entertaining than anything they can watch on TV
  23. weinerdog

    Chapter 32 - End

    I seen a bunch of lobbying for a sequel on this.As far as I can tell @Krista has never done a sequel before and I respect that. But If this one becomes an exception I'll be more than fine with it
  24. weinerdog

    Chapter 11

    I was going to ask if the Christopher Eccleston encounter was based on something that happened in real life. He really does sound like a great guy. I'm Glad you're doing a Finn story.I'm guessing Garrett and Kyle are making an appearance in it. And why is it thirty degrees in here? Are they trying to melt the spandex?" being a typical arrogant Yank I was momentarily confused then I thought oh he must mean Celsius.Was I wrong to assume the story was set in the US? It hid the collar of his stupid yellow shirt. Does Garrett ever wear anything besides yellow shirts?
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