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It sounds like the Grandfather's will out live Appias.So with that in mind how who would get the properties when the Grandfather's die?You would think Celia would get her Grandfather's estate but I don't know if the law at the time allowed females to inherit that .I'm guessing on that part.So that leaves Appias Grandfather estate Duccius will already have his father's place would he get that too?How would they sort this all out?
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His father will already be annoyed because Lucinius had a better yield than him that's why Duccius bought so much.Something about rain eh?Somebody should tell that twit that it didn't rain more at Lucinius place then it did at his.
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That is such a loaded statement that could go so many ways just read the newspaper everyday.I definitely include myself in that statement.
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In a lot of ways Lucinius is more mature than Duccius who thinks he must obey his father.In that sense Lucinius is more free he's absolutely right when he says to Duccius 'How old are you?". I guess the only risk Duccius would have is he would not inherit his father's place but so what It's probably better to live at Lucinius place.I hope his mother outlives his father that way she can come live with Lucinius
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Chapter 7 - Victory Royale!
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Victory Royale!
WOW!!! Hey I get it I didn't care for Torry either but look at it everyone involved was a little guilty of something even Dexter if anybody says no along the way none of this happens. I am not suggesting this for a second but the only way everybody could be happy is if all five agreed to a FWB thing among themselves. But I don't know how that would work Kevin gets to fool around with Sarah and Dexter and Sarah fools around with James and Kevin while Torry and James and .....aggh it would be a mess. I do think Torry should pay some price but a smaller one after all he's still a kid and a sad lonely one at that -
Chapter 7 - Victory Royale!
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 7 - Victory Royale!
Very well done.I saw a little bit of what was going to happen but some I didn't.As for any suggestions I'm totally confident you'll come up with something good but if I were to suggest something it would to make sure Dexter ends up being happy. BTW Kevin's dad is as subtle as a time bomb LOL -
The boys showed how fiercely loyal they are to Lucinius they started acting like slaves because they didn't want to be the cause of a riff between Lucinius and his father.I assume some of the boys when they become men will have skills that they can use in the city should they decide to leave but for the right reasons.
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And you're more modest then them also😄
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At least Lucinius father is smart enough to make peace before it's too late.But I guess we should wait to see if Addias says the right things.I'm betting when Duccius inherits his father's property he will treat the slaves like Lucinius does. I think if Lucinius or Aumen get married and the wives want to treat the kids as slaves that would be a dealbreaker
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I kept having a picture in my head that on one of Lucinius visits to his Mother that one time Appias would there very drunk and there would be a soap opera style confrontation.However The conversation Lucinius had with his Mother give me hope it won't come to that.. So Senate seats are inherited?What if the Heir is not qualified?You think they would change the rules after Appias got in.
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Learning some things about how they preserved the meat.Dis they do that in the U.S.during the old west or colonial days? Duccius is learning a lot of things but he had to be a good guy to begin with if the boys asked him to go hunting with them.
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Chapter 6 - My Girlfriend
weinerdog commented on Arch Hunter's story chapter in Chapter 6 - My Girlfriend
All I'll say for Torry is at least he kept asking Kevin if he was okay that was something.Dexter showed a lot of depth in this chapter. I made a similar guess in a previous chapter I emphasize the word guess.I still don't believe Torry has magical powers but I said before maybe Torry and James were working together.Well I will now revise it to say maybe Torry and Sarah are working together.Why would Sarah do this?Sarah either thinks or knows Kevin is gay is this could be a scheme to get him to see that. If I'm wrong well what else is new LOL.After I posted this I noticed @Wollter had a similar thought but if that's the case it would be Dexter getting Kevin. -
If he didn't already know it Duccius can see how much wiser Lucinius is then Appias When you see how everybody was concerned about Dante you can see the people working for Lucinius are more like family then co-workers
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Duccius knew what he was doing when he invited Lucinius and co. for wine it's like he knew he got his father's goat. I guess it's natural for somebody to want to try to be on their own but I think Dante is going to realize he made a mistake.
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Duccius didn't seem to be aware of how their Father treated Lucinius.It might be interesting to see how Duccius feels about his father now.
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In the Arms of the Enemy
weinerdog commented on Littlelovestories's story chapter in In the Arms of the Enemy
What a cliffhanger.I knew Zeke has a dangerous job but wow so many men after him I would like to hear more details about Zeke's work. I wonder if Tyler running into the house is due to him maybe being suicidal .This could work out because it's such a crazy move the bad guys aren't expecting it. -
It is worrisome that Heinrich is in a good mood.I suspect his judgment with Rita is clouded because he envisions Rick being there with her when the project gets finished.If it wasn't for senior desire to hook Rita and Rick up he may be able to judge Rita's project with a more skeptical eye. I don't remember Rick saying anything to Jared about keeping the trip to the music festival a secret so I'm worried Jerry might have a conversation with Jared about his time with Marta.Jared could unintentionally spill the beans and Jerry will know Rick was lying about what they were doing Saturday.Then that could lead to Jerry wondering about things.Maybe Rick should come clean to Jerry I think Jerry would be supportive
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Aenais explained it perfectly.The boys and men now know how fortunate they are.Does the concept of adoption exist at this time in history?If so Lucinius might consider adopting Aenais
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I'm thinking the boy Apollo sent might have the same kind of intelligence that Lucinius has and that's why he the boy was sent to him.Can't wait for Duccius to visit .Will Lucinius have a room for him now?
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Kevin is certainly into Sarah but he seems to have some feelings for Dexter.Maybe you can argue Kevin is going after Sarah because he wants to be straight he just hasn't said that to himself yet.Maybe he will finally get with Sarah and realize he likes doing it with Dexter more.No more speculating it's not my story it's Arch's LOL Whatever Torry has planned I hope he doesn't resort to blackmail now that Dexter and Kevin done the deed.Remember Kevin never looked in Torry's direction so Torry may have recorded them with his phone
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So Appias would object to workers at the Villa to sit at the dinner table.Does Lucinius have the right to tell his father I don't care what you think they are eating at the table?I'm guessing the custom of the time prevents Lucinius from doing that.I'm also curious to find out what Duccius letter contains.
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I'll add mine so now it's 6 .I think we may have started something here😄
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Oh man if Appias tries that he will be a pariah .I think the others in the Senate would try to impeach him if they have that procedure back then.If the scrolls record Appias reaction to things then you'll find out cuss words in that language
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Okay for what it's worth here is another one of my weird guesses as to what's going to happen.I think Duccius has been trying to stay in touch with Lucinius but Appias has been intercepting the letters and not letting Lucinius know about them.If I'm wrong what else is new? If I happen to be right I don't mean this to be a spoiler
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I wonder if Appias knew about the foundation.I bet he didn't not that it matters.But it may show that Appias also underestimates what Lucinius is capable of.
