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It amazing how you can design the liner to have so much cool stuff in it.Everybody's pumped.I hope we hear more about Bubba and Pat talking to Nick. I realize I'm asking an obvious question here but this landlubber don't know about these things.I assume they check to see if some storm might be on their route how far in advance can a weather report warn about that?
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The chapter ended on a minor cliffhanger although I'm sure Nick will stay.I thought I asked this in an earlier chapter maybe I didn't but the official rule is the kids can't leave the building?I get it if that's the rule it's probably for the best.Maybe there can can be some kind of system after school and chores are done they can go out for a short time.But there might be something I'm not thinking about.For one thing the evil men may have grabbed a kid.
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When I heard the Governor was coming with people I was thinking it would be great if he brought this president along.You might have seen him with this 13 year old boy who has a stuttering problem he would be perfect to see this. You make a good point that Sanctuary only works because it headed by somebody like Brad.There could be another person every bit as dedicated as Brad but if he or she is not competent it won't work despite good intentions.It would be very hard to duplicate.
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You know that's pretty much how I pictured Maggie.This was an excellent chapter especially considering you totally changed direction from what you originally planned. My only worry for Maggie now is the old sour coot will be angry at the settlement and maybe show up in Barnstable to do harm to Maggie similar to what that Dad did at the pool in one of your other stories.Lets hope not.
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I really liked Sarah this chapter until we found out she made a date with Vince.I don't think she'll say anything to compromise Trent though. Trent has a class called Intro to Conflict?I figured he would be a natural at that.I'm thinking Ethan will accuse Trent of cheating. I too also thought Emma was awesome.It was an enjoyable scene Trent meeting Emma and Cho but I think based on Cho's long look at Trent before they left that Cho might have put 2 and 2 together concerning Trent and Kayden. The best way to describe Kayden would be he's an innocent sweetheart and a perv at the same time
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That's a tremendous gesture Brad wanting to take low-income family kids on cruises.The only possible downside I see is Brad spreading himself out too thin but he has great advisers so I'm sure there will be a good plan going forward.
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Sounds like it's going to be an awesome ship.When Brad said to Tony that it smelled like something died there that broke my heart.
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Nice to have a Heinrich and Rita free chapter.I found the "Takacs tyrants" comment by Gus interesting.Gus has been doing this since he was 11?It sounds like Zoltan and Magda has been exploiting Gus.The back story of Gus makes me wonder if Gus feels a sense of obligation to them.He also doesn't seem have much affection for Helene not even as a friend the fact that Gus cut this line of conversation off with Rick off tells me Gus may be unhappy. Okay after Rick a having a nice time now it's off to the dark cloud named Heinrich. Heinrich last chapter said Rick will regret canceling out on him but I bet no matter what Heinrich does Rick will not regret going on this trip.
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Hmm I wonder what letters @@ represent oh I think I know Ashhole I thought it might have been something dirty LOL
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I'm so glad they got the bad guys but I wouldn't be so sure it's over like Brad said I could see somebody trying to do to Sanctuary what they did to the church.Maybe O'shea knows some good security people. Will Bubba and Corky go on the long trip?
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Would anything change legally if he adopted all the kids?Just curious. I don't know if that would be approved.But it would be an awesome gesture
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If that article was a paid ad I was under the impression it was supposed to state that somewhere since they mistook for a real article that could be something else the newspaper could be liable for.Chartering the boat when they are not using it sounds like a great idea unless there is something I'm not thinking of.
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It was cool how Bubba and Curly kept Pat company.That kid you mentioned from the Senator's house I vaguely recall it .If Brad talks to him it might be interesting.Anybody remember what chapter that is from?
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Now that the Governor has seen the place does he have to the power to do preemptive moves against Child services and the state education board should they try to put their self serving nose in Sanctuary's business?That would be huge.This would be a good story for the show 60minutes.
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The thing about stories like the one in the newspaper is there are many legitimate ones among the bogus ones .Unfortunately a false allegation can take a life of its own theses days like a certain one since November.It's very important that the newspaper gets convicted of slander I don't want to see people lose their jobs over there but some things are more important.
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Thank God that scumbag criminal was stupid.He should have known that this kid was being watched.Wow a hugh boat that's awesome.
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I concur with what @mikedup said.Jeff will have piece of mind knowing Beth is cared for.There will be a lot of ways these kids after they will keep ties to Sanctuary whether it's coming back to help out or if some are really successful give donations etc.Maybe somebody will become a author and write a book about Brad and Sanctuary.Hey I just thought about this as I was typing this you didn't happen to...lol
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I almost don't want to read the next chapter I'm afraid what I'll hear about the boy's in the hospital condition.I know these men are evil but they are also so stupid keeping them in barrels and not finding ways to check on them?One boy died and if they die they are of no use to them didn't they consider that?
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Leave it to me to come up with annoying questions.The majority of these kids because of their situation horrible parents etc. may have never been introduced to the concept of religion.Brad has spoken of believing in a higher being but other than that there has been no formal discussion on it.I don't want Sanctuary to have a formal religion but if the kids are going to be out in the real world they should know something about this.I guess the school will teach about that .I just think somewhere down the line some kids might approach Brad about being taken to Sunday services.Just a thought
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The Final Piece of the Puzzle
weinerdog commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in The Final Piece of the Puzzle
Before I start not to be a nitpicker but in that note you left us I think you meant to write do a search for Geoffrey Chassen not a seard just thought you'd want to know.Congrats BTW This chapter was really heartwarming and you're right it's not going to be easy for Hunter and his mom but I think Hunter will remember Jaime's role in this and make this work eventually.His dad is going to die a miserable person. That breakfast casserole sounded great.I'm curious how different does Christmas morning boy sex smell compared to regular boy sex? -
I assumed that selling your kids would be illegal anywhere.But to find out that's it is an accepted practice in some countries that is F___d up.And the countries won't take them back?I'm trying to understand and sympathize with a family living in such poverty that they have to do something like that.But seriously if you can't feed em don't breed em.Don't mean to be so harsh but....
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I have never had a reason to use a butt plug at any time in my life so I know absolutely nothing about this.Many thoughts were running through my head as I was reading this.I was so relieved when Trent told Kayden he could take off the plug for bathroom breaks and showers.I even looked it up on Google people asked if they can poop with a butt plug and there were many responses with tips on how to do it.Who knew this story would be so..so...educational. Do I detect a possible beginning with Audrey and Ian Mark was a bigger a-hole than usual this chapter
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What Brad said to Beth was perfect.He may have other skills he's unaware of.
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Instead of hiding it under their seats like on Oprah they can hid it under their cocoon
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Plans to buy every kid his first car?Wow I was waiting for Brad to say he was kidding.But if he can do it and the kid earned it why not.Maybe he can make a deal with a dealership to have him buy all the cars from the same place every time in exchange for a price with 200 something kids they would have a revenue stream for a long time
