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“I never asked you to take care of me,” Brian continued, his voice lower now, more controlled but no less firm. “So stop acting like it’s your job." Since there were people watching I'm glad Tommy didn't say anything but one reply that could have been made was " Then why did you insist I be with you when you first met Jessica?"
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I know the files are important to Flynn but I think it would be a no brainer the files for your cure. But the story stops here if he agrees to that so why is Flynn willing to die for this
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Chapter Two: The Space Between
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Two: The Space Between
Maybe Billy doesn't want to tell the story about seeing Vickie but he could tell the police about the pills the incubator is forcing Caleb to take. -
Chapter Two: The Space Between
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Two: The Space Between
I would tend to agree with that but there's this “They called me,” she said rigidly. “I told them to proceed with the questioning.” Does that make what they did legal? Reyes sure acted like that was the case -
I hope there is a way he can stay in touch with them after VBS they are partially responsible for Owen's growth.Maybe the church has weekend thing for the children Owen can participate in
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Even Levi slowed down long enough to look at me sideways before launching into a story about a dream involving a flying school bus Levi’s theories had evolved from seahorse conspiracies to a unified theory of ocean governance How old do you have to be to write a story on GA? @mastershakeme can you help Levi post a story based on one his theories? I guess Nora would be his editor
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Will Atreus say "It's NOT LIKE THAT"
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I take it Tomas won't be expecting Atreus to fight the way Ashot is showing him. Hey Tomas choke on THIS lance.
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Well I have to say Atreus is not the only one dense as a brick.Include me in that statement Wylan said in vision Casimer is being murdered. I thought it actually happened so what's the deal was this a vision Wylan had that can be changed?
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Well this happened in past times a while back but it did happen. My Mom got her license in Revere Massachusetts and then being in a military family we got transferred and moved to Key West Fl. (Yes that's right @kbois I lived in both places you lived in.......Are you done hyperventailting yet? good) After that we got transferred to San Diego .Well into the 1990's she was still legally using the Mass. Drivers license she only stopped when her night time sight declined after that I drove her everywhere. I'm sure you can't do that these day. but she got away with it for a long time( And look first on page 2 AGAIN thank you @kbois)
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Sad to say depends where it happened and in this case it's a Dead body in water.To answer your question it would not probably go to trail but say there are a lot of hostile texts between the dead person and I .Would not surprise me in the least if I'm a person of interest
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Which gets me thinking.......How were you able to survive all those years
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Caleb stared at the whiteboard. The teacher had written the day's objective in blue dry-erase: *Analyze how an author's choices create suspense.* I think you might regret writing those words @Topher Lydon be prepared for a lot of questions
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The deep, violent slashes formed five distinct, unmistakable letters. C A L E B That right there would be enough for the police not to look elsewhere.So given how this community has rushed to judgement that would probably be enough for the DA to prosecute and for the jury to convict.If Caleb had a good attorney he might be able to get a hung jury but will Caleb get one? Now if Lt. Columbo got assigned the case.....Hey @Topher Lydonis Lt Columbo in the story
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I think the Mother is most likely. @drpaladin said the evidence is circumstansial but is it? I don't think Caleb could do something like that without leaving evidence.If we find out there is evidence then The Mother (I won't say her name) planted it
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Prologue: The Riverbank
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Prologue: The Riverbank
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Well we got some clarification. The Religion that Pop forced on Julie and Levi was extreme on gays issues. While The Catholic church can't be described as gay friendly it does say Gay people should be treated with respect and dignity.The church Levi went to is way far away from that. I hope he speaks to the local Father he met In T'ville about that
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We learned a lot from the conversation with James and Taggert the next day surprisingly to me talked about it a little.If I had been Ash I would have been afraid of bringing up anything worrying that it would be coming on too strong. Brings up a few question that I'm sure will be answered soon. I would find it difficult to believe whatever happened couldn't be because he's gay in a business as big as the Yoder's I'm sure that have quite a few gay people working for them. Now what needs to be revealed is was the Grandfather responsible of what happened or did he die and it was someone else. “Just the fact that Taggert looks at you like you hung the moon.” OH!!! HUNG the moon. I first thought it was shoot the moon
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Posting a day early. I'm home sick from work with a cough that won't quit, and I'm booooored. Get well quick
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Many have concurred with what you wrote in this chapter comments.Let me add another possibility.Margot wanted Owen to have some interaction but "GASP " not a possible serious BF. She might be hoping Ryder never texts or calls back meanwhile Owen find someone else she is hoping
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When Ellie's parents ask where did you learn to talk like?...At Vacation Bible School!
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Beth can read Owen can she also read Margot? If she can then I hope she passes that on to Owen
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The round table will work out perfectly
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It is the sixth message in the comments
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That's Ser Tomas? The one who said “Who knows, maybe I will let him choke on my lance.” .......Does Ser Tomas need more squires?...Just asking
