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A good story to pass the time like you said to pass the time until the next long one.One thing I suspect Roger was incorrect about is nobody knowing at school.I remember Dawson winking at Josh when he first met Roger I think he might have known.
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Anybody's guess is as good as mine @mrbossmant had some good theories last chapter so I'm interested to see what he has to say.My guess?I can't even begin to figure out the black cat.The foxes could be Ryan and his sisters and maybe someone else in their family?The sister that said "Watch yourself ,gay boy" might be the one that Wayne hit with a baseball bat.Okay so maybe I'm way off but at the very least I think Ryan and his sisters are aware of Owen's situation. Really cool of the band mates to be supportive.By the dialog it sounds like this story is set in the UK.I've heard they are more accepting of gays than us dumb ass Americans are.Hey Alex next time let Owen look lol.
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I know there were hints Roger is gay but as far as I can tell it had not been confirmed. Josh is acting like he knows Roger is gay.I looked over the chapter again did I miss a line?Dawson said he knew all his friends since kindergarten that is probably the reason why the guys are cool with Roger .
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As always love your characters this looks pretty good.I gotta say Dawson might be a little sheltered I as an American kid knew what rugby was and that was before the internet.Is the U.S. still that *ss backward when's compared to Europe when it comes to gay marriage?Oh one more thing they don't know what a hot dog is in England?Geez what kind of a place is that?LOL
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I remember reading a movie review by the famous movie critic Roger Ebert what he said about the movie he was reviewing it was comedy with a heart.Part of that statement describes this author perfectly because all his stories have a big heart.There might be a better choice of words to describe what I just wrote but that sums it up for me.Want to know what heavens is like ?Think of a world where there are only people who are like this author's main characters.
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That ending was incredible.Christian religions (and probably others also) believe that when it's your time you have to give an accounting of your life.Well Jeff definitely has nothing to worry about in that regard.Give Claire a kiss for us Jeff.
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My bad I forgot about the grandfather but I was thinking of living relatives like aunt or uncles.
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One thing I always wondered about didn't anybody on Toby's bio-mom or bio-dad side of the family give a damn about him?Maybe the parents were such nasty people their families wanted nothing to do with them.
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Barron Trump????Funny when I was looking over this story page I don't remember horror being one of the story tags
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While it was the the right move that they another way to fund Ron's tuition it really showed how Toby feels about Ron.Also how Jeff's influence rubbed off on him
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YOU! needing a book of dirty words????LOL
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The way you described that intimate scene between Jaime and Hunter ,Hunter said they were both almost in a coma hell I was almost in a coma after reading it. Way to go Mrs. Vega.What an awesome person to have on your side.So Maria and Margaret part two next chapter.Take cover Mrs. Landry you don't stand a chance
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Wow you sure put a lot of good stuff in this one. Tonight I'm having something Italian with sauce. As much as I would like to comment on the vacation the most memorable part of the chapter was Toby's comment about if Jeff had come a few minutes later and Jeff saying he was there for a reason
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I learned a few things in this chapter.I didn't know there was a Leonardo Da Vinci airport all airports should be named after brilliant people like him not politicians.In San Diego we have Lindbergh field named after Charles Lindburgh so that one was OK.Also I knew nothing about setting internal clocks having never traveled abroad.I've heard about lunch being a bigger meal there and dinner being smaller for me a big lunch would make me less productive the rest of the day.I love that Jeff introduced the guys as his nephews.
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Hmm we did find out Ryan was sick after Wayne hit the fox don't know if you were being facetious but I won't rule it out
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So happy there is some encouraging news.Best wishes.God bless
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Owen and Alex are starting to be a good looking couple.And Wayne is a damn good big brother.I don't believe in supernatural but maybe for this story that is the case.I had been thinking all these events were manipulated by a human .But how does one get a Puma with red guys yet to climb into their tree and how does Owen's window open from the outside?I don't have a theory for that so maybe something unnatural could be happening.
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I never heard the word auditing being used in this context.So accounting and law courses?Maybe Toby and Ron will be a gay version of Jeff and Clair.Now on to Italy needless to say Toby and Ron will hit up the pizza
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I live in San Diego I could call Rick pay for his travel from Wisconsin and I would still come out ahead.
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I know Jerry is a good friend and means well but he may be a little thick here.All these constant comments about Rick being alone I mean doesn't he know that can be a sensitive subject not just with Rick but with anybody.Has it occurred to Jerry that Rick might bat for the other team? Does Rick have a piano by any chance?That's one why he can meet a certain somebody .I had a piano teacher who also teached guitar maybe he could go that route just some thoughts. Are we going to see Marta again?I'm thinking apprentice and then Rick can leave the business to her. I know I'm a bit of an optimist.I'm not sure which lady is more odd Rita or Magda
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Great Chapter now Ron is calling him Uncle Jeff cool.I liked the line 'Don't think of the cost, your dad will be paying."
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I'm not sure what you thought I was thinking.He did mention his kids so I did think of that
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Good for Toby for the decision he made about not selling himself.While we all know the obvious reasons not to do that if some kid who's put in the same position Toby was does do that I don't judge them harshly there for the grace of God.I'm assuming there's a reason you have Jeff meeting Richard Ellsworth that should be interesting.BTW useless fact here there was former MLB pitcher with that name
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It must be a somewhat small school the office staff knew who Toby was if it was a regular size school that may not be the case.Of course when I was in HS the office staff knew me very well for reasons I won't get into here lol
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Couldn't find one will this do?
