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Just catching up to this story love what I'm reading so far.I don't if this was mentioned in the story I might have missed it and nobody mentioned this in the comments but his name is Cam. and he's a photographer?Really?Kidding.Was that intentional?

Loved the chapter.Forgive me for being cynical but since the story is not ending here I'm wondering what complication can happen.I guess that can be Kyle graduating and you said State is 2-3 hours away.If it's me I would be willing to wait and only see each other on weekends and spring and winter break and I bet Kyle would also.Jake and Danny still have a bond and Danny showed some signs of maturing in this chapter.Can spending a year with a changed more mature Danny complicate things. Jake saying to Mr. McHenry "Kyle wants to tell you something" Well it worked but I think it was inappropriate for Jake to do.It could really blown things up.I do know his heart was in the right place. Initially you didn't say Kyle's drawing was a nude drawing so Mr.McHenry's comment“Impressive, Finnegan,” he said. “I wouldn’t have guessed.” Cracked me up

Good chapter. Jimmy and Richie took the first step.Baby steps but still steps. Jimmy has determined that Nick is straight but it sure seemed like Nick liked sleeping three to a bed. Back where Jimmy's parents live I don't know how big or small of an community it is but there may be gossip on why Richie got hurt.If Jimmy's dad hears about that and then finds out that Chris lives with Jimmy then maybe Jimmy is outed.

I always suspected the really smart students with the high GPA wasn't distracted with BF/GF issues.And they weren't all nerds some of them were athletes and cute.One trait they all seemed to share was they were all quiet Jimmy seemed to fit that somewhat.Speaking for myself noticing someone hot was always a big distraction for me when it came to school work.I remember thinking at the time these smart guys must never think of these things I'm thinking otherwise their GPA wouldn't be as good. Every chapter keeps getting better and better

Just discovered this story and now I'm all caught up I like what I'm reading. I see in the chapter That James was introduced as Jaime .I live right next to the border in San Diego I grew up and a had a number of friends or co-workers named Jaime none of them ever went by James although one of them did go by Jamie.Did you come across this?

I would agree with that usually but in this case Kyle is going to be at nearby Penn State if they wanted to continue it would be more doable.There will still be a lot of time Jake and Danny will have without Kyle being there so a lot could happen. BTW if a messy room is a sigh of genius then I should have been Stephen Hawking and Albert Einstein roiled into one.

Is that why Kyle and Billy can easily talk to each other?If I recall conversing wasn't one of Billy's strengths. No biggie here and I know its coming close to the end but is it possible Aiden can make a cameo I liked that character

I agree something might be off bout Kyle. The way he was described writing poetry, excellent musician ,good student etc. then to find out he has a messy room was unexpected. Danny seems cool with things now but I suspect there will be future issues. @Wesley8890 alluded to this a little last chapter there are some parallel's from WAR.In WAR Billy and Dustin were friends then Brett got in the picture and Dustin hated Brett, here Jake and Danny were best buds and now Kyle in the picture and Danny if not hates certainly dislikes Kyle.There are differences's of course but the similarities are interesting. How about having Mr.Reilly ask Kyle to help Danny for next year. some good stuff can come from that. Kevin,Keith and Kenny.I'm a Kenny and a lot of times growing up I've been called both Kevin and Keith by people In a few cases they never stopped.Makes me think a number of families did that exact same thing with naming their sons.

I think I might have misunderstood it. I thought a lowercase xd meant extreme excitement or happiness.So my interpretation of the message was when is the next chapter I'm excited about it.If I'm wrong Im sure somebody here will let me know how stupid I am.

