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No kidding Australia I have family in Adelaide and Mt.Gambier(Im a yank BTW they think I talk funny) I could be mixing up your story with others I've been reading but I thought I saw the use of the word Mate and Mum a few times and a few other subtle ones that's what I remember at least.I have to look back something made me think this wasn't in the US
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I guess we need to keep reading to find out.But the person who's messing with the boat has he been mentioned yet?
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What happened to Scott I've seen that all too often😥
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Were or are you a fisherman?You are very detailed here.
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I'ts starting to get costly but if it keeps the crew around its a good investment.
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Jennifer's made up reasoning about pedo's had more holes in it than 50 pounds of sliced Swiss cheese.Alex said they'll figure something out but I'm afraid Jennifer will make Alex do something desperate.I'm guessing by the dialect this story is somewhere in the UK I may be wrong I don't know if anything was mentioned. I only bring it up because what are the emancipation laws there?Its possible Alex could go that route with his successful modeling job. I had the same thoughts Harry had with a similar conversation I had.KILL ME NOW!!!
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The Peter Charles that's cool. And Uncles parrot is better than Lou.
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I think I asked that.I believe it was hi-me
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Jack did say"celebrate" after all
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The way I see all these guys are horndogs (Is that one word or two?)I don't think Jack at this point should be exclusive with Jeff maybe a year or so down the road.Enjoy each other be FWB with the group I see Jimmy being into it.I know if that opportunity presented itself when I was in HS I would have jumped on that as long as everybody was cool with it. I see a school hallway conversation perhaps confrontation with Jack ,Jimmy,Tyler,Brian.I suspect Jimmy will surprise us. Jimmy didn't know Tracy was an actual ballet dancer?He thought he just danced around in his room?Jimmy is not the sharpest knife in the drawer is he?
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I like after Blu and Sage had their heart to heart and they went back to join the others Sage yells "Just don't hit me no more.I promise to behave" lol. nice calm chapter well as calm as these guys can get at least.
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There were crabs in your previous story also.I take it you like seafood lol.Maybe I forgot but didn't Nicky have a friend that was supposed to work with them?Jamie I think?
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Im so glad Kevin will be there for the boys but he really should have spoken with Glen first
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Am I reading too much into this.Kevin thought Bess just left when in reality she left at 4:30 is that just Kevin losing track of time?If not then what is Bess doing?Hope Nicky's party turns out OK
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Come on now you almost made me cry.Good chapter
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Good story.Its realistic that Cedric didn't go on to be gay and its cool that they are still friends.Who knows if a break up happens and they had a few beers always a possible option.Google Chicago snowpocalypse and check out the images it was bad.
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Very nice chapter.The one comment I keep thinking of is Randy saying "Hehehe, oh yeah. I remember."I have a feeling that going to come up again.I'm going to scan the previous chapters to see if there was another clue I missed.
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Good chapter.Glen is right about waiting its a big step.I wonder what his fear is.
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The Grandmother and the kids were mentioned in chapter 2 as you probably saw.I suspect maybe the sentence about being a guardian was cut off unintentionally.
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I Just found I just found the chapter it was in and I did read it before I guess I just forgot. I'm too young to be having memory problems. Maybe I'm reading too many stories at the same time lol
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Nicky is quick study.I know I wouldn't have caught on that fast.Did I misunderstand something.The two boys with grandmother would be part of Kevin's family I think but he had to be introduced to them wouldn't he already know them?
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Nicky works fast already wanting to have a party.Luckily Kevin can relate.
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I got confused for a minute when another guy named Lou was mentioned no more Lou's in the story OK?Good chapter.Guess what?Because of this chapter I'm going to be making a pastrami sandwich
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Cat and Mouse game is right."Who says I'll be staying here tonight".Hope dinner with dad goes well.
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Thank you for a very good story the thing you do best is create characters the reader cares for.Perfect way to end it with Lucas saying "Michael".Now on to read The Scuffy
