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Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
Do all those images represent certain characters in the story?(if the third one is Billy good for Caleb) -
Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
So what is Daune (Duane?) going to tell Billy?......To read @Topher Lydon story on GA? -
Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
Your mom has hooks into anything, and a friend that works at the bank. She’s got eyes on you… You need to be careful, okay?" An employee at the bank is watching him ?Holy crap -
Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
I have seen the name Duane but here the name is spelled Daune.Is it the same name spelled different or is this a different name? And how do you say it? -
Chapter Three: The Weight of It
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Three: The Weight of It
I remember a beer company that had the slogan 'It's the water and a lot more" in this town I think the " a lot more part" is more relevant -
As @Summerabbacat pointed out this comment by Eric “On a motorcycle though?” Eric said. “Didn’t really look like the Ohio State type.”, A MOTORCYCLYLE!!!!???? OMG!! He must be on the FBI ten most wanted list. Hey Eric I looked it up there are some students that go to Ohio State that owns motorcycles.Yeesh small town mentalities Eric talked about the fair food industry and how it was basically a traveling economy with its own supply chains. Eric probably did some research on fair food....Seeing how it contributes to the business he's in
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Ryder read Margot but it is interesting that Margot also read Ryder.....Gee Margot how were you able to do that?....Unless you share some of the qualities of Ryder. While Margot already made up her mind about Ryder with the prison thing(We do need the details on that) Ryder has shown he is less judgmental than Margot with this comment “I’m not saying you’re a bad person. I’m saying you’re scared shitless. Needless to say most of the readers here will disagree with the first part of Ryder's statement
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Actually that one was there also along with other ones
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"Why do I feel like your definition of 'rectifying' involves multiple felonies?" In Ashot case he would not be rectifying...he would be ERECTifying
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So in that GIF are you saying Atreus sword turns into pizza?🤔
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I booked a few hours for us today.” 250+ words later and the session is over hmm🤔(yes I sort of counted) It did seem to go well though
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Wow Im impressed you pretty much read this all in one day and you have good insights
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Time to find out what craziness lies ahead.... Craziness in one of your stories?????Now to see how wrong I am
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Would be a top seller at Costco huh? (And how about that first one page 4)
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Before this chapter Caleb mom's was easily the worst person in this story.After this chapter it's a real horserace running neck and neck. I'm going to mention a reader who hasn't read your stories yet. @Summerabbacat I hope he checks out this comment and decides to read this story I DO think he would like it but another reason is his comments on characters he doesn't like are priceless😄 He has a lot to work with here
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And the holiday weekend started..........Do you still know what day it is?
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My thought of Ryder and Jules showing up at the engagement party as a couple is looking better and better
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Oh.....I thought it was c u next Thursday😄
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You beat me to it I was about to say something similar. I agree with everything said about Margot. But Ryder while he has a valid point to me is doing the same thing Margot is only to a lesser degree.Owen plans to go Ohio State a good thing even under these odd circumstances.So if Owen comes clean on Ryder's time table well you have to consider the possible consequences, They don't send him to Ohio State and maybe even boot him out of the house worst case scenario sure but not out of the question. Owen could lose everything and if he does would Ryder be there to help pick up the pieces? Has he even considered that?
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Scrap invented the saying Roll in the Hay?You heard him say it?🤔
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Did Casimir and Atreus invent the expression Roll in the Hay?
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The ultimate seal of approval from @Summerabbacat when he posts an ABBA video eh @Mark Ponyboy Peters
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“I never asked you to take care of me,” Brian continued, his voice lower now, more controlled but no less firm. “So stop acting like it’s your job." Since there were people watching I'm glad Tommy didn't say anything but one reply that could have been made was " Then why did you insist I be with you when you first met Jessica?"
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I know the files are important to Flynn but I think it would be a no brainer the files for your cure. But the story stops here if he agrees to that so why is Flynn willing to die for this
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Chapter Two: The Space Between
weinerdog commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Two: The Space Between
Maybe Billy doesn't want to tell the story about seeing Vickie but he could tell the police about the pills the incubator is forcing Caleb to take.