Are we going to continue to see an expanded role for Brent?We found out a lot about him. Are we going to see more of Gage also?Loved Brent's orange combover comment.I guess you can get away with that comment with these readers here.Lol. You would be surprised how many arguments I've started just by saying anything mild about the orange combover Sage rocks🙂

If that happens I hope it's because Danny says to himself 'I can't keep living this way".You know the saying. when someone marries a person that is similar to their mother people will say 'You married your Mom" or "I married my Mom".If Jake and Danny marry then people could say to Jake "You married your Dad"

When Jake said "We never did get back together"Is that a permanent statement?Is Jake narrating the story from that moment in time or is Jake telling the story from say a year or so in the future? Ryan/Jake jock/band geek comparison I don't think is valid because Ryan doesn't have those stereotypical Jock qualities. @jkwsquirrel had Mr.Reilly be dyslexic and if I remember right Billy had Aspergers so with that in mind Could Danny have some condition that makes him act the way he does. Since @jkwsquirrel likes to throw curves here's a scenario.Jake is willing to be with Kyle doing things Kyle's way like not bringing his phone(whoa).So if Jake and Kyle get close then maybe Jake gets Kyle to go to a party by saying something like "I've done your things you like to do now try something I like to do".It would take maybe only 1-2 beers for Kyle to get drunk so under those conditions maybe Kyle and Danny?😲 If you want to be optimistic you have it where Danny tells Jake "I couldn't do it because I knew it would hurt you". Hey I"m not writing this just my random goofy thoughts. BTW why was this chapter called Ft. McHenry? Did I miss something?

How many does it have to be before you call it a orgy ?

You're the author so you know what's going to happen on second thought maybe you don't lol.But that's neither here nor there. Ryan did calm down very quick considering.I think of something he said to Jake "I’ve screwed up too. Not like you did, but in my own way".Makes me wonder did something almost happen with his roommate?Maybe they were about to then the coach knocked on the door or something.That would explain why Ryan is being so generous with this.Ryan is a sweetheart this could be just how he is but we should consider the other possiblity

I'm very easy to confuse but this does help thank you🙂

I tried to do what you did in your quote but could not figure it out In some ways I'm still computer illiterate.So what I did was go the regular comment box and then dragged your quote over including the word Quote then I used a different text type to distinguish the quote from my comment.I guess it worked in my usual dumb-ass way

Quote Took a little longer than I'd planned, but there we go! Not sure how many more chapters I've got left. Got a few storylines I'd like to get to, but I think we'll be approaching the end in a few more chapters. Don't know if Ryan will ever be anything more than a friend to Jake after what happened, but I'm glad they made peace. I wasn't willing to write Ryan off in such a sad way, so there we go! And that Danny! On to girlfriend number 4! Take as Many chapters as you need to make it right .Danny and girlfriend #4 I thinks that makes it easier for Jake to wait for Ryan to forgive him but will he?These guys are impossible to figure out "We're like soulmates" blah, blah,blah. somebody get me a shovel

Hey I got size 13 (really) whatever isn't damaged after you get done I'll finish off

Remixed?I guess that means this was posted before.I think I read this before but I read so many stories I can't be 100% sure.If its the same story I'm thinking about the subtle changes are excellent.The thoughts a gay 14yo keeping that secret was very accurate here but that's not surprising knowing this author.The only thing he could have added was riding his bike or walking home a mile out of his normal route home so he can pass by Steven's house.I'm curious how different what happens next is.

S Same where I live.I have temporary masks.Do you know who sells cloth ones?I don't mean online but In a store?

A new book is out 'How to say the wrong things at the wrong time" by Jack Woolery & Jimmy Taylor yeesh ! The sad thing was it looked like Jimmy was ready to be cool with Jeff and everything. I said something like this last chapter but Jack's mom said she doesn't trust Tracy and Jeff but trusts the guy who almost had him killed? 😡 I will say it's only been a week since she knew everything so it is still early.If Jack's mom doesn't change she loses her family even Karen base on what she said to Jack

Gay Fiction rule #2-There has to be at least 2 persons of authority i.e.School Board members ,Law enforcement officers that are corrupt morons

I binged read the series over the last 1-2 weeks or so including this story so I could have easily missed this I went over this story again and wonder has it been explained how Jonathan happened?If Blu has never been with a women? Please be OK Levi.

I was thinking of another chapter actually my bad.

Me and you both.I have have been binge reading the series the series the last two weeks.You're right about a Paternity test of course It will be a positive result for the purposes of this story.Like you I'm looking forward to more.