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How about "This is an awesomely dysfunctional story"?

Mr Reilly is awesome.He can tick you off but he really made things right at that practice.It is interesting that he said "No amount Of yelling by me will make this work" but that's what he did the night before.Complicated guy but cool. No matter what Jake does somebody is going to be hurt that sucks.One thing I failed to mention last chapter is why did Danny have that stuff in his suitcase?Is there someone else at camp that Danny knows about?Or did he in the back of his mind hope something was going to happen with Jake since they were in the same room? Great chapter

I now know @droughtquake was joking (thank God) But You're WB still has something in common with @jkwsquirrel WB both of them are dreaded

So it was YOU who wrote those Dick and Jane books

I appreciate your point but did it have to happen in a way that Ryan gets hurt?

That was right after John took off with Yoko.

Hey 3 kids with 3 different women why pretend? IMO it was a tame comment.

I suspected it was going there.The only difference is I thought Danny was going to be the instigator.Poor Ryan although he's been pretty perceptive I bet in the back of his mind he thought this could happen. All of these guys seem to need some form of anger management counseling.Including Mr. Reilly

I was fine with the series.DQ wanted an epilogue at the end of the W.A.R series.I was just pointing out how this story has been telling us how everybody's life has going since that time.

This review is aimed toward readers like me who only recently joined GA and spent a lot time looking for worthwhile stories to read from GA"s massive selections. Some might come across this and see that has 67 chapters and say to themselves "oh man that's too much to read I can't invest that much time to this" to that I say I could have read 67 more chapters of this it was that good. This story might have the most evil character in all the stories in GA and I realize what I'm saying.But it is more than counteracted by many awesome characters two of which might be the most sweetest characters GA has had.Please read this story you won't regret it.

Wow a lot of what you wrote would make good material in a GA story but this is real life.There was a couple times in my life that I was close to homeless but literally both times something came up at the 11th hour 59th minute that spared me that.I even put all my belongings in storage in anticipation of being homeless.As a result present day I have two friends living in spare bedrooms with me and one of them can be a pain in the butt.But as long as there's no drug or alcohol problem I put with it because I can't in good conscious put someone out on the street You're a very inspiring example of someone who doesn't give up and people who have a condescending view of the homeless should know stories like yours.If you haven't already read author WolfM story ' Alone in the night" If I tell you what it's about it wold ruin the story but it is very relevant to this

I think all the newer parks do a variation of that.They do it at Petco Park in San Diego. They like to catch people at random

I think all the newer parks do a variation of that.They do it at Petco Park in San Diego. They like to catch people at random

Jake and Ryan are in a good place now.OMG what's going to happen?Something always happens it just can't stay good right? What's up with Jake's Dad? 3 kids with 3 women?Does he think he's in the NBA?He was pretty awesome this chapter. I think you missed an opportunity.You could have had the PNC scoreboard cam catch Jake and Ryan holding hands. Overall that chapter was Yeet or ...Lit? Last time I promise.

I used that old saying about a blind squirrel referring to myself then right after typed it I remembered the author's handle and thought I should clarify.It really was unintentional lol

If such a thing was possible Ryan(No I'm not going to call him that name lol)might have more issues then Danny yeah I see stuff hitting the fan here.Danny seems cool about Jake and Ryan being together but I get the felling that won't last. Danny reacted to the mention of Billy Roberts like he was a life long hero of his.He had to have some kind of internal struggle with his feelings for awhile since he's the one who has wanted to start the GSA all along and apparently knows the history with Billy. I sort of in a way called it in a earlier comment that Sarah might be an ally here.I guess it's true even a blind squirrel finds a nut lol. oops I just realized what I just typed.That comment was no reflection on Jeff

Well logically that phone conversation should clear the air.Danny made some sense.But these are teenagers and they are not logical I know I wasn't (still not for the record lol).Another incident will happen with these two other wise there is no more story right?Most likely it will happen after Lydia leaves and this time Ryan may be part of this.OMG Danny wouldn't do something with Ryan would he? Jake hasn't told his mom that he's gay but he doesn't seem to realize he's sending his mom a billion clues. Question what is the PTO?Is that what used to be called the PTA?

It's better than being The Wanderer

I could believe Danny's position on this except for one thing.He kissed him you can do the other stuff and say it is not love but when you kiss somebody and he initiated it then it is love.Danny cannot bring himself to admit that yet IMO. Interesting how Mr. Reilly acts according to the individual person.On one hand he tells Jake he's proud of him but according to Danny's mom he said he thought Danny improved the most but he would never tell Danny that.It like he knows some people you encourage and some you kick in the butt. Oh and they just got intimate again does that mean will Danny have a new GF next chapter?

Dad redeemed himself not all the way of course but somewhat. It was cool to see the old gang together as the good friends they are.Although Dustin turned the corner last time we saw him given how his life went he was the one who was In most danger of having a relapse or setback.This scene here looks like things are going well for him. It was funny when Mr. Reilly didn't want Dustin to tell the story.I think in a future private conversation with Jake he should be more candid about who he was I think they would have an even better relationship then they do now.He started to do that a little when he told Jake about Dustin and himself Interesting that Jakes dad knew about emptying the trash files learned that from experience did he? you're doing a great job mixing the past characters with the present

It was still a helluva lot better then with the dad

I had forgotten about that.I also thought about Tyler after the accident he had Jack's head in his lap bleeding on him saying "don't die".He could have been just a concerned scared friend but maybe there's more could it be the entire group of friends were either gay or bi?

No prob. It can be a full time job with me.Just ask my former English and Lit teachers

Jack's Mom had no problem letting Jimmy in but had a problem letting Tracy in.Let's analysis this she had no problem to let the boy who was chasing her son meaning to do some kind of harm had he caught him ,but she has a big problem with dangerous Tracy because he's gay.She has no idea how much of a twit she is. As far as to what happened quite a big leap from "I'm not washing your nuts" to doing what he did.I'm going speculate on what possible explanation Jimmy could say to what he did "I figured I owed you and since we did this when we were 13 I thought what's difference does one more time make?"......Yeah I don't think so.Things are more complicated now. Thanks for the distraction Rony stay safe

First things first ALL RIGHT!! BILLY!!! Dad bringing his preggo GF on Jake's B-day bad move, bad move, and it just got worse from there with dad getting smashed.I said something about Jake's mom in an earlier chapter but by far the dad is the bigger a-hole in this. As far as the sexting tween Jake and Danny Jake should have told Danny no way I'm going there with you.But I got to admit if Danny is hot I most likely would have done the same thing. Brett...er Mr. Reilly really rocks creating a show around The Beatles.It wasn't clear was Jake's solo from the song Penny Lane? I assume you're a lot younger than me but I'm impressed when younger people appreciate The Beatles. Happy Easter