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  1. weinerdog

    Chapter 7

    šŸŽŠšŸŽ‰šŸ„‡šŸŽ†šŸŽµšŸŽ¶. Did I miss any?
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    Chapter 7

    Randy deserves to be dead for being felony stupid.After two bullets u-turn and hit him what did he think?That the third time a charm?DUH!!!!! Whatever you do don't tick off Tristan eh? So how many more enemies are left?
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    Chapter 3

    WHAT!!!!!!!😱.Just kidding lol.
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    Chapter 3

    As far as you know is the $750 mentioned would that be an accurate number?I guess it would depend on what state you're in.I can see a lot of people not being able to pay that what do they do then?Don't get me wrong the parents deserve it.Jeff had a really awesome dad so all his actions in this story are totally consistent. I just thought of this could Toby's parents show up at the hearing to try to undo the situation?Unrelated thought all your characters know their way around a kitchen how about about getting them all together for a huge pot luck lol.
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    Chapter 2

    Needless to say Toby's parents must have violated some law when they kicked him out so I guess James would have them sign some documents clearing the way for Uncle Jeff to be named guardian in exchange for not being reported to the police. If I have something wrong I'm sure somebody here will tell me.I hope the poor excuse for parents don't raise a stink when they go get Toby's stuff.BTW Uncle Jeff already I love that.
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    Chapter 6

    Great chapter.Only one small gripe. I know it's fiction but you should have made the year 2022 or 2024.I bet Margarat is a Cheeto supporter.You say the next chapter is going to be intense.Judging by you're standards of intense I'm scared.I don't take anti-anxiety meds but maybe I need to before reading the next chapter.Sorry @Wesley8890 I have to go somewhere I didn't have time to wait for you.
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    Chapter 1

    A good friend of mine and I would have this recurring discussion.He had a very negative view of people who commit suicide and often used harsh language to describe them he said they were taking the "Easy way out".Now if he was talking about an evil person who did a lot of bad things and it was catching up to him and he didn't want to face the consequences of his action I would agree in that case.But there are so many other cases where that's just not true.My friend says "Easy way out" well whatever happen to a person that brings he or she to that point it could not have have been easy they had to be in lot of pain.This situation is a perfect example.BTW we don't know Clair's husband name yet do we?Looking forward to see how this develops
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    Prologue

    There are something about these kind of stories that get to me whether it real life or a fiction story. I'm looking forward to this
  9. Then you're gonna love me.
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    Chapter 30

    Andy and Rich showing up just in time for dessert classic.Thank you for another awesome story.Whatever you do next I'm sure will be great but a possible future story could be a story centered around Andy and Rich when they get older and pay it forward as the saying goes.They can still be in touch with James and Nels who would only be too glad to help out whatever they do to try to help people..Just a rambling thought.Thanks again
  11. Just found this and binged read all this today not as easy as it sounds Looooong chapters.But I like what I'm reading I'm hanging around.
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    Chapter 29

    Excellent idea opening a gym.Having all the right equipment is over half the battle it should do well.Andy and Rich working there and getting free use of the place is awesome.
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    Chapter 28

    Sounds like a great trip.When Alan mentioned people taking pictures of the house from the road I hope he meant these people were taking pictures of the scenery and not of the boys in the hot tub Alan wasn't clear about that
  14. Wow this dead crow and red eyes etc.that is freaky.I'm loving Alex a lot and I respect that he doesn't want to replace Owen in the band. Now I want to see how Owen will react if Alex and Ryan show up at the same time
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    Body Count

    Another chapter and we still don't know much more but that's what a good mystery is.I'm going to guess that Zeke isn't law enforcement I've been wrong more then I'm right when I guess but I think if Zeke was law enforcement it would be revealed by now. Maybe he's been hired by a wealthy person who's relative was killed by this killer.We'll see If I look stupid later. Very disturbing that Tyler is holding on to that shard of glass. Very funny line"See not poisoned" "that's what you think"šŸ˜„
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    Chapter 27

    What a great trip. Three months on the road Alan and Cody must be at least 10-15 pounds heavier with all that road food. The kids not so much
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    Chapter 26

    Alan is every bit as important to the kids as Cody what if they have a honest disagreement about something to do with the kids future Alan would have no rights.Will we ever find out what happen to the bio-parents?
  18. Why do I get the feeling Jamie will let it slip to Silas what happened.As far as Jamie briefly thinking this might be a hoax.PLEASE!!let me be a victim of a hoax like that.
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    Sad News

    There is nothing to add to this except I will definitely add him to my nightly prayers and have him be mentioned at our Sunday service.People do come back from this so we can hope
  20. The stuff Jaime's parents said about Jaime being happy since he met Hunter tells me they know about Jaime and are supportive of him.Traditionally it's tough growing up gay in a hispanic family but that doesn't seem to be the case here.As far Hunter parents are concerned in addition to being bad parents they're morons.The Dad was the one who couldn't keep it in his pants and she was right there with him.If there is more too it like he forced himself on her then it's still isn't Hunter's fault the whole thing is f F--ked up.Why didn't the grandparent let them put Hunter up for adoption?OK I'll stop here I'm getting ticked
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    Chapter 5

    I could see why you would say that but I say let's give the whole story a chance it is fiction after all.BTW I didn't know cheese doodles were cra-cra
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    Chapter 25

    Can you describe what is in a Ploughman's lunch? I never heard of that.Don't care for pickled eggs though.Alan may have said it kiddingly but if Mrs. Brown could come on their next vacation that might be enough motivation for her to find a way for them to adopt James and Nels.Maybe technically illegal but who cares the boys deserve to be adopted.
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    Chapter 5

    Was that on purpose?To say Jesus and resurrection that wayšŸ˜…
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    Chapter 5

    Three chapters without a dead body?No way that was happening I bet you having withdrawals
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    Chapter 23

    You mentioned a city I am not aware of abroad Toledo I assume since you mentioned it right after Barcelona it is in Spain obviously not the one in Ohio lol.Make sure that they all get a Gyro when in Greece
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